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C3POwn — A strange witness
Published: 2012-03-01 23:27:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 467; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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sun passes by, shadows reform,a man tormented by his remorse,
for long ago, it hit him hard,
a duck forsaw his own demise,
as it was witness to what he'd done,
the duck for one, had to die.
Comments: 20
I GET IT! It took a bit, but I got it. 
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you got it? i'm not even sure i get it myself
thanks ^^
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well then, no need to get more then that is there ^^
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well then he shouldn't have been so nosy
and thanks for the fav ^^
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ha there is a great mix of sadness and humor in this. You create such an interesting story in such little space.
It is great for multiple readings!
Nice work.
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thank you, to be honest i didn't even realise the deeper story
behind it when i first wrote it till i posted it on deviantart
quite some time later ^^'
oh and thanks for the fav
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welcome!
, haha readers don't have to know that
sure thing.
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yeah, i noticed ^^
thank you so much, i sure hope i'll get some feedback,
it would certainly help to get me back to writing ^^
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Interesting. Can't say I entirely comprehend, but then again, you said it was more of an off-the-top-of-your-head thing, and those aren't really meant to be entirely comprehensible. Talking about a duck was an interesting choice (and maybe even mildly odd), but that's what makes this attractive. Nice work.
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well, basicly it's that this man did something terrible
and the duck was the only witness, in the end the guy
became obsessed with that duck seeing what he did, so he
found the duck and killed him, or at least, that's what i
think i meant, it was written in the heat of the moment ^^'
thanks
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Oh! Okay, I see it now
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I love the opening line. 
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that's what i thought aswell
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