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Published: 2015-09-20 23:51:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1299; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 0
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NEW VERSION HERE !!I think I have a Tokyo Ghoul:re obsession
!WARNING, SPOILERS AHEAD!
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It seems to me that Haise is not a completely new personality; he's just what Kaneki would be like if he'd never become a ghoul/been tortured/gone through all that shit.
So it's like he locked his memories away but they're all still there, lingering in the back of his mind. They're a grasp away and that's why Haise is able to remember some of Kaneki's memories (like "Nishio senpai"). After all, Kaneki has created other personalities to keep his sanity before (Rize).
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I have a Tokyo Ghoul obsession also >u< -completely skips rest of description because I haven't read RE- WHEN WILL THE THIRD SEASON COME OUT DAMMIT D:
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You should read :re! It's pretty good, albeit a bit confusing 
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Oh man, you did a really nice job with this!! the expression and emotion are really visceral and expressive. I'm actually going to disagree with that other comment a bit -- i really like the slightly sketchy lineart, I don't think it takes away from the image at all, it's clear and it looks purposeful rather than messy, and i think it actually adds to the emotion. Same with the hair, i like the painted quality of it. the shading is also very nice!
the thing that is most distracting to me actually is the placement of the text. it's a little unintuitive to follow, with the way it zigzags across, i had to stop and check to make sure I was following it correctly, instead of just smoothly reading it without having to think about it. Placing the words a little closer to the center horitzontally while spacing them out a bit more vertically I think will make it easier to follow the words down the image. I also think the background is a but muddy, and has too many midtones? if it had either more lights or more darks, with the figures contrasting -- either light figures on a dark background, or dark figures on a light background -- i think that would help them not compete with it so much. Backgrounds are definitely a pain when it comes to finding the right balance of interesting, but not distracting. :') (this is a nice explanation of environments vs backgrounds that is def a good thing to think about. and this one , while not really relevant to this image, is also super helpful and has some good points. Oh, and a good one on composition too, for good measure, that might help you decide on placement next time when it comes to things like the text and leading lines.
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I appreciate your honest feedback a lot!
The lines are indeed sketchy on purpose but at first I intended to make them really neat but as I was defining the initial sketch more and more I began to like it and didn't want to draw clean line art over it and erase it
You are most likely right about the text. It's a little too much. I'm not used to adding text to my drawing but I really felt like I needed to add text to this one for it to be complete. I guess I just did it the wrong way then. I should have indeed trying to place everything near the center.
Yes, I used SO many colors for the background! I think I just really wanted it to look like blood and it ended up looking like a real mess. But I think it kind of adds to the feeling of confusion and being overwhelmed. I should have definitely made it darker though!
Thank you so much for the tutorial! I always enjoy reading the good ones but they're hard to find
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(wow this reply is so late, sorry bout that haha)
yEAH finding good tutorials is rough!! i try to link some good ones whenever i can, esp when i feel like i'm not explaining something well, haha. and i've got a decent backlog i've collected, so might as well share! there's usually at least some small thing to be learned. even if it's not what the tutorial intended, or is a kind of what-not-to-do sitation :') but tutorials have helped me out tons in the past.
haha stuff gets away from me all the time and i end up wishing i'd just stopped earlier, so i totally sympathize. i def need to get better at having a stronger gameplan going into something, and then sticking with it TuT we can do it!!
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I agree with everything you've said! I too have the bad habit of not stopping when I should (as in, I keep adding unnecessary details that only weigh down the final work)
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i get so focused when i start and completely lose track of my initial plan a LOT of the time, ahaha... part of that is that i don't draw very strong thumbnails and sort of try to re-work it as i go (extra effort!! and usually not successful, lol) but gesture drawing and thumbnailing scenery photos help a lot with that. (i should go do some of those, actually, i haven't in a while....) BUT YEAH quick, simple things with a strong impact are so difficult.
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Yes! Planning ahead is the key! BTW, I took into account your comments (and those of the other commenters) and redrew this piece 
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oh man yeah, the composition especially is a huge improvement!!! nice nice nice
i really like the colors in this one, too.
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Thank you
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Hello! I'm here for ProjectComment !
This fanart is amazing! I really like it, your anatomy is very good and the two faces are just so expressive! You did really a nice job ^^
I want to suggest you to try using a less sketchy lineart, try to make lines cleaner, it would really improve the impact your art has on the viewer! Also, this might be a matter of taste, but I think you should draw the outline on the hair as well, instead of just painting them, I think it doesn't go too well with your thick lineart, at least in my opinion!
Another thing is that I think the colors of the background are too many and too muddy, you should have tried just using a bright blood red and black or white, I think it would have made a cleaner effect ^^
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your honesty
Now, to address your points:
the lineart is actually sketchy on purpose because I wanted this to look a little messy
I think you are right about the hair! I should have outlines them because the faces are outlines and so the hair looks kinda out of place! I wasn't sure what was wrong until I read this so thanks
I suck at making backgrounds because I mostly draw traditional art and don't add any background at all. I'm not used to this and I wanted the drawing to look scary and bloody so I guess I went overboard!
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His expressions are so intense... Kaneki/Haise needs a break, man ;-;
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