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Published: 2003-01-30 05:25:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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If everything fell apartLeft to my own devices
I would hide behind my teddybear
Curled in a ball on my bed
Tear stained cheeks
A smile so rare
Hard to place on my disappointed face
Try to cheer me up
Go ahead
It probably won\'t work
I don\'t show my emotions just for anyone
You have to know how i am when i am all alone
All alone
No one to talk to
Waiting and trying to not cry anymore
Holding in my emotions
Not many people to tell this to
My problems are my own
I wish i could share
Tell all to someone but it just hurts
Too much
Back down the Hole
Perhaps deeper then i was
Leave me be
Let me cry
Be my friend little teddybear....
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you have such a control over the words in this. such control over the emotion. i really like the way that you brought the teddy bear in at the end. almost like no one is there to turn to, so you turn to something which has given you solace in the past. ive done that, i can definitely relate. check out some of my poems, perhaps you can find some relation there.
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I see within the dreamer's word
a kindred spirit true
And though you may find it absurd
I sympathize with you
When locked away in padded walls
my family sent gifts
To show support along with calls
between my father's shifts
Among these was a teddybear
I've not had one before
But at that point I didn't care
I couldn't ask for more
So when the voices in my head
would not relent their spite
til I curled up upon my bed
and cried myself at night
I clutched the teddy to my chest
and made myself a vow
It took some time, I did my best
to get where I am now
So just remember dreamer friend
fate is not set in stone
I stand by you til the end
so you'll not be alone.
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You have a great command for emotion in your poems, well done . Like my roomate said come over any time someone is around. Keep up the good work and goodluck.
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very well done. I like it, it had so much emotion to it. If you ever need a friend just come over and i will listen and lend a shoulder to cry on if need be.
§HEAVEN§
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nightrealm- you hit it on the nail. my stuffed teddie bear is my protection. esp when my friends are nowhere to be found...
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Nice writing... the second half really picked up..
I like how you used the teddy bear... somthing that maybe as a child gave you pleasure to play with or just be with.. and circumstances have changed the teddies purpose from fun to a guard...
well, thats how i see it..
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