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BookLyrm In reply to Cibbwin [2010-08-10 12:44:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so, so much!
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wh0rem0ans [2010-07-29 10:58:18 +0000 UTC]
Your writing flows beautifully.
There is a stark contrast between the character not being able to remove his hands and then sleeping well. That is my only curiosity.
It felt quite horrid to me, actually. And veryveryvery cold hearted.
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BookLyrm In reply to wh0rem0ans [2010-07-29 13:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for commenting!
I'm sorry/pleased that reading it felt horrid for you. Murder's not pretty, but I'm glad the feelings got across.
As for the contrast you pointed out, well, this was essentially the first draft. My second version turned the character from raging psychopath to usually good guy in a dire strait. My third version, which I just finished for the first time, is radically different--unfortunately, it won't be up for a few months yet.
Again, thanks for taking the time to comment! It's very much appreciated!
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wh0rem0ans In reply to BookLyrm [2010-07-29 17:16:00 +0000 UTC]
Whenever the description of violence is so real I can feel it, it is horrid to me. I once started some books about a witch who could get into the head of the abuser. That, too, was overmuch for me. Sensitives do not do so well with this stuff. I explain this to say you should not give so much weight to my opinion here.
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BookLyrm In reply to wh0rem0ans [2010-07-30 15:10:12 +0000 UTC]
Actually, I understand exactly where you're coming from. I have a hard time reading gory books and watching really violent movies. Even though I know they're not real, they disturb me much more than they seem to bother other people. I usually write scenes like this in one go to get them over with, and then I wonder how someone like me could write something like that.
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wh0rem0ans In reply to BookLyrm [2010-07-30 18:20:18 +0000 UTC]
Well, we all have a Shadow side that wants to be expressed in a safe way. Writing is safe. I wonder if you ever took the MyersBriggs test. I ask because I am compiling data for writing. This seems to be prevalent only among certain folks.
If you are curious you could use this simple version:
[link]
Also, I recommend you not watch either "Sophie's Choice" or "The Green Mile". They ahve each haunted me for years after I saw them.
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wh0rem0ans In reply to BookLyrm [2010-08-03 20:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I recommend one of the simple free versions actually. What did you think of the results?
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BookLyrm In reply to wh0rem0ans [2010-08-10 12:50:49 +0000 UTC]
Meh...so-so. I fit in about three different categories depending on the day and the description of the types. I kept forgetting which was my "official" MB ID!
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BookLyrm In reply to Kitri-du-Lac [2010-07-29 13:39:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for suggesting me! I really appreciate it!
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BookLyrm In reply to EliseOtterlei [2010-07-23 17:42:02 +0000 UTC]
Hey, thanks a bunch! Still loving the comic, by the way--I look forward to every update!
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