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Published: 2012-07-09 00:20:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 3808; Favourites: 124; Downloads: 25
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Description Will you take me with you?

Commissioned work for
Party Poison from Danger Days with 's character Cellophane Revenge.
I hope you like it, dear!
It's been a long time comming.

p.s. the image can be downloaded to 2736x2332, if you are interested in seeing details of the characters.
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Comments: 25

imwith-pandaz [2012-07-10 13:20:48 +0000 UTC]

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Here Is My Critique-

First of all great peice of artwork i loved it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
it's great, everything looks good expect the girls head is tilted against the movement of her head and the boy looks flat.

I really like the light effects and i love the art style. the shadows seem accurate and the rounding on everything is amazing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

NOW GOING TO USE UP THE REST OF THE SPACE *WARNING MAY CONTAIN CRAZYNESS*

I LOVE LLAMA'S
I CREATED A NEW ANIMAL CALLED LLAMAMS THERE SO CUTE THEY ARE LIKE LLAMA'S WITH HATS BUT CUTER LOL e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I LIKE CHEESE CAKE YUM

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Building-Bridges In reply to imwith-pandaz [2012-07-10 20:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Hello! Thank you for your kind rating and taking your time to critique, but I'm confused..you have written nearly the very same thing as the previous critiquer?? ;A; I'm so sorry if I seem ungrateful!! Its just..I guess I just don't understand why you made the very same points.

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imwith-pandaz In reply to Building-Bridges [2012-07-11 08:56:23 +0000 UTC]

oh well i didnt copy them or anything i just saw what they saw i didnt even know somebody else wrote on it.

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Building-Bridges In reply to imwith-pandaz [2012-07-11 14:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay! I'm sorry! I don't mean to victimize, by any means! It was just an odd occurrence for me, and I wanted to receive clarification of the circumstance. Thank you again for taking your time to critique my image!

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imwith-pandaz In reply to Building-Bridges [2012-07-11 18:18:20 +0000 UTC]

np

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ninjatakes321 [2012-07-09 00:31:34 +0000 UTC]

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Hah, it's great, everything is good except the boy looks flat and the girl's head is tilted against the movement of her neck. Are the guy's eyes supposed to be looking to her or the link? I like the art style and the light effects, the rounding on everything is good and the shadows seem accurate. Now I will fill in space. Allah somberness fail flipper flap jack ninja six pact wait what's that monkey doing on your shoulder it's not supposed to be there you know what's wrong with you with your ninjas attacking my pancakes like a German boss.

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Building-Bridges In reply to ninjatakes321 [2012-07-09 04:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I just wanted to say thank you for the honest critique! I worked for many long hours, so it began to get difficult to see my own mistakes- I would not have known about the girl's neck, I hope that I can amend that for the next time I draw. I did see the boy looking a little flat, but I wasn't sure the right way to go about fixing it! Any advice on how to do so would be greatly appreciated. I'm glad that the background didn't seem to distract you from the picture-its my first time attempting to drop scenery into a piece and I was worried that the results may have looked haphazard. :') The boy was meant to be looking to her, but I guess he did end up looking distractedly at the link! A mysterious form of subliminal messaging, perhaps. x) I'm glad you pointed it out, I may still go back and fix it.
Haha and your nonesense, although not constructive, was quite amusing to read. If you're ever feeling in the mood to critique some more, I have many pieces in my gallery that I would love constructive feedback on. Thank-you again.

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ninjatakes321 In reply to Building-Bridges [2012-07-09 04:46:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, I could NEVER do something that good though I like to look at art rather then make it, I like your style and stuff, good job over all I was really trying to find anything bad with it! it's really nice!

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Echos-Voice [2012-07-11 20:59:21 +0000 UTC]

This is like....Insanely good. I've been sitting here staring at it for like the past half hour.

I always enjoy seeing your work, and seeing that it's Revenge and Poison makes me even happier.

Another amazing job, hun. <3

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NancyKilljoy [2012-07-09 15:25:36 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! Very good work. And I like her tattoos *-*

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Building-Bridges In reply to NancyKilljoy [2012-07-10 20:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you so much! I love her tattoos, too! They were way fun to draw and so cool looking!
made a great design.

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NancyKilljoy In reply to Building-Bridges [2012-07-10 21:36:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! They really are very nice

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dangerkid2019 [2012-07-09 01:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is absolutely fabulous. Gorgeous work, I love their expressions

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Building-Bridges In reply to dangerkid2019 [2012-07-10 20:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! It makes me so happy that you think so, and I'm so glad that you like their expressions! I wanted them to look as though they were reaching an understanding or having soft conversation, where they know they can count on each-other.
thank you! x)

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dangerkid2019 In reply to Building-Bridges [2012-07-10 22:43:54 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome And you did an awesome job portraying those emotions!

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xtokyozombiex [2012-07-09 01:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Love it ! O.O

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Building-Bridges In reply to xtokyozombiex [2012-07-10 20:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm seriously glad!

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xtokyozombiex In reply to Building-Bridges [2012-07-11 01:29:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Chirko [2012-07-09 00:50:43 +0000 UTC]

that background is GORGEOUS! especially the lamp ♥

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Building-Bridges In reply to Chirko [2012-07-10 20:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Ahh thank you so much!! I'm so happy you like it ;u; This is one of the first time I have attempted to incorporate a realistic background into one of my pictures, so I was very nervous the whole time! xD Thank you again.

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hisironicprincess [2012-07-09 00:29:31 +0000 UTC]

oh my god baby. this is so hnngh. and the colors. hnngh. and the pose hnnngh

I love you
i just
love you

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Building-Bridges In reply to hisironicprincess [2012-07-10 23:30:28 +0000 UTC]

C: ♥♥♥ I'm so glad that you like it!! x)

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hisironicprincess In reply to Building-Bridges [2012-07-10 23:31:43 +0000 UTC]

<3
how could i not?
you spoil me

btw check my page cough cough

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Building-Bridges In reply to hisironicprincess [2012-07-10 23:42:57 +0000 UTC]

LOL that was like "and suddenly- Christmas!"
asjfg thank you for considering us friends/putting me in that category and I see you've sketched out my prize?! omg I'm super excited

My day is AWESOME now.♥

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hisironicprincess In reply to Building-Bridges [2012-07-11 00:08:18 +0000 UTC]

ahahahomg <3

and totes i mean
we've been talking more and more ;__; <3
yeah ive had it sketched for months its jut siting down&doing it
<3

im glad bby

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