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Published: 2014-11-07 22:20:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1169; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 2
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Autumn 757

Blackwood, Ridgeback Range
Featuring Brutus and a scary white witch

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It was a good day to be a Blackwood.


A big cougar had been prowling the Blackwood side of the Ridgeback Range and had started to take a liking to tender fawnling flesh. Brutus had been chosen to go flush it out and perhaps discourage this kind of behavior in the future by way of killing it dead.


He wasn't the best tracker in the ranks but it didn't take an expert to smell fresh cat piss. The ranker it was, the fresher it must be and the fresher it was the closer the cat must be. Brutus had the advantage of being able to crush most things before they got close enough to kill him and thusly he'd been chosen for the job.


Hauling his tremendous bulk up the mountainside wasn't easy but he'd had plenty of practice. He'd tagged along with scouts and raiders from time to time, to see what it was like. Glenmore, at least, was a magical place overflowing with food and Brutus couldn't wait until Blackwood claimed its lush riches for their own. For now he had to settle for stuffing his maw as full as possible any time he had an excuse to range over the mountain.


One rocky slope at a time he huffed and thrust himself forward and up. The paths up here were no better than goat-trails, if that. Even in the chill alpine autumn air he was sweating now, his matted fur probably smelling near as rank as the bold cat if he'd bothered to care. So what if the cat smelled him coming? He welcomed a good fight.


He stopped to catch his breath and grinned a big open-mouthed grin. The cat had been here, and recently. Brutus crouched carefully and peered out around the valley before him.


There was movement- a streak of light- but it weren't no cat.


It was a doe?


Brutus let out a grunt of confusion before he pulled back behind the safety of the rockface. What was a doe doing out here?


Turning his head he saw her flash past- fast as a shooting star, and near as bright. Her ghostly white hair streamed behind her like a knot of albino cobras all rearing to strike.


Who was that? He'd never seen a doe so tiny or so bright. If she managed to live out on the treacherous mountains she must be a powerful witch indeed! 


Was she chasing the cougar? That must be it. She was a powerful witch and she was chasing the cougar out of her territory. Brutus leaned closer to the rockface, glad his hide blended in with the shadows so he wouldn't be spotted from afar. He hoped she didn't have some sixth sense whereby she would know that he was intruding too. 


He crouched, tucked his tail and held his breath for several long moments before he dared peer out around the rock again. Was she gone? She seemed to be gone. He didn't see no sign of the cougar either. She probably cornered it in one of the little blind valleys and killed it for daring to intrude. 


He gave it another half-hour, just to be sure, before he crept out of his shadowy hole and tiptoed back down the mountain. When he failed at moving silently he decided it was better to move quickly and made the rest of the trip at a slightly-too-fast-for-safety jog.


Once he arrived safely back at his unit he reported that the cat were probably dead and never spoke of the matter again.


Wordcount: 565. Brutus be a derp.

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Comments: 35

Tigglesaurus [2015-07-05 19:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Still hilarious

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bovidaeloony In reply to Tigglesaurus [2015-07-05 20:24:36 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Dream-Lark [2014-11-17 14:41:56 +0000 UTC]

This made me giggle so much. Oh, Brutus <3

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bovidaeloony In reply to Dream-Lark [2014-11-18 00:22:40 +0000 UTC]

I think I'm going to have a lot of fun with him XD

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DatNachtmaehre [2014-11-10 19:17:03 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDD

OMG I laughed so hard when I was reading this. XD

She is scary Brutus, she's the most dangerous doe on the entire isle, she can blind an armada of Oakies and regrow a tree at light speed with a single blink of her eye. Better hide as long as you can.

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bovidaeloony In reply to DatNachtmaehre [2014-11-11 00:16:43 +0000 UTC]

Buahaha thank you  

When you put it that way she really does sound terrifying XD

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DatNachtmaehre In reply to bovidaeloony [2014-11-11 11:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh I forgot the she can make kingdoms fall apart by simply brushing her sparkly butt pass a guard's chest. xD

I bet one day in the future Nu will be a ghoststory you scare little blackwood and oakfern fawns with.
If you are naughty the swan ghost will come and bath you in her light. Fawns that have been bathed into her light have never been seen again. They disappeared with her into her realm where they need to serve her for all eternity. *shivers*

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fulociraptor [2014-11-08 13:23:23 +0000 UTC]

His perception of these events are hilarious. Good job, I had a good laugh.

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bovidaeloony In reply to fulociraptor [2014-11-08 14:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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PinkLionArt [2014-11-08 12:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, this is perfect!

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bovidaeloony In reply to PinkLionArt [2014-11-08 14:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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PinkLionArt In reply to bovidaeloony [2014-11-08 16:16:49 +0000 UTC]

Youre welcome

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DodgerMD [2014-11-08 08:07:31 +0000 UTC]

HOLYSHIZN THIS LADY IS SCARY!
I totally understand Brutus, I also would be scared of that tiny terror! D:

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bovidaeloony In reply to DodgerMD [2014-11-08 14:25:57 +0000 UTC]

In a world where everyone is huge and dark seeing a tiny little white thing that isn't a ghost would probably be a little unsettling XD

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DodgerMD In reply to bovidaeloony [2014-11-09 08:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I totally can relate, I mean, it looks like a ghost, but isn't. There obviously is something wrong here! Charon would compliment Brutus on his deduction. ;3

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AK-Outstanding [2014-11-08 02:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh!! I'm a fan, I am soo a fan. 

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bovidaeloony In reply to AK-Outstanding [2014-11-08 03:56:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad people like him XD

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AK-Outstanding In reply to bovidaeloony [2014-11-08 04:11:37 +0000 UTC]

8D You create such wonderful characters how can we not adore them???

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bovidaeloony In reply to AK-Outstanding [2014-11-08 04:16:22 +0000 UTC]

Daww thank you I noticed that Blackwood had an abundance of scheming schemers and a dearth of followers so I thought it might be fun to give that a go XD

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AK-Outstanding In reply to bovidaeloony [2014-11-08 04:20:11 +0000 UTC]

XD He is awesome. 

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Banrigh-Fian [2014-11-07 23:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, poor Brutus, you big lug.
LOL I just love his point of view

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bovidaeloony In reply to Banrigh-Fian [2014-11-08 03:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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okami02 [2014-11-07 23:39:52 +0000 UTC]

lol omg ooooh Bruts XD Oh Dear big, silly Brutus *pats him*

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bovidaeloony In reply to okami02 [2014-11-07 23:44:57 +0000 UTC]

So silly XD

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SkullOfAnubis [2014-11-07 22:27:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is such an interesting point of view! I'm surprised I haven't seen many like this, where two fawnlings unknowingly cross paths. This was great to read!

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bovidaeloony In reply to SkullOfAnubis [2014-11-07 22:36:43 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thank you! I wanted an excuse for Brutus to run away from the least scary doe in all of TWI and it just so happened that she'd already made her way through BW  

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SkullOfAnubis In reply to bovidaeloony [2014-11-07 22:48:51 +0000 UTC]

That's perfect. And shows off his personality so well lol. I love how you wrote the way his point of view would be, and the way he would naturally speak given his slower mind.

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decors [2014-11-07 22:27:11 +0000 UTC]

hehe...awesome tie-together

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bovidaeloony In reply to decors [2014-11-07 22:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Tigglesaurus [2014-11-07 22:26:34 +0000 UTC]

BEWARE THE NUNUDERP, MY SON! THE MANE THAT BITES, THE HOOVES THAT FLAIL!

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bovidaeloony In reply to Tigglesaurus [2014-11-07 22:38:34 +0000 UTC]

I have a feeling ten years from now Nu may be a ghost story that BWs tell their children

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Tigglesaurus In reply to bovidaeloony [2014-11-07 22:56:01 +0000 UTC]

Leaving mauled cougars and charred bodies in her wake
 

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LibertyBelle [2014-11-07 22:25:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness!

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bovidaeloony In reply to LibertyBelle [2014-11-07 22:39:01 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't resist

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LibertyBelle In reply to bovidaeloony [2014-11-07 22:41:51 +0000 UTC]

It's brilliant!

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