Comments: 63
idislikecake In reply to ??? [2014-06-22 03:38:46 +0000 UTC]
This is a fanfic...
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MayRothwell In reply to ??? [2014-03-17 16:45:04 +0000 UTC]
It's Fluttershy, as described in the description :3
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youwhang [2013-05-26 02:40:59 +0000 UTC]
Ahh...... Need next story...arrrgh
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uninc4life2010 [2013-05-24 05:12:32 +0000 UTC]
You should definitely give us an update with this one!
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abilin [2013-05-23 04:00:12 +0000 UTC]
Woahhh you haven't written in a while >.< Omgg, really want to know what happens next. Please update soon. This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read xD
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SlyTheWolf [2013-05-19 19:45:12 +0000 UTC]
more!!!! MORE I TELL YOU!!!!
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raziel1981 [2013-05-17 10:52:00 +0000 UTC]
You simply must continue this, you must , you must, you MUSSSST
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LordColgate15 [2013-05-17 05:23:39 +0000 UTC]
why does rainbow look dead in the picture?
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That-0therguy In reply to LordColgate15 [2013-05-18 22:00:07 +0000 UTC]
Have you not been following the story, she died along time ago
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Solar-speed [2013-05-12 22:31:31 +0000 UTC]
Awkwaaaaard.
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siathedragon [2013-05-10 10:16:58 +0000 UTC]
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!!!!!!!! this gonna be great!!!!!!!!!!!!
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gunnar121 [2013-05-07 12:41:27 +0000 UTC]
I really miss this series.
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Niklas123dk [2013-04-29 11:30:23 +0000 UTC]
Patience everybody, patience, patience is the most deeply powerful thing in all of the universe particles and atoms an... Okay uhmm...
Whenever you see this comment and feel like reply, can you then tell when the next page come out approx. Thx.
Sorry my English isn't that well.
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BurnyStuff [2013-04-25 22:44:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm afraid to say I've resorted to checking this daily. I really can't wait for the next one. Please hurry and keep up the good work!
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Akamalu [2013-04-22 15:38:55 +0000 UTC]
HURRY AND BRING ON MORE!!!! PLZ!!!!
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Hai-im-mia [2013-04-22 02:48:50 +0000 UTC]
MORE!!! 😜
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amandaam [2013-04-16 04:43:38 +0000 UTC]
Please continue the story this is the best story i have ever read!!!
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FlutterDash7979 [2013-04-06 04:40:55 +0000 UTC]
When is it gonna come this story is awesome and intertaining!!!
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monkey-bubbles191 [2013-04-01 19:53:23 +0000 UTC]
i love this story i come on everyday just to see if the next part is up <3 this is great
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Mirmring [2013-03-28 09:09:20 +0000 UTC]
I love all of the story so far, you're great, and keep'um coming. No seriously, I am shaking with anticipation here. Even though the mood has been bitter sweet lately I can only say that at that last line I was wiping tears from my eyes but still smiling. They finally reunited and the action was perfect. You have definitely got a fan here and I'll be waiting for the next chapter, but no rush. I can wait for this.
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InsanityCorps [2013-03-28 04:30:17 +0000 UTC]
And then she drops and is near dead, Fluttershy realizes how much of a slut she's been and tries to make amends. Then Cuntmuffin and Asshole McGee come along and ruin EVERYTHING! THEN NOPONY IS IN HAPPINESS AND THEY BOTH KILL THEMSELVES!!!!
The End :3
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Arctic-Wolf13 [2013-03-23 21:44:45 +0000 UTC]
Usin my brothers profile
It is sad that rainbow has a moment she has been waiting for and something has to ruin it.
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kurteth [2013-03-22 16:30:08 +0000 UTC]
I must say, I have read this whole story in basically one sitting. And honestly? I am in awe. You have a gift in portraying emotion. Now, yes, these are ponies. But the psychology behind each decision, each doubt, each feeling, each regret, each explosion, everything, is spot on with the human condition. This is true art, in the sense that it shows what love can be, and often is. But more importantly, it shows what humans are. It shows them at their deepest level. You must keep writing. Perhaps not this story, or even in this genre, or MLP. But you must keep writing. The world would be a lesser place if you did not let your talens grow, and create.
I look forward to more work from you.
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LunaCarya [2013-03-21 06:15:28 +0000 UTC]
No! Cliffhanger again!
Everytime that RedRobin appears, it irks me. Whatever he does to Fluttershy sounds like rape. I can't wait for the story to advance and him to fade into oblivion.
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xdlover9977 [2013-03-20 03:06:16 +0000 UTC]
Why u let her go dash, if only u know how redrobin treats her,if only u know
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Dark-Bolt-27 [2013-03-19 21:58:41 +0000 UTC]
Sooo good! I must have more!
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DolphinBuster [2013-03-19 21:19:52 +0000 UTC]
"You mean your, nobody nothings from that hick town??"
Elements of Harmony. Saved your rump more than once bitch.
And oh my gosh...that cliff hanger.
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David-Irastra [2013-03-19 21:13:13 +0000 UTC]
oh cammon!
the things are like in the void..., gee, i want to see the next part... but icant wait...
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fasa004 [2013-03-19 09:51:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh, the cliffhangers!
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Backjack-Kitsune [2013-03-19 07:42:37 +0000 UTC]
downward spiral:
I thought i had reached it
that point of tru serenity
that point where all would go well
and nothing would happen to me
but as i reached up my hoof inches from
that bliss that continuesly escaped
i hit a wall
a wall with a familiar name
this wall looked at me
tears swelling in both eyes
i felt the chain of reality grab me
and rip me from the sky
now i find myself in that same place
flailing agianst this gravity
this relaity
only pleading through my insanity
that how could fight this destiny
how could i bare seeing her with out me
but as i see it
this must be my arival
realizing that no mater what i try
if i succeed
how i lie
i will always be caught
caught in this down ward spiral
never stop following what you believe in
never lie to your heart
do what you love cause you love it
no other reason
so follow your path and walk it with confidnece
from one artist to another
known only as the dark sith
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Gryffinz [2013-03-19 02:16:30 +0000 UTC]
Reading this while listening to the To The Moon soundtrack. What have I done ;_;
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fotreidi [2013-03-19 02:08:11 +0000 UTC]
i LOVE THIS!!!!!
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PancakeTurtle [2013-03-18 23:13:27 +0000 UTC]
RAINBOW, YOU ARE AWESOEM, SHOW HER THAT
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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zaiali [2013-03-18 21:29:44 +0000 UTC]
GAH DAMN IT! WIN HER BACK RAINBOW DASH! DO IT!
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khanage94 [2013-03-18 20:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Mr. Crumbz again you have left me with feels, I congratulate you very much so, and I now leave you with one thing, FINISH IT I MUST KNOW IF THEY GET BACK TOGETHER!
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AnimalAmelia16 [2013-03-18 17:27:52 +0000 UTC]
Wow!!!!! :0 I can't believe it that is a real cliffhanger!!
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lemuractionnews [2013-03-18 12:14:35 +0000 UTC]
So glad that you are making new chapters!
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tycad355 [2013-03-18 10:18:26 +0000 UTC]
Something tells me this is going to have something to do with Rainbow Dash being exiled at the beginning of the story. I seriously hope there's more to the story than just ending where we began, I can't get enough of this!
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