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Description DULAC DRAK’UL©
6 FT 9 INCHES

The self proclaimed ruler of the Dark Metal Aage, though there are many who dispute this claim.

Of the 400 men that master Jinzu slew in the land of Eraq [formerly Iraq]
Dulac is the only one who survived, barely.

Terribly wounded and surrounded by the bodies of those Jinzu slew, he survived
by cannibalism and an indomitable will, not revenge as some would believe.
The experience transformed him body and soul and his appearance grew more grotesque,
resembling more of a human bat than a man.

Yet his spirit was as stronger as ever.

The tremendous flow of chi in the sands of Eraq gave him the power to control
the blood of others or completely drain another body of it to sustain himself.
To do this, all he needs is a single drop of blood from the other being to touch his hand.

The victim need NOT be alive.

It took many years, but one by one, Dulac raised the men slain by master Jinzu.
Afterwards, he and his army became death to any village or province in their
way toward conquest. Along the way, he was smart enough to take in certain beings of power.
All were children at the time, their family slain by Dulac and his army.
Each child was brought under his control and each see him as a savior.
In time, each child grew strong and became trusted lieutenants of his dark army.
In time, Dulac finally felt it was time to confront master Jinzu.

Well aware of the cyburai order that protected their master, he laid out a battle plan.

The plan consisted of a fake army of people he had slain from different villages.

Expendable warriors that would allow the cyburai to be drawn out into a
stretch of land in Asia East. The land itself emanated an energy that acted
much like an electromagnetic pulse upon anything electric.
Immediately, the cyburai lost function of their artificial limbs.

In many cases, their sword arm.

It was at this point that the true army of Dulac, rose from
the ground and surrounded the warriors. The cyburai were all slain,
and each sword was claimed by a member of Dulac’s army.
Armed with the strongest metal in existence, Dulac and his army
destroyed the school and Dulac himself slew master Jinzu.

With the death of the cyburai, Dulac and his army laid waste to the eastern
provinces that were long protected by the sons of Jinzu. Having finally exacted
revenge upon the man that almost killed him, Dulac turned his attention back
to the west and then Asia East became a barren land.

With the death of the cyburai, word quickly spread of Dulac and his army.

The lands of the west, what was once the Americas, were all on guard for
Dulac’s imminent arrival. Largely used to small provinces and villages,
Dulac and his army were surprised to find that the lands of the west would
not be so easily conquered. The cyburai of asia east had a weakness that
he exploited, however, this was not so with the diverse states of the west.

However, slowly but surely, one by one, the states fell to Dulac’s
army, and soon, Dulac ruled much of the west.

During the middle of his campaign, the winds themselves whispered
word of a prophecy. “A sun of the east” would change the world.

Dulac could not allow this to happen, however, there was no one in
Asia east to challenge him, he had seen to that. There was only one
other east it could be, the city of New Brooklyn.

It was said that when the earth released its energy upon man,
there were places in existence that were blessed more so than the others.
Places where the amount of chi was far more abundant thus strengthening those who lived there.
New Brooklyn was one of these places. Every inhabitant was powerful
and then there were the elite of Brooklyn who were the strongest by far.
It was possible that together, these elite could defeat even his army.
To make matters even more difficult, new Brooklyn was a domed city.
The dome was built to keep invaders out and the chi in.

There was no way for Dulac to storm the city, so he devised a plan to take the city from within.

Dulac offered a challenge to any one of the elite of Brooklyn.
A match that would take place directly out side of its city.
The elite were full of pride and all wanted a chance to fight the dark lord.
In the end, it was a young warrior named Bilat, also known
as the Ghost Dragon©, who was chosen to meet with Drak’ul.

The two fought, and Dulac feigned defeat.

His opponent walked off, barely noticing the small scratch he
received from the match. Dulac had thrown the match,
just to get close enough to draw blood.

Once the young man re-entered the city, New Brooklyn was doomed.

The ghost dragon poisoned and killed each and every one of
New Brooklyn’s finest and allowed Dulac’s men to gain entrance into the city.
All the inhabitants of Brooklyn were put to the sword, the only one left
was the defiant king of Brooklyn, Master Kelly. It took the combined
ability of Dulac and the ghost dragon to defeat the king.
New Brooklyn was now Dulac’s and so of course, the power within it.

But it was not to be.

Dulac found that the chi of Brooklyn only strengthened those from the land itself, no one else.
Dulac had the city destroyed and it was Tytane©, the god of strength,
who used his weapon to destroy the now weakened dome.

With New Brooklyn gone, Dulac gained an even larger hold on the lands of the east.
A huge citadel was built and the state of what was once the state of New York , was renamed Avalon.
This would be the dark lord’s central command. With much of the world conquered,
save for a few remaining states, Drak’ul directed his attention to deep meditation.

Questions plagued him….
What of the prophecy? Did he stop it?
The Dark Metal Blades of the cyburai, do they hold a secret power?
Once the world is conquered, what to do with it?

Much to his dismay, each question had the same answer; Time.
In time he will know all.

The present, finds the dark lord almost into his second century of age.
His martial skill perfected, he now draws chi energy from the earth to sustain himself.

This has had drastic effects upon the land.

The lands close to Avalon, have very little life and the skies are dark.
The other lands he has conquered have already been drained of their
energy so there are many dead lands across the world. His power makes
him very much a powerful parasite to the living earth, and after so many years,
the ground of the earth shakes again as many quakes pull apart the land.
If Drak’ul is not destroyed, the earth will perish.

Drak’ul could care less.

His children have grown older, and despite his control of them, after so many years,
There is some dissention among them. The word of this has spread to the remaining states,
and there is word of a mounting offensive against the dark lord and his army
by the remaining states of l.A., the southlands, and the Monks of Portuland ©{formerly Portland}
if these states band together, they well outnumber Dulac’s forces.

Again, the dark lord could care less.

The only thing Drak’ul concerns himself with is the prophecy.
The being known as the “New Sun.”

After living off the earth’s energy for so long, Drak’ul is privy to many things upon its surface,
and he knows this being, that would seek to destroy all he has built, still treads upon it.

DRAWN WONDERFULLY BY ...


CHARACTER / STORY CONCEPT
BY TEHRON FREEMAN
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Comments: 14

Funderful [2007-11-12 17:16:12 +0000 UTC]

You need more credit.
Awesome.

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BROOKLYN73 In reply to Funderful [2007-11-14 06:59:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you my friend
credit is given to god for my bit of talent

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saintfighteraqua [2007-11-07 01:04:40 +0000 UTC]

What an awesome design. Looks really evil.

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BROOKLYN73 In reply to saintfighteraqua [2007-11-09 02:43:05 +0000 UTC]

we try

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mathematix [2007-10-29 01:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Blazing!!!

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BROOKLYN73 In reply to mathematix [2007-10-30 00:39:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you on fire indeed!

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mathematix In reply to BROOKLYN73 [2007-10-30 00:55:22 +0000 UTC]

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Wezuvius [2007-10-28 20:36:49 +0000 UTC]

now thats a dark lord. nice one by dex

hes an evil fucker this guy eh? the closest comparisons i can pull are like the evil guys in He-man and conan and stuff. But with a more adult theme, great job on the synopsis once again

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BROOKLYN73 In reply to Wezuvius [2007-10-28 22:02:42 +0000 UTC]

THANX MAN.

TRUE ENOUGH, WHEN I CREATED BK'S FINEST I THOUGHT ABOUT ACTION FIGURES, I THOUGHT THE KIDS WOULD GET A KICK OUT OF THE CYBURAI. HAVING METALLIC ARMS AND SWORDS AND SHIT. TIME WILL TELL. BEST THING TO DO FOR A PERSON IN MY POSITION IS TO QUICKLY MANIFEST IDEAS AND COPYRIGHT THEM. THE TERMS CYBURAI, NEW BROOKLYN, CHARACTERS LIKE THE GHOST DRAGON, DRAK'UL {OBVIOUS TWIST OF VLAD THE IMPALER HIMSELF}
THESE CHARACTERS HAVE BEEN COPYWRITTEN FOR A WHILE NOW BY MYSELF. I FELT THE CARTOON , CONCEPT HAD POTENTIAL AND I MADE SURE TO PROTECT MY IDEA. BUT I DO THAT WITH ALL MY STUFF. ITS A HEADACHE, BUT WITHOUT THAT PIECE OF PAPER FROM THE COPYRIGHT OFFICE..YOU CANT GO TO COURT. YAH KNOW?

I TELL YOU THIS THOUGH, I HAVE ALWAYS SAID YOU WERE SMART AND YOU HAVE PICKED UP ON SOME OF THE ESSENCE OF THE CARTOON. THE OLDER CARTOON ELEMENTS..DYNAMIC CHARACTERS WITH WONDERFUL POWERS, YET A BIT OF DEPTH TO THE ENTIRE WORLD OF IT. IT TOES THE LINE QUITE A BIT..NOT ADULT, NOT CHILD..IN THE MIDDLE..THE WHEN YOU LEAST EXPECT IT, IT GETS ADULT AND FUCKS UP THE KIDS MIND!!!

HAHAHHAHAHAH!!


PEACE MAN

T

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Wezuvius In reply to BROOKLYN73 [2007-10-28 22:21:08 +0000 UTC]

I like it! these kids need a scare these days.... all there cartoons are drained of the true essence of cartoons which dissapeared whilst i was growing up... WE NEED TRANSFORMERS BACK... the orginal transformers with "its prime time" ! YEAH! He-man was freaking awesome when i was a kid, now they show random cartoons that spawn crap jokes... wth is that. No wonder kids have no imagination and play and watch adult orientated films n games.

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BROOKLYN73 In reply to Wezuvius [2007-10-28 23:07:13 +0000 UTC]

EXACTLY MAN! BUT WHAT I REALLY FIND ULTRA AMAZING IS THAT THE ANIMATION AND CHARACTERS THAT ARE SUCCESSFUL NOW ARE DRAWN MUCH CRUDELY THAN THE GREAT DRAWN/ANIMATED CARTOONS WE HAD. HE-MAN? FILMATION WAS JUST AWESOME AT ANIMATING THEIR CHARACTERS. HOW DID WE GO FROM ROBOTECH, TO CRUDELY DRAWN SHIT LIKE POWERPUFF GIRLS AND FAIRLY ODD PARENTS OR BEN 10?!?!?
PROVES A POINT, KIDS DONT LIKE TO HAVE THEIR INTELLECT CHALLENGED SO THEY GO FOR THIS NEW, EASY SHIT. YOU HAD TO ACTUALLY FOLLOW ROBOTECH. VOLTRON, HEMAN, ALL THAT SHIT.
GOD THOSE WERE THE DAYS MAN.. 80'S EARLY 90'S RULE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

REBOOT
THUNDERCATS
MIGHTY ORBOTS
BRAVESTARR
GARGOYLES
LIST GOES ON...

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Wezuvius In reply to BROOKLYN73 [2007-10-28 23:11:29 +0000 UTC]

YEH man

thundercats oohhh i remember that well

gargolyles was awesome, was a dark cartoon from what i remember, kinda what Batman is now, very dark n gothic which is awesome

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BROOKLYN73 In reply to Wezuvius [2007-10-28 23:41:40 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD, THE BATMAN CARTOONS, ARE THE FUCKING BEST, I HAVE TO START COLLECTING THAT ON DVD. THE DARK KNIGHT SERIES. NO ROBIN TO GET IN THE WAY, JUST BATMAN AND ALFRED..
JESUS THAT WAS MY SHIT MAN!!!!!!!!

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Wezuvius In reply to BROOKLYN73 [2007-10-29 08:38:35 +0000 UTC]

yeh robin is an ass most of the time... batman needs no sidekick.

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