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Published: 2005-12-30 03:41:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description what do i do with this now?
this ever-gleaming wastebasket i have become
my mind turns bitter
tasteless like the ashes of my heart

of me a single person can tame
but alone i fear the sight of my own skin
my aging bony hands
with thin brittle nails
scraping at my own flesh

this pathetic lonely
eats away at my bones
i'm slowly crawling out of my skin
but it follows
creepingly along
reaching for my toes just to envelope me

my blood escapes
but my skin stays
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Comments: 7

TheblankPoet [2005-12-30 09:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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brandi-dawn-777 In reply to TheblankPoet [2005-12-30 15:28:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you..

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uselessflowers [2005-12-30 06:59:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm feeling alone too. You expressed it well good poem

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brandi-dawn-777 In reply to uselessflowers [2005-12-30 15:28:40 +0000 UTC]

thnx ..... sorry...

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uselessflowers In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2005-12-31 03:37:36 +0000 UTC]

don't be, feeling lonely is good sometimes (I guess... )

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brandi-dawn-777 In reply to uselessflowers [2005-12-31 22:00:08 +0000 UTC]

i can't see how.... but everyone feels it sometime in their life.... so you're really not that alone.... there are so many lonely people... it's hard to understand sometimes

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uselessflowers In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2005-12-31 22:02:07 +0000 UTC]

yeah, isn't it ironic how self-absorbed we get sometimes? Cause feeling alone is su stupid because there's at LEAST one other person feeling the exact same way, lol. People are really really dumb sometimes

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brandi-dawn-777 In reply to uselessflowers [2005-12-31 22:07:05 +0000 UTC]

people are always dumb.... lol... of course it is in our nature to be self-absorbed.... most people don't have anyone else other than themselves.... how can they not be?

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