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borda — Opening The Gate of Myth
Published: 2011-06-30 21:53:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2855; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
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Now THIS is what I call an ID. I don't know you personally, but based on this picture, I can take a decent guess as to some of the parts of your personality. But that's not what writing a critique is about!
The first thing that stands out to me in this picture is the group of butterflies, obviously. The colors are vibrant and contrast to the earth tones of the rest of the image, which is good. However, your black sweatshirt stands out in stark contrast to the butterflies as well as the background, drawing my eyes away from the subject. If you were to raise the frame of the camera so that more of the sky is showing and less of your shirt (bottom could be the beginning of the forearm?) it would take the large blotch of black away and, though only a slight change, make a big difference to the viewer's focus.
I love it, though. It has been awhile since I wrote a critique and I'm in an analyzing mood. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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thank you, very good points!
I'll try to photoshop it, and make the sky higher, and work at the butterflies...maybe make it look more as a Caravaggio's painting
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I'm sure I'll see it when you're done!
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Love it! It reminds me of a show that got canceled. (It was my favorite for a while) It was called Kings.
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I knew who you were capable of doing this... The magic flute.
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