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FKINGT [2016-05-03 17:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow its super

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rhimes1999 [2016-05-02 00:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh a goldi

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Ko-Ton [2016-05-01 22:41:32 +0000 UTC]

As I said before, you get some nice details in your work. Here I like the three guys in the bottom. The guy holding the cherry (I think is a cherry) is barely visible and the other one on the upper side seem unnecesary.

GOOD:
You have improved a lot in your facial hair detail. I think you could add a little stubble on the neck to make them look a bit unkept adding a more manly look.

Facial expressions: the look on their faces is great. They seem to smile from their eyes and that's good.

Muscle shading: sometimes people think all muscles should be otulined. I think that is true for th ebiggest ones like pecs and biceps, or some other big muscles, but for some others you could try outlining just a small part if it then do the rest with shades (like abs, the guy in the right is a good example, add a LITTLE outlining to him. The line on the cernte looks out of place).

Nipples: Try drawing the tip of the nipple in a light color and use a dark color (not black) to do a partial outline (just like you did here but don't use black). Also pay attention to REAL nipples. They usually have a darker portion, usually half of it depending of the light).

Body hair: this is a tricky issue, since every guy has a different pattern and a different type, look for body hair growing patterns, it helps a lot. Body hair flows in different directions depending of the zone it is.

Nails: try drawing them since not having nails make your guys look like dolls. Is like not having nipples. Try using a VERY THIN line to do them and don't do the full nail silouette. Look for a friend of mine YORCKO. He began doing nails to his cahraters when I suggested it and the results were awesome.

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LiveLongButLOL [2016-05-01 15:51:35 +0000 UTC]

If only I could join in

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