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Published: 2010-10-27 19:45:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Depression sinks in this time

And I can't find an escape

Hypersomnia

No reason to eat

No reason to breathe



I'm desperate

I'm waiting for you

But these tears inside never stop falling

I try to forget you

Try to release you

But my heart screams in agony



I try to find solace in the remaining friends

That I hold so dear

But there is no use

The depression still lingers

Just like you do in my head

As I try to grasp the images of you

But they drift through my fingers

Like smoke



You who are my number one

You whom I've hurt so much

I want another chance

For this I am begging

On my hands and knees

Please...
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Comments: 5

liyafae [2010-10-27 20:20:41 +0000 UTC]

As much as I like some of the imagery you used here, poetry about depression is supposed to evoke feelings from the reader, and I really didn't feel it, here.

I see what you're trying to do.

I like the word "hypersomnia" though.

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Bunneh-kins In reply to liyafae [2010-10-28 22:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Erm.... Thankies? Do I know you? xD But yea, the hypersomnia I got form my major... hypersonia = sleeping a lot insomnia= not sleeping at all. But yea... I'm not a writer nor do i claim to be... this was just me putting down my own feelings. =3

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liyafae In reply to Bunneh-kins [2010-10-28 23:09:02 +0000 UTC]

Nah, you dunno me. I was just browsing poetry and came across yours. I can see that you're very upset, though. Cheer up, today's a new day.

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Bunneh-kins In reply to liyafae [2010-10-28 23:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! You're sweet! ^-^ <3 Yea you're right... But... Nothing is the same without him... I messed up bad, I know that... But what he is doing is worse than I ever did... I would give anything to hear his voice without a condescending tone added to it... I told my friends all I want for Christmas/ Yule is to be his friend again... Heh, but I'm not sure if that will happen... I did something very bad a few weeks ago and now I'm in the hospital for a few weeks and because he was the reason for it, my friends and father hate him now... Even though they don't seem to understand what I did is my own fault... I'm not even supposed to be online right now, but I was looking forward to your reply so... xD

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liyafae In reply to Bunneh-kins [2010-10-29 00:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh jeez. Well, i dunno what's going on really, but i hope everything works out for the better.

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