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ToxicHolyGrenade [2017-05-15 10:52:06 +0000 UTC]
At least this story was non-canon, although this story is indeed intense.
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catz537 [2016-01-25 02:04:06 +0000 UTC]
At the very end..instead of saying Halloween, say Nightmare Night. They don't have Halloween xD
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TheTypicalFanatic [2014-03-24 01:08:35 +0000 UTC]
"Wheeeeeeeeeeeen you go!Would you even turn to saaaa-eyy-ayyy,'I don't love you like I did yesterday'?"
Sorry,couldn't help myself.
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MayRothwell [2014-03-16 21:52:32 +0000 UTC]
NOOO DAMMIT DASH!!
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kildeez [2014-02-12 01:15:15 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's the most moronic reason for breaking up with someone I've ever read, seen, or heard, ever. And that's including that one Viking chick who divorced her husband for going shirtless too often. Seriously. This is like setting yourself on fire to avoid the possibility that a sniper might be camping outside your house.
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NyxMareMoon In reply to BlueBrony13 [2013-08-27 02:59:10 +0000 UTC]
FUCK OFF YOU STUPID ASSHEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TT__TT
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dante0525 [2013-03-09 00:13:02 +0000 UTC]
GODDAMINIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!!!!!!!!
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monicaponylover [2012-12-04 02:15:34 +0000 UTC]
wow this is a good story...so far
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Brightshadow72 [2012-09-12 00:20:21 +0000 UTC]
May I use this please? it will be for a PMV, but I will credit you.
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eviltwilightplz [2012-09-04 23:22:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm truly not surprised. The coward had it coming for a long time anyway.
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eviltwilightplz In reply to AnimalAnimeFan [2013-01-23 17:21:09 +0000 UTC]
Both...but mostly Fluttershy. Let's face it. We've all been putting up with her running away for too long now.
So, it's natural that one, including myself, would give up on her and leave her to do what she does best; run away.
Wherever she runs off to is none of my concern. But, one thing for sure, she'll soon have nowhere to run to. Thus, she'll realize how pointless her running was all this time.
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AnimalAnimeFan In reply to eviltwilightplz [2013-01-23 20:26:00 +0000 UTC]
hmmm. well Fluttershy is naturally like that, she has also proven to be brave many times on the show. i know what you mean though.
when people talk about Fluttershy, i feel like they are somewhat talking about me XD because she is so much like me. so i kinda got defensive there. but i do see what you are saying.
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eviltwilightplz In reply to AnimalAnimeFan [2013-01-24 01:32:32 +0000 UTC]
No...I know as well as she does that her toughness is nothing more than a pathetic façade. Ironically, it doesn't make her look tougher than she really is. It just proves her weakness all the more.
It's worthless vermin like her that are responsible for the weakening and destruction of Equestria's society.
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AnimalAnimeFan In reply to eviltwilightplz [2013-01-24 03:14:11 +0000 UTC]
uuh. isn't that a bit harsh? Rainbow Dash isn't so tough either you know. just look at how she trembled when she was about to enter the Best Young Fliers competition. and Applejack beat her by far in the Iron Pony competition they started. all of HER "strength" is in her wings and her act. maybe she THINKS she's tough, but i don't think she really is at all.
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eviltwilightplz In reply to AnimalAnimeFan [2013-01-24 21:59:11 +0000 UTC]
Not all of it...She, at the very least, had strength..But she still isn't strong enough...
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PuffyDearlySmith [2012-09-04 21:25:28 +0000 UTC]
Can't say I like this development, I can't buy Fluttershy thinking so lowly of herself that she believes she's holding Dash back by being together with her. The Wonderbolts probably aren't active the whole year and their performances can't be that far away from Ponyville and Cloudsdale, she and the rest of the mane six could easily attend them and still stay in contact with Dash and when the bolts go off tour they'll have all the time in the world to spend with each other. And Glida is just a complete piece of shit, I'd bet the farm she's lying about being the manager of the bolts and this a scheme to screw up Dash's life.
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HaloFanNate [2012-09-04 19:50:31 +0000 UTC]
"she put her hands to her chest"
"her hands"
HANDS.
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HaloFanNate In reply to EthanBlu [2012-09-08 20:06:22 +0000 UTC]
Are you implying that she was wearing those as she was talking?
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EthanBlu In reply to HaloFanNate [2012-09-08 22:58:11 +0000 UTC]
Nope, just the first Lyra pic I could find.
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HaloFanNate In reply to EthanBlu [2012-09-09 06:35:13 +0000 UTC]
Either way, it was funny.
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DolphinBuster [2012-09-04 18:50:32 +0000 UTC]
Wise choice, Rainbow.
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Ninjashot37 [2012-09-04 11:45:57 +0000 UTC]
Ha... sorry had to do that don't know why anyway I've been speculating on this whole matter and I just have to say they are both oblivious idiots but I assume that's just me being me I felt like typing this and saying "I have an answer" but don't want to type it down... meh that's just me. Couldn't resist sorry for the waste of time
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BritSpearsArmpit [2012-09-04 11:31:21 +0000 UTC]
Both intense and sorrowful. But, as always, it is well balanced and crafted into a beautiful symphony of love and heartache. Bravo, as always, my friend.
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Astarhawk64 [2012-09-04 08:06:52 +0000 UTC]
I think maybe Gilda got to Shy, her being there at that exact moment is, well, a little too convenient.
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mck0027 [2012-09-04 07:41:50 +0000 UTC]
Daily updates, I could get used to this.
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NintendoGal55 [2012-09-04 07:39:42 +0000 UTC]
Okay, so there's sympathy on both sides. But moreso on Rainbow's part since it's actually in her point of view. You can see where Fluttershy is coming from, but at the same time, there's something else in there. O.o I feel it. And now both of them have made mistakes, but what Fluttershy did was inexcusable. So I can definitely understand Rainbow Dash getting angry and yelling at her, which honestly, I think she deserved that. It's not fun and I don't wish it on her, but she did need to be called out on her actions. Maybe Rainbow WAS a little rough on her, since it's Fluttershy and all, but her anger was understandable.
Fluttershy, you love her. Plain and simple. Kinda.
So now Rainbow Dash is joining the Wonderbolts... :< Well, she needs to right now, if for nothing than to just get away and think about things on her own.
I still look forward to how it all unfolds. :'3
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FlutterDash367 In reply to NintendoGal55 [2013-02-28 22:39:32 +0000 UTC]
The first bit, 'Maybe Rainbow WAS a little rough on her'
I could agree with that but not really. Fluttershy sorta deserved it. She ended a beautiful relationship that I wanted to find out what would happen to it but NO! She had to be such a slut.
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uninc4life2010 [2012-09-04 07:14:37 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, I can't see how you can date somepony for a year, be intimate, call it the best year of your life, and still be able to say you aren't attracted to their gender. How? It doesn't make any sense, there has to be something fluttershy isn't telling us.
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Thejboy88 [2012-09-04 06:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Please tell me you're not planning to split them up permanently.
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joeyh3 [2012-09-04 06:20:29 +0000 UTC]
Awww, my heart! They both need a hug! From each other!
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stjonal [2012-09-04 05:55:19 +0000 UTC]
it was gildas fault all along...
...go figure...
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TheBeckmanator [2012-09-04 05:26:35 +0000 UTC]
And this is why I don't want any woman.
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Darthsylar12 [2012-09-04 04:09:30 +0000 UTC]
I love how you made both sides equal parts sympathetic. It really adds to the tragedy hear, that both of them have reasons their right but its those reasons that have driven them apart. I also like how your portraying Gilda, I'm fan of her character (deploys umbrella) and though I usually don't like seeing her in a villain role, I still like the way you write her. I look forward to the next step in the story. Now if you excuse me, I have to weep heavily... Why must you make me have such feels!
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hellobobbyman [2012-09-04 04:02:06 +0000 UTC]
after this i honestly think that their relationship is heavily forsaken
but who knows?
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gunnar121 [2012-09-04 03:43:09 +0000 UTC]
Uuh, fluttershy doesn't have hands... does she?
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ComposerOfMoonlight [2012-09-04 03:19:11 +0000 UTC]
I smell a rat, and it's name is Gilda.
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