Comments: 124
SatynaPaper [2015-10-31 15:23:42 +0000 UTC]
So sensually!
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catz537 [2013-09-19 17:51:15 +0000 UTC]
you might actually make this my top OTP ._. that was adorable
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chloe7044 [2013-08-09 17:48:17 +0000 UTC]
Wow
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odycay12 [2013-07-06 01:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Amazing Job
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amandaam [2013-04-13 19:01:51 +0000 UTC]
im happy for them both but rainbow dash is giving up her dream but i happy for them.
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sokom64 [2012-11-30 01:50:57 +0000 UTC]
You fail the test? i don't understand?
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acetheawac In reply to sokom64 [2015-05-11 02:34:51 +0000 UTC]
I know this is three years later but... it was a test to see if Dashie would say where her heart was. She lied about it. Rainbow Dash said she was happy without the Wonderbolts, when deep down she wasn't. In a relationship, you need to let your significant other chase thier dreams, because they have them. Even if they need to leave for a while to do it. If you really love and trust them, they will come back to you.
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PancakeTurtle [2012-11-10 05:02:44 +0000 UTC]
I was so scared that RD was going to leave. So, sweet! I wish boys/girls would be like that in real life. No offense
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MoralShifter [2012-10-04 02:08:37 +0000 UTC]
Ha. Duty.
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Crisnanegab [2012-08-31 19:51:47 +0000 UTC]
Perfect!
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Insanity-Ensues [2012-08-31 00:05:59 +0000 UTC]
So cute together! If they don't start dating again by the end of the story, I will be sad. Very sad.
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EthanBlu [2012-08-30 15:22:15 +0000 UTC]
Rainbow dash...Can I ask...a question?
What makes you happy? I wonder...what makes you happy...does it make...others happy, too?
(Link for the curious/confused: [link] )
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CrystalRobot [2012-08-28 01:36:41 +0000 UTC]
Awww.. that is so sweet
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gabyamaris [2012-08-27 16:17:49 +0000 UTC]
can you post the link to the first page please?
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BritSpearsArmpit [2012-08-21 20:11:55 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic! :3 Looking forward to the next one!
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nordic92 [2012-08-21 15:54:28 +0000 UTC]
D'awwwwwwwwwww. This story. Just plain amazing.
I can't wait for the next one :3 (Well, literally, I can, but you know what I mean )
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luckyluna14 [2012-08-21 02:19:57 +0000 UTC]
bronies rule the world
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Dragunlord13 [2012-08-20 20:59:16 +0000 UTC]
nuuuuuuuuu...
whywilitendsad?yurajerk...godie...youkilledme...fckoff...ihateyou...diediediedideidieiieidedeideidiiediedieideidieideidie...
ihateyou.../fave
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GarethJason [2012-08-20 04:55:40 +0000 UTC]
Great story! after this one i immediately searched for the next button and i was like "where is it, where is it!" and i looked at comment dates. Cant wait for more!!!!!!!
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GarethJason In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-08-20 06:15:19 +0000 UTC]
Hooray! Thank you for this awesome story!
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A-Therianthrope [2012-08-20 03:32:43 +0000 UTC]
I feel like "that much more hard" should be "much harder" to preserve parallel structure. In the same sentence, I think Applejack should be "Applejack's".
I have this problem where I want this story to go on forever because I like it, and I want to know how it ends so I have closure, at the same time.
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to A-Therianthrope [2012-08-20 05:38:08 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, this will actually go on for a long while :,oo
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KittyVel [2012-08-19 15:44:16 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait for the next chapter! X3
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Baffelball [2012-08-18 08:42:36 +0000 UTC]
This is the best story ever, but from the intro, and the end of this chapter, I'm guessing there wont be a happy ending?
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shilvicthehedgehog [2012-08-17 23:37:57 +0000 UTC]
aaaww good things like this always come to an end.
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HaloFanNate [2012-08-17 19:27:25 +0000 UTC]
Very second line, breathe should be breath.
Also, dat waterfall.
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HaloFanNate In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-08-21 05:23:40 +0000 UTC]
Looking closely Dash's cutie mark looks a bit weird. Not lightning bolt-like enough. Get what I mean?
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to RaenBoow [2012-08-18 18:35:07 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry..it will make sense soon!!
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