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Published: 2013-11-20 21:54:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description I am a shadow,
dark and elusive
Unknown and unseen

I am the dark,
that hides behind the corners
The brighter the light,
the greater the shadow it creates

I am the creature that sneaks up behind you,
the being no one can catch
I am the darkness itself

Unknown and unseen,
Dark and elusive
I am everywhere
I am a shadow
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Michel-le-fou [2014-09-27 06:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Everywhere you turn to look
You will find me there
As I draw nearer I send a chill and play with your hair
Hidden in the darkness
I emerge in pale light
In the hours of the evening
Before the night

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buterfligirl In reply to Michel-le-fou [2014-09-27 12:48:19 +0000 UTC]

ha, sounds interesting. Perhaps this poem could use a little revising

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Michel-le-fou In reply to buterfligirl [2014-09-27 12:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Feel free to add that.

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buterfligirl In reply to Michel-le-fou [2014-09-27 13:04:18 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't use your wording though. It wouldn't really be my poem then

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Michel-le-fou In reply to buterfligirl [2014-09-27 13:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Edit as you like.

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