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KyonChu [2019-05-20 11:38:46 +0000 UTC]
Related to the story and feel touched so thatβs a thing that happened. ..cute art good writing
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MissShirisaido [2018-03-06 18:32:59 +0000 UTC]
Messages:
Dad: Why tf you crying so damn loud
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RenardPrower [2014-01-23 04:23:34 +0000 UTC]
On second thought... I can't. I just can't do it.Β
I enjoyed the story...for a while. But I've never had much of a stomach for extended sadness, and this just takes the cake in that department. Seriously, Fluttershy has some kind of metrosexually-confused, chronically depressed, schizophrenic nightmare shit goin' on. Meanwhile, Dash firmly sets her mind on allowing her lifestyle to change so she can be with the one she loves. And then the whole thing just goes to shit and...it reminds me too much of a personal, real-life experience... I can't finish this.Β
The art is great. I'll certainly keep at least a few of these pieces in my favourites...but I can't bear to finish the series. As much as it kills me to drop something before it's finished, I'm just too much of a puss to finish it off. Sorry.Β
Thanks for the entertainment while it lasted.
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amandaam [2013-04-14 23:09:18 +0000 UTC]
i wish she never ever went rainbow. i know that she just wanted to make rainbow happy but that was messed up on what she did but as she said its for the best.
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captainggkitten [2013-01-10 18:41:01 +0000 UTC]
I wish I was that angel so she could just cry all over me.
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DarkMoonRaven [2012-12-30 00:43:57 +0000 UTC]
Great art, but I don't think it's right that they're lesbians :/
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Niklas123dk In reply to DarkMoonRaven [2013-04-28 00:46:23 +0000 UTC]
That what YOU think, if someone did round-up every thing each person hates on this planet, and plus it together (to one person), the universe wouldn't exists by that person opinion.
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Cyclone-Dusk [2012-12-07 08:34:41 +0000 UTC]
I've been looking at this beautiful art more than the text, but I've been looking at the text occasionally too.
... There are a lot of fics about rainbow dash betraying her element, the element of loyalty,
but I never put much thought into the idea of the element of loyalty HERSELF getting betrayed.
That's what happened here, of course. The biggest thing Dashie had to offer the world was her loyalty, and Fluttershy spat it back at her. I love how seriously you handle the consequences of that momentous blunder. People don't have an appreciation for drama anymore. Everybody thinks of drama as a drawback, as an obstacle. Not so here. This is the refined agony of despair, and it's *beautiful*...
This is excellent work, and I'm extremely pleased to have found it.
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K-irby64 [2012-10-07 15:58:04 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! I've just received my free minecraft giftcode!
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pepemacho [2012-09-23 23:39:31 +0000 UTC]
man, am I the olnly one to believe Fluttershy's been a bitch the whole story?
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NatachaP [2012-09-21 08:54:25 +0000 UTC]
Sweet. x}
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cutetoboe [2012-09-11 19:54:37 +0000 UTC]
Have to hold back the tears..!
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ceremus [2012-09-06 04:52:33 +0000 UTC]
You know, after giving this some thought an interesting thing about this scenario is that Fluttershy could hardly have picked a better way to devastate Rainbow. Even though we know she meant it as a kindness. (ah-ha!)
I don't think it's right to assume that there would be no way to work out a relationship between Fluttershy and RD if she became a Wonderbolt, but let's presume that's the case. When Dash says she's OK with giving up being a Wonderbolt in order to be with Fluttershy, she's not exaggerating, and it's not something she's just saying short-sightedly and will come to regret later. It's completely in her character to be loyal to a fault. We see this in the 2nd episode. Dash is offered her dream of being a flight captain (putting aside the fact that she'd never heard of a "Shadow-Bolt" and it was fake), and she turns it down outright in favor of helping her friends. Without hesitation, without second thought or regret. We seem to see many examples of Dash's brash and and impulsive nature, but this is also something that is core to her character. If she's willing to make those sacrifices for her friends, making sacrifices for someone she loves would be second nature to her. For someone to say she should sever her relationship in order to pursue her own desires... it's anathema to her. It's the opposite of loyal, she likely can't even process that.
And then this is something Fluttershy doesn't necessarily see, her timidness and lack of self assuredness in this context leads her to believe someone as "cool" as Dash wouldn't want to remain with her. It's an interesting way to play the characters personalities and weaknesses against each other.
Anyway, not sure if you were thinking of these things when you were writing, but I thought it was interesting to think about. Keep it up!
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sokom64 In reply to ceremus [2012-11-30 09:12:41 +0000 UTC]
Its so cool how comments like yours complement and make me understand more deeply the story.
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ceremus In reply to sokom64 [2012-12-02 19:33:48 +0000 UTC]
Haha, well I'm glad you found them helpful! Just my musings on how their personalities might conflict here.
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TonyTehBrony [2012-09-06 04:48:15 +0000 UTC]
I have so much confusion in my brain right now that I can't understand it! Why did she have to do that?! I DON'T GET IT!
I love this story and from the point when she broke up with RD, I was crying my eyes out. I hope things get better, but I feel that that is not going to happen in this story. I anticipate the next chapter!
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tallon567 [2012-09-06 04:21:22 +0000 UTC]
If this doesnt have a happy ending ill probably cry and cut myself... But this story is still awesome
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derfurshur [2012-09-06 03:12:11 +0000 UTC]
I must say you're killing my FlutterDash feels, I'm still holding out hope for a happy ending, but even if I don't get my idealist ending this is still a good story
Also like everyone else has said it's nice to see things from Fluttershy perspective for a change.
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uninc4life2010 [2012-09-06 00:53:41 +0000 UTC]
I feel like they could've made their relationship work even with dashie doing the wonderbolts. But still, fluttershy, how can you be in an intimate relationship with somepony for over a year and way your aren't attracted to them?
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Liam9787 In reply to uninc4life2010 [2012-09-06 15:56:02 +0000 UTC]
".. even with DASHIE DOING THE WONDERBOLTS"
Yeah they definitely could make that work ΰ² _ΰ²
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MagicWolfSpirit [2012-09-05 09:49:28 +0000 UTC]
Fluttershy...please don't cry!
I love u...Fluttershy!!I believe in u!!
Eheh...great job ^^
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Thejboy88 [2012-09-05 07:24:40 +0000 UTC]
RD and Fluttershy should be together! You should be ashamed of yourself!
Oh, and it was a nice fanfic, very well-written
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Dooddale [2012-09-05 05:46:50 +0000 UTC]
*spends all day doing College Homework, Tests, and Presentations*
*Gets home at night and checks D-art watches*
*Finds 2 new chapters*
*Screams in agony about not being able to sleep until both are read*
All and all, I love your work my friend!
You keep me up at night...in a Good way! XD
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Liam9787 In reply to Dooddale [2012-09-05 18:57:56 +0000 UTC]
LOLWUT.
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Ninjashot37 [2012-09-05 05:26:42 +0000 UTC]
I've got to say that I have an answer to this predicament and that both parties are being stupid I wonder if their friends will figure it out
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GarethJason [2012-09-05 05:21:51 +0000 UTC]
I dont know what i could say here but wow this is a really touching story i can't stop reading. I don't think any other story out there could top this one. This is by far my most favorite fanfic i have ever read.. CAN'T WAIT FOR MOARR!!!!!!!!!!
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Eevora [2012-09-05 04:26:04 +0000 UTC]
XDXDXDXD Favourite chapter so far XD
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marcusfenix102 [2012-09-05 03:24:49 +0000 UTC]
This is one of the rare moments where I would want to slap Fluttershy. Even though Fluttershy is my favorite pony, I just can't help but be mad at her. Love hurts eventually. Even if you break up eventually, I would rather have a ton of good memories than just cut it short. just argh.
Either way, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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amandaam In reply to marcusfenix102 [2013-04-14 23:19:18 +0000 UTC]
:anger: i wanted to slap her too, but then she started to say that rainbow dash was her favorite pony friend but she kinda screwed it up though because you know and she should of just said that she didn't have the same feelings for her. i feel the same way right now. why didn't she go back to rainbow dash and sorry and hug her. it would have been better.
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undead-feline [2012-09-05 01:15:05 +0000 UTC]
damn it flutters >:I
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DolphinBuster [2012-09-05 00:57:38 +0000 UTC]
Nice to see it from Fluttershy's eyes for once.
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to asluc96 [2012-09-04 22:24:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it~ :>
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PellucidDescartes In reply to JeffKingofGravy [2012-09-05 01:42:13 +0000 UTC]
Well, have you learned anything from this yet? Hasn't this taught you the right and wrong thing to do in this situation?
If you need advice, the internet is here to help.
If you don't want help, we understand. But if you do,
just ask, we're here. Bronies stick together.
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JeffKingofGravy In reply to PellucidDescartes [2012-09-05 01:45:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. It does mean alot. Fortunately, we're managing to keep the friendship intact, I believe.
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AXL6533 [2012-09-04 22:04:18 +0000 UTC]
for the love of all things fluttershy get theme back together mate its tearing me apart
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Omenseer [2012-09-04 21:57:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh, at first I thought this about having to put Angel down.
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Backjack-Kitsune [2012-09-04 21:52:04 +0000 UTC]
great writers think alike i was figuring this was coming now let's see where you go with it ... will you continue to pour on the drama or will you lax? i know what i would do but that's me and i await to see your responce to this
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Bread-Crumbz In reply to Backjack-Kitsune [2012-09-04 22:10:17 +0000 UTC]
The drama after this point will sort of diminish not completely as they have to sort of go through the process of 'moving on' (if we can call it that.) but there wont be much more crying and tears and yelling anymore. Moreso them trying to get used to life without eachother :3
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GarethJason In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-09-05 05:23:11 +0000 UTC]
nuuuuu dont give it away!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Backjack-Kitsune In reply to Bread-Crumbz [2012-09-04 22:13:50 +0000 UTC]
interesting... i can't wait to see what you do next but what ever it is i'm sure it will end just the way you want it to....unless rush ...then i expect a train wreck
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zaiali [2012-09-04 21:50:07 +0000 UTC]
I have to say bread crumbz: you gotta work on the story. I mean just saving them from future pain is not enough of a motivation to actually get fluttershy to break up with her. Because we all know how patient fluttershy is, she will be willing to wait for RD to come back from the wonderbolts and what have you.
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BatLover800 In reply to zaiali [2012-09-04 22:14:15 +0000 UTC]
Well one of the reasons Fluttershy broke up with Dash was that she believed the relationship was unbalanced. Rainbow Dash was giving her shit up just to be with Fluttershy, and that included her dreams to become a Wonderbolt. And Fluttershy felt that was unfair on Rainbow Dash, so she just decided to end it. And while yes, Fluttershy is patient, Rainbow Dash would probably have to devote a crapton of time just to being a Wonderbolt, and probably wouldn't have a whole lot of time for Fluttershy anymore.
We haven't exactly seen Fluttershy in a canon relationship, but I believe that Bread Crumbz got her actions within one down nicely. I imagine that Fluttershy would be insecure and unsure of herself, and yes, she would be paranoid of the future in a sort of pessimistic way. The way that she began feeling unsure about their relationship, and how she wasn't attracted to mares felt very realistic to me. Because yes, breakups over future assumptions do happen. And I feel that this portrays it well. c:>
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zaiali In reply to BatLover800 [2012-09-04 23:46:45 +0000 UTC]
Opinions everywhere! I respect yours.
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