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Published: 2006-02-26 05:26:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Listen as the dove sings
Hear it scream
Hear it scream
Watch as the dove flies
See it fall
See it fall

The tears are streaming
as the dove is bleeding
And everyone falls
as the bird dies

Tigers linger in the village
Children run
Children run
Fairies fly all around us
"Fairies aren't real"
One more dead

The Tears are streaming
as the bird is bleeding
And everyone falls
as the bird dies

Porcelain girls are on the swingset
See them fall
See them crack and bleed
Hearts are beating oh so quickly
Love is Hate
and they brake

The tears are Streaming
as the birds are bleeding
And everyone falls
as the bird dies
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Comments: 14

chaostheroyalknight [2006-03-02 04:40:42 +0000 UTC]

such sadness but good poemness

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bratgirl9232391 In reply to chaostheroyalknight [2006-03-02 05:17:49 +0000 UTC]

thanketh you-eth

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chaostheroyalknight In reply to bratgirl9232391 [2006-03-02 16:56:44 +0000 UTC]

your welcometh

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PoetsAttemptedMurder [2006-02-28 02:47:41 +0000 UTC]

We can write music together!

Seriously, if we ever have the chance to hang out, we can work on this, like you and I can sing or just you can sing, and I can write and play the music on the guitar!!

: )

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bratgirl9232391 In reply to PoetsAttemptedMurder [2006-02-28 03:25:42 +0000 UTC]

lol. I am not much of a singer so....haha....I donno. Maybe. .

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PoetsAttemptedMurder In reply to bratgirl9232391 [2006-02-28 05:25:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes you are.

You have an awesome voice!!

We will sing TOGETHER!

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bratgirl9232391 In reply to PoetsAttemptedMurder [2006-02-28 05:35:07 +0000 UTC]

lol. fine.......meanie

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fizzletto [2006-02-26 17:07:33 +0000 UTC]

-_-;; That's all I got yesterday " Don't say fairies aren't real because every time you say that, one dies!! " From one of my best friends, carla. and I got news for her; FAIRIES AREN'T REAL.
Anyway, to the point; Great poem!

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bratgirl9232391 In reply to fizzletto [2006-02-26 18:00:14 +0000 UTC]

haha. funny. And thank you

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fizzletto In reply to bratgirl9232391 [2006-03-01 13:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Yup No problem

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candykiss10290 [2006-02-26 06:41:50 +0000 UTC]

This is so...so...Amazing....

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bratgirl9232391 In reply to candykiss10290 [2006-02-26 16:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very very much. And thank you for the fav.

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blurryxxmasterpiecex [2006-02-26 05:57:51 +0000 UTC]

reminds me of peter pan and uhh that one jungle movie.
lol
and birds.

great job though.

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bratgirl9232391 In reply to blurryxxmasterpiecex [2006-02-26 15:59:51 +0000 UTC]

thankies

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