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TheTriskelion [2012-02-14 01:12:35 +0000 UTC]
Starting out alright. Just want to say that "folding arms" makes me think of folding them together across one's chest, not bending at the elbow as Clara seems to understand. Obviously thinking her arms were in a different position than they were made the nest couple paragraphs a little confusing. X)
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Whyita In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 16:13:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, no problem :3 But I'm assuming there's not gonna be any kind of physical torture in this story, right?
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Whyita In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 16:32:51 +0000 UTC]
Darn...but still fun :3 Although they probably scared those kids XD
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bondagewriter In reply to Whyita [2012-02-12 16:34:43 +0000 UTC]
Did you want there to be torture?
And they didn't scare the kids, but they did puzzle them and worry their parents XD
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bondagewriter In reply to Whyita [2012-02-12 16:43:09 +0000 UTC]
XD Each to their own. I don't like torture, so I'm not likely to have it in my stories.
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bondagewriter In reply to Whyita [2012-02-12 16:53:47 +0000 UTC]
I will keep that in mind.
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bondagewriter In reply to Whyita [2012-02-12 17:12:32 +0000 UTC]
Only the girl will be tied up in this one. I'm not a big one for GiD.
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atfirstdawn [2012-02-12 12:37:16 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha, what a wonderful nightmare =]
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bondagewriter In reply to atfirstdawn [2012-02-12 13:08:12 +0000 UTC]
Lol, are you a sucker for happy endings as well?
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 13:10:32 +0000 UTC]
nah, i love downer endings, they make you think and leave more of an impression, i just wouldn't want her to end up in jail, who is going to tie her up in there? =[ lol
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 13:25:05 +0000 UTC]
Yeah =] What could be a bad ending for them will be a great ending for us with chances of sequels :-P thats why bondage literature is so awesome, its the only genre that treats us well =]
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 14:08:16 +0000 UTC]
Ah it should be a genre though =] i love it too much to overlook it, if you want some really awesome story driven bondage stuff, check out Anne Rice's Claiming of sleeping beauty trilogy its very good =3, shame no one writes like that any more =[
Can't wait for part three of this by the way =]
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 14:17:30 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thats why i've just created a group =3 now i have my own bondage/fetish/erotic one stop shop =]
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 14:25:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah thats the one, its pretty much just for all my watchers for now, they can upload anything they like from their galleries and meet the other people who watch me =3 new members will come later, my watchers/good friends come first =]
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 14:33:21 +0000 UTC]
They're pretty much true, i havent embellished much and in some i didnt change anything, they are my life, a motto of mine, well not a motto but something i believe in is 'you're only able to write what you know or feel for' i know my life and feel for my girlfriend so what better thing is there to write about =]
I've also had no training in writing 'properly' i did english in highschool and that was it. I joined dA and started writing here just to make friends who wouldnt ridicule me for being 'sick'.
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bondagewriter In reply to atfirstdawn [2012-02-12 14:58:42 +0000 UTC]
So... all those stories about Morgan are true stories? Wow... you've got a pretty good life, eh?
And you write very well for not having any proper training. I'm self-taught as well.
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 15:08:41 +0000 UTC]
I kind of think i'm owed the life i have now, i did the stupid thing really early in life (i was born with this fetish, its always been there) of letting people know what i liked. so all through my school days i was called so many awful things and beaten up because people thought i was a crazy criminal, then after so long of hating myself for what i was and what i liked and what i couldn't shake, my life started to get better i started to meet people like me and who were mature enough to let me be myself, and then eventually... morgan =3
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 15:14:49 +0000 UTC]
Yeah people tend to hone in on the different, they should just leave us alone.
I really don't want to revisit those days so i probably won't write a story like that. Though I have been with my Gf for about 4 years now so i have lots still to write between us, as well as the fictional things, Devil's Night needs a second part and my poor watchers have been waiting ages but i just can't get it right, it was such an important night and i'm too self critical, every time i try to write it i feel like i'm not doing it justice... i hope it happens at some point though...
Also thank you for the comments on my other uploads, i'll swing by them and talk to you in a little bit more detail about them when i'm doing clicking the confusing buttons in this group =3 i didnt know they'd be so tricky to get right.
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 15:25:25 +0000 UTC]
Morgan shares my page (under my screen name is hers 'VagueThorn' which would have been her screen name), im british, but she likes to feel at home (she is massively home sick right now which is why i have a featured folder for Rhode Island on my page and why i'm listed as being in the U.S on my page) so she just logs on here as me and sometimes talks to a couple of my good friends here, and faves pictures stories etc that she likes which is why i have so many faves.
She doesn't write and we dont like taking pictures of ourselves for pervs to drool over, she is quite good at art though and majored in it but we dont have any way of uploading her art so she didnt feel having her own page was necessary, and we only have the one laptop so we'd be logging on and off all the time.
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 15:39:53 +0000 UTC]
She'd tell you if it was her, she likes to talk to people here =] she likes that im eventually happy and able to make friends by being myself since she and vincent are the only ones ive really been able to do it with.
I know you didnt ask for pictures, i just mean in general, i dont even like looking at myself though so dA is getting nothing from me =]
She does abstract paintings on canvasses they all look really violent and have big scene breaking crosses over them, she'll spend ages blending the colours getting shapes and contours seemingly from nothing, just the flat colour until it looks like the inside of something then she'll just go crazy and destroy it, then say its done, she got quite high marks when she studied it, (american grading and i can't remember their names) but she doesnt paint much any more because she works and she'd have to drag her paintings out of the spare room where all our other junk is to take pictures of them, but maybe we will at some point =]
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 15:43:46 +0000 UTC]
I don't know, ive never been happy with the way i look, but then again i have really low self esteem apparently. there are pictures of me but i wish there weren't maybe you'll see one day i'll upload them privately for friends maybe. you never know =]
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bondagewriter In reply to atfirstdawn [2012-02-12 15:47:24 +0000 UTC]
I've met too many girls who say they're not very pretty that are really beautiful. Maybe if I give you an e-mail adress, you can send a few pictures to that adress? I have made an adress dedicated to this account a while ago, so I wouldn't mind giving it away to a friend (yes, I consider you a friend :3)
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atfirstdawn In reply to bondagewriter [2012-02-12 15:49:09 +0000 UTC]
Well instead of doing that i'll upload to stash on dA and send you a link =]
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