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Published: 2008-10-17 01:55:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 817; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 25
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Almost finished! Just the hands need work.. maybe the ribbon too, and another highlight layer . hmm perhaps some more jewellery .. oh dear, perhaps itβs not so finished haha. Hope you like itRelated content
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This image has been featured in my journal this week HERE
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you have a beautiful gallery!!! I love the colour used in this piece!!! 
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I agree, the hands seem off, especially her left one. And I'm not too sure about the shading you've done on her chest. Right now it looks like she has really small breasts (which might be the case, I suppose, except that then I think we'd see a bit of her nipple peaking around through the ribbon). Her collarbone is doing something funky on her right shoulder, too.
Of course, you are much better at anatomy than I am, so I might be wrong. And these things are very nitpicky; I really like the piece. Your colors, as always, are lovely, and I enjoy the texture on that ribbon and the shading around her right eye.
I'm excited to see the final piece!
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Thank you, itβs great when you get another perspective on thing especially anatomy. I noticed the collarbone in the morning when I took another look at it, but I couldnβt quite put my finger on what was happening with her right breast. Serves me right for never getting round to painting during daylight hours, or before midnight. Lol, but comments like this are really why I upload unfinished work.
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You're welcome, and I agree; it is very easy to get sucked into your painting and not notice the anatomy issues, because you're so used to looking at it.
Do you know about conceptart.org? They are another website, in forum form, that tends to be more geared toward getting feedback and improving your art style, etc.
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