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Blytz ā€” Two Halves

Published: 2004-08-05 05:48:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 12
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Description Look at me
And you will see
All the pain
And misery

It lays hidden
Deep inside
It plays me out
I cannot hide

You think Iā€™m whole
Iā€™m broken apart
Trapped in two
With just one heart

The happy face
Is just a mirror
Look closer and see
My broken interior

In truth my friends
It is how it should be
All the pain
That must stay with me

No one else
Shall carry my loss
The lord is whom I need
And will forever be my cross
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Comments: 22

bluefireangel25 [2004-11-22 21:52:24 +0000 UTC]

hella

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Blytz In reply to bluefireangel25 [2004-11-22 22:03:12 +0000 UTC]

hella thank you!

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Pyro-gold [2004-08-06 23:37:04 +0000 UTC]

You think Iā€™m whole
Iā€™m broken apart
Trapped in two
With just one heart

heehee thats neet.

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Blytz In reply to Pyro-gold [2004-08-07 03:52:59 +0000 UTC]

I like that one too. ........ stop stealing my fav lines on alot of my poetry!

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Blytz In reply to Blytz [2004-08-07 23:13:56 +0000 UTC]

it's just everytime you say what are you'r favorite lines, those are mine as well. Atleast most of the time. ^^

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Pyro-gold In reply to Blytz [2004-08-07 16:51:06 +0000 UTC]

?

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Inconspicuous54 [2004-08-05 20:06:54 +0000 UTC]

swank as always m'dear. props.

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Blytz In reply to Inconspicuous54 [2004-08-05 20:58:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you, I finally started writing something!

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splutterfish [2004-08-05 18:57:39 +0000 UTC]

wow... i guess we can all be slow when we feel like it, but not all of us can be as good of a writer as you are!! great poem!!!!!!!

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Blytz In reply to splutterfish [2004-08-05 19:00:50 +0000 UTC]

aww... thank you, you're really making my day. (okay, I'll stop answering your comments when you just send them!)

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splutterfish In reply to Blytz [2004-08-05 19:12:56 +0000 UTC]

i dont care.. answer my comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i demand you to answer my comments!!!!!!!!!

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Blytz In reply to splutterfish [2004-08-05 19:44:16 +0000 UTC]

yes ma'am!

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splutterfish In reply to Blytz [2004-08-05 19:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Dont call me ma'am.. it makes me feel old..

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Blytz In reply to splutterfish [2004-08-05 20:02:57 +0000 UTC]

well maybe you are OLD!

(you are d)

I'm so :busy: today... work work work.

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splutterfish In reply to Blytz [2004-08-05 20:04:34 +0000 UTC]

many tasks?

and.. i'm not old!!!! .. maybe YOU are!!!

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Blytz In reply to splutterfish [2004-08-05 20:46:15 +0000 UTC]

sigh no I mean the 'busy' emoticon with the guy writing down with alot of paper behind him.

... AM NOT OLD!!!!!

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splutterfish In reply to Blytz [2004-08-05 22:45:30 +0000 UTC]

.....
.... are too old ur a .. hehe
maybe i should call u nana faith...
hehe

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Blytz In reply to splutterfish [2004-08-05 23:31:08 +0000 UTC]

... how about... no. heheh

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splutterfish In reply to Blytz [2004-08-06 19:49:29 +0000 UTC]

.. how about.. ... yes..?...
..oosh.. i'm gonna go eat a .. they're so sexy!! ..

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Blytz In reply to splutterfish [2004-08-07 03:42:34 +0000 UTC]

Umm... not sexy more as... tasty. I mean why would you eat a nerd cuz they are sexy? I would eat one cuz they're yummmy!

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Blytz In reply to Blytz [2004-08-10 03:05:00 +0000 UTC]

..... huh...?

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splutterfish In reply to Blytz [2004-08-09 23:31:25 +0000 UTC]

nope.. i them with a cuz the are so sexy!!!

you see.. they're sexy enough to eat.. meaning that they're yummy...

mmmm... they taste like

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