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Published: 2003-11-09 03:49:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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i purge life from my skin searching for a reason to survive this cutloneliness is an incurable disease flowing through my crimson vinegar
i am forsaken
leave me to sleep in candyland
that of which we live among children and find no broken people
and wake me up to darkness
encase me with shadows
medicate me with your drugs in hopes i will be covered with your false emotion
my addictions remain unreleived
they move on
and i sit here listening... tell me...
where can i possibly go from here?
from nowhere i will remain here
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Comments: 28
Not a waste of time. Simple, to the point, and very poingent. (I'm not sure that I spelled that right)
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Waste of time my butt...
You write very well; this is no different.
I hope things get better in a permanent fashion.
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thnx but i seriously doubt it
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woah...strong emotion. But that's how I like 'em. Hardly a waste of my time (especially when I should be reading for History
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that last line particularly is so emphatic, I love the way you alter emphasis with different ways of placing the text, its so effective and is becoming an important part of your style - keep at it!
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I'm a pro at wasting time but this quite an enjoyable waste of it, good work as usual
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you know...you REALLY love to put the word 'skin' in your work, did you pick up on this lol
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umm.. i dunno.. i didn't realize that i did it
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"Only the lonely" sorry, singing Roy Orberson
I have a question for you, some people think you should never judge a person from what they write, i think thats a load of bull. Whats your opinon on that satment?
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well it depends on if they write how they feel... sometimes i just write and it isn't what i feel ... but most of the time i do... i wouldn't say that you should judge a person by what they write but you can learn alot of what kind of person that they are...
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Good point, you could be writing from someone elses perspective.
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well...its short...but i love the pure emotion that you put into it
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yeah it is short... but thnx
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nice work,hey can u write songs?coz im lookin for some lyrics
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umm.. yeah i do write songs... lol
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yay!i tried to write em but i dint like my own poetry,i can sing n play tho
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waste of time my ass. great work, especially the typography at the end.
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