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Published: 2013-09-22 21:58:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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The sky suddenly brightens in unnatural lightThe ground breaks apart
The sea tumbles in torrents
Heaven and earth alike are torn asunder
Explosions rack the ground
And missiles fly through the air
The world is torn in two
Then broken again
Then suddenly it falls silent
The sky dims into night
The ground stills
The sea calms
The sun rises again
It is the end
And the beginning
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Interesting. I like the way your poem seems to slowly shrink in on itself, as if counting down to the end. But I do believe in line four it should be "heaven and earth alike are torn asunder".
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Thanks. It's fixed now.
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