Comments: 23
LyokoMala [2011-02-17 03:13:24 +0000 UTC]
OMG, that was awesome! I love how you rhymed the last and third to last lines...also since it relates to Code Lyoko. Props, you deserve it! ♥
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LyokoMala In reply to BriteStarRobot [2011-02-17 21:06:12 +0000 UTC]
The bolded words are the ones you rhymed. Sorry if I'm acting like a weirdo, maybe I'm too much of a Code Lyoko fan..xD
All snug in your BED
And rest your sweet HEAD
The cradle he SWINGS
She hears what he SINGS
Her eyes wide and BRIGHT
Until morning LIGHT
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MistressDizzy [2007-04-23 02:46:48 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely adorable. I could actually picture Jim all paternal, holding baby Sissi while he rocks her back and forth...
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resembles [2007-03-21 03:12:45 +0000 UTC]
Aw.. my parents used to sing that to me when I was little.. its very cute.
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erikamisha [2007-02-17 20:32:17 +0000 UTC]
Omigosh, BSR, this is the most beautiful piece of poetry you ever wrote!! May I draw a picture to go along with this, please? *faves*
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WarriorofLight [2007-02-17 02:33:48 +0000 UTC]
That's so sweet ! ^.^ Marvelous job !
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Blueyedblonde [2007-02-16 23:54:52 +0000 UTC]
Love it ! <3
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