Comments: 68
mousedapple3300 [2016-04-18 22:30:07 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CLIFF HANGERS!!!!!!!
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dillionworrell [2015-11-19 04:19:06 +0000 UTC]
noooo of course not hehe *looks down*
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Ballman64 [2013-04-22 16:38:20 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work, looks absolutely wonderful.
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amandaam [2013-04-13 04:49:02 +0000 UTC]
this story is so awesome!!
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MoralShifter [2012-10-04 02:26:34 +0000 UTC]
Nooo.... mehehehehe...dohohohoho.
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Mungostar [2012-09-24 23:53:50 +0000 UTC]
Why are you making Rainbowdash lezbean??
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Mungostar In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-09-29 17:55:35 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you drew though. But I think if Rainbowdash fell in love with a Wonder Bolt it would be more exciting
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R3A50N [2012-09-24 11:58:29 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't a fan of this pairing... I am somehow now converted... should I thank you? I should definately praise you for making me wipe my eyes after reading the past pieces~
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to R3A50N [2012-09-24 23:16:57 +0000 UTC]
wow!! Im so glad! THanks :>
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R3A50N In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-09-24 23:22:42 +0000 UTC]
you know what. thank you very much I simply edored your work
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Happy-Adopting [2012-09-07 06:19:53 +0000 UTC]
I've never really liked MLP, not since I stopped being six, that is. But you know, this might make me be a fan again. Or at least, take a second look. The artwork is cute, and your writing is engaging. Good job ^_^
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SkunkWitch [2012-08-12 05:27:14 +0000 UTC]
I knew it, fluttershy loves Dash back
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Wildfire-Rose [2012-07-14 09:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Btw... I LOVE IT!!! ITS FANTASTIC!!! cant wait 4 the next part!
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Wildfire-Rose [2012-07-14 09:39:12 +0000 UTC]
WHAT DID SHE SAY? u just gonna leave me hangin???
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Thejboy88 [2012-07-14 08:08:33 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Cliffhangers. My old nemesis. We meet again.
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RAINCLOUD33 [2012-07-13 19:51:27 +0000 UTC]
" But not as beautiful as the mare next to me. "
I had a really Dumb moment when I read that and though "what Mare?"
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Mrchill78 [2012-07-13 18:52:53 +0000 UTC]
man you really like to tease us dont you jk lol cant wait for the next part! man and as a personal note i felt really atteched to how rainbow dash felt in all of this cause strangely enough ive gone through the same thing! kinda creepy how much it is alike to me but man i love it! X3
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Gryffinz [2012-07-13 18:23:44 +0000 UTC]
If you don't update today. . .
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PatRoison [2012-07-13 17:07:21 +0000 UTC]
A very nice FlutterDash story. I can't wait for the next part.
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TheHorsePainter [2012-07-13 15:04:38 +0000 UTC]
Oooooh, i love how fluttershy looks at Rainbow ^^
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8loodyrain [2012-07-13 14:46:21 +0000 UTC]
Then she said something I thought I'd never. Ever. EVER hear: lets do it!
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DranKito [2012-07-13 14:45:58 +0000 UTC]
Although I enjoy the pictures and the story itself, I do have to make one gripe. It seems you selectively pull context from the show. Particularly in this one where Rainbow's explanation to Twi is completely off base since RD and Fluttershy grew up together and Twi's curiosity seems misplaced since the two pegasus ponies have been shown in the show to do things on their own often enough. But yeah, otherwise, enjoyed reading it so far!
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to DranKito [2012-07-13 15:31:11 +0000 UTC]
Ah thanks for the critique! This is my first fanfic so there might be so flaws :[ but thank you for pointing them out to me! I will keep an eye out next time~
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Droso [2012-07-13 14:05:02 +0000 UTC]
That cliffhanger! UGH it's painfully well done!
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RaenBoow In reply to Droso [2012-07-13 18:20:50 +0000 UTC]
INDEED!!
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UltimateBurrito [2012-07-13 14:04:10 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD SOBBING
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EthanBlu [2012-07-13 12:59:59 +0000 UTC]
First thought
[link]
Then I rememebred Rainbow Dash has wings....
and THEN it was all like
[link]
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Rothkind [2012-07-13 12:30:37 +0000 UTC]
at first i was like Friend zone
but then i cliffhung
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Alkemy14 [2012-07-13 08:09:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh my...
I'm not a deviant stories reader, but I have all the previous part of THIS story behind me right now.
Because I'm polish, I don't understand some words, so... I have fun with reading and I'm also learning new words. ^^
I have to know what Fluttershy said. @ @ Just have to.
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lemuractionnews [2012-07-13 07:55:03 +0000 UTC]
MORE PLEASE OH GOD MORE.
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FinalFormX [2012-07-13 06:50:37 +0000 UTC]
MORE. MORE, MORE, MORE.
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ds2096 [2012-07-13 06:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaaargh, forget all this shipping nonsense, what happened to the BIRD?!?!?! Was he OK? Did he make it? You can't leave me hanging like this!
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Eminsama [2012-07-13 06:00:28 +0000 UTC]
CLIIIFFHAANGER curse you!
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0mnil0rd [2012-07-13 04:57:45 +0000 UTC]
OMG NOOOOO! What a place to leave off! Adorable story btw. So cute!
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Gryffinz [2012-07-13 04:56:54 +0000 UTC]
Love this one, might be my favorite chapter/picture yet.
And when she said "what am I to you?" I couldn't help thinking of the song from Adventure Time, if you've ever seen it. For a show as strange as Adventure Time, it's really actually a nice song.
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