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booga — all will be well
Published: 2002-12-11 05:41:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 14
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Sall i cry one more tear?Do I need to say more?
I think not.
All the shit hit the preverbial fan.
In the end all is well.
Thank you
Why you ask.
For being you and so understanding.
Time will heal everything.
All will be well then.
Friends...
Absolutly
so thanks
i will say it again
Thanks....
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well, this seemed a little diffrent from the other ones, but still, real.
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Poetry is what you make of it. Some people use specific forms, some people don't. I go back and forth between following set forms to not. I love trying such forms for the challenge that arises. Though everynow and then I love putting my emotions and thoughts into words that do not nessisarily have a preestablished form but one of my own or lack there of.
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you know i thought that i had appologized for my inability to spell. thanks for the criticism but i still believe that poetry is very SUBJECTIVE and therefore i will continue to write it how i feel. especeally considering that emotions are a very personal thing. this act of writing is cathartic so i will do as i see fit.
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You broke rule number one. Check your poetry for spellings before you even think about posting.
Sall I cry one more tear
You need a lot more poetry in your poems. Poetry isn't expressing your feelings one line at a time, it's the use of beautiful words and poetic techniques to devise something that even surpasses the original emotion.
Keep writing.
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