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SedulousSara [2010-06-19 02:21:22 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
The first thing I want to say it that this drawing is pure excellence.
I'll begin by pointing out a few small things that could be adjusted (I won't say improved, for there's no real rules with art). The main thing I notice is a certain thing with the hair. Notice hair the hair goes over the eye, and yet the eye is completely visible, still? Even with the finest of hair, the sight of the eye would be dimmed to some extent, if not completely. The same goes with where the hair covers the shoulders.
Another subtle thing; Her shoulders appear perfectly straight, while shoulders naturally slope downwards a bit. Though, with how the arm is up, that shoulder appears correct, but the other shoulder should probably slope downwards a little. That's how I see in my perspective, anyway.
Now, some great things to mention about this.
First, despite what I said above, the hair is drawn beautifully. Many artists struggle with hair, including me. On the drawing, it appears effortless and clean.
As for the folds in the clothing, I still haven't gotten the hang of that. That, in my opinion, is the hardest thing when drawing realistically.
I also admire her pose, it's shy and modest, and yet somehow confident in what the strip says.
Your drawing is overall wonderful, and beyond my own capabilities. Very, very well done.
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Sumiko-uchiha [2010-06-17 16:52:21 +0000 UTC]
She right !
She is TOTALLY beautiful !!
good job on the anathomy *o*
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BubblesTea In reply to Sumiko-uchiha [2010-06-18 01:05:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh, thank you so much! You're too kind.
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Sumiko-uchiha In reply to BubblesTea [2010-06-18 01:43:28 +0000 UTC]
your welcome i just tell you the truth n.n
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MomoXmorgeE [2010-06-17 12:00:25 +0000 UTC]
Smexy <3
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BubblesTea In reply to SedulousSara [2010-06-19 05:01:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I feel so special to et my first critique
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BubblesTea In reply to SedulousSara [2010-06-21 07:24:45 +0000 UTC]
Well you should because you are! And I am so happy with the critique.
Some stuff, I did on purpose, like the eye because I am very horrible at drawing even eyes, I was so proud of how it came out that I kept it. xD
And yes, the shoulders do make the model seem a bit boxy, but I use my shoulders as a bit of a reference, which indeed are very straight-edged.
...So yup! Those are my excuses!
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SedulousSara In reply to BubblesTea [2010-06-21 11:51:16 +0000 UTC]
Haha, like I said, no rules in drawing, she looks fantastic. And yeah, I always hated drawing eyes only because of the symmetricalness. D:
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SedulousSara In reply to BubblesTea [2010-06-23 03:20:04 +0000 UTC]
Rofl I love that emoticon. And ikr!
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hyuga-hime [2010-06-17 10:52:22 +0000 UTC]
This is really emotional, I think. O: Very nice.
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BubblesTea In reply to hyuga-hime [2010-06-18 01:58:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I like how this came out. ^w^
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BubblesTea In reply to Octkita [2010-06-17 06:30:01 +0000 UTC]
That I fail?! 8D
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Octkita In reply to BubblesTea [2010-06-17 06:38:28 +0000 UTC]
That you win.. EPICLY!! 8P
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BubblesTea In reply to Octkita [2010-06-18 01:58:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh, YEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!
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