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Published: 2019-04-15 02:33:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 10789; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 8
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Description i'm back baby...with a kidney infection...



Fixing Adam's Character.. RE-WRITING IT COMPLETELY!!www.youtube.com/watch?v=d2fOjh…


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imnotscot [2022-10-08 18:47:51 +0000 UTC]

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caboosemcgrief In reply to imnotscot [2022-10-08 19:16:53 +0000 UTC]

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GuyfromCanada [2022-02-01 17:16:00 +0000 UTC]

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caboosemcgrief In reply to GuyfromCanada [2022-02-01 22:25:51 +0000 UTC]

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animeak116 [2019-05-02 04:51:07 +0000 UTC]

343GS116*looks about the trees and noticed a distinct pattern*: The trees

Jaune: What?

343 (shorter for namea sake): the trees...there hallow....

Jaune: ok 343 your creeping me out. Like significantly higher than yesterday

343*looks at Jaune*: We can't stay here. Not another day. Not another second.

Ruby*feela effects if the apathy*: why 343 you gave up on life...why shouldn't we?

343: Im not letting you die just because of my shitty life Ruby. Jaune find that mongoose Nora found yesterday. I'll get that trailer out and fix the tires. Qrow try not to do anything *sees Qrow fall into the well* stupid....fucking dumbass. Ok change of plans Ruby, Jaune, Ren, go get Qrow out of his fucking drunken stupor. Nora get that mongoose here ASAP. I'll fix up the trailer. Good?

Ruby*still effected by Apathy*: yea sure whatever

343*looks at the trees in the forests and knows somethings watching them from afar*: gods please don't let it be what i think it is...*he goes inside a stable where the trailer was and was fixing up the tires*

Summer Rose(Ghost): as much as you want me to come out and suprise Ruby that you cam summon the Ghosts of the dead...i think it be better off you dont. No one trusts you. Not even Qrow. Im sorry he left you there that day.....Tai as well. They should have known better...

343*sighs*: Summer...its not your fault for trying to save me. It was my fault for needing Saving.

Summer*giggles*: you know i told you to call me "mom" right?

343*tightens the last lug nut*: what comfort would it even give me. I can only talk to you once a month and its at random. Even them all your lived ones hated me *puts a hand to his face to touch it. Only to touch his mask* It be better off if Ruby and Yang never knew i was supposed to be there older brother

Summer*sighs sadly*: I love you. You know that right.

343*doesn't say a word but slowly nods his head*

Summer*hugs him from behind*: please just dont abandon her like Tai and Qrow did to you *she then disappears as his hand held onto her ghostly one. Slowly he tried to feel her hand only to find nothing.*

343*he clenches his hand into a fist*: Never in a million years *ge hears the Apathy screams that came from the well* NO!!!

in the well

Ruby*panicking*: Why aren't head shots working!

The Apathy are coming closer as they ate carrying the shocked and drunk Qrow through the tunnels. Soon more agile Apathy (basically black grim versions of the Nechromorpes slasher) come running at them as Ruby trys providing cover fire but her cheap low caliber rounds weren't doing much but bouncing off there skull like heads.

One dodged a shot of hers but it was to close to her for her to react fast enough as it was soon going to be on top of her. However before it could bit her A shot rang out and a bullet hit the agile Apathy in the head shattering its non existent brain matter everywhere that Ruby had to cover her face she looked at who fired the shot and it was 343. Holding a very familiar handcanon (looks like a silver a d red verson of Destiny's "Last Word").

343: what the hell are you waiting for Run!! *he fired two more shots at the torso of two more agile Apathys and they fall back turning to ash*

Ruby: what the gell are these things!

343: DONT LOOK BACK JUST GO!!! *he shouted as he fired several more shots into the slow walking Apathy before tossing a trip mine*

Jaune*holding up Qrow*: what are these things!

343: Apathys they haf to fucking come in two variants here of all fucking places!

Jaune: theres two variants!!!

343: Slashers and Sleepers! *they turn a corner when Ren got knocked down by a flying grim creature trying fobstab. Spike into his skull* FUCK! *he fired two shots to the spin area killing it instantly as Ren got up and ran with them*

Jaune: ok is that a

343: YES!

Jaune: three variants. Do i hear 4?

343: Thankfully no!

They all come across a hole in the walls and they all go through it only to be in what looked like a wine cellar.

343: an exit! *he ran past the others to the Cellar door when they all heard that ungodly scream causing them to get tired* Fuck....*he lifted the silver hand cannon up and started firing into the gap of the foors hoping to shoot the lock. But to avail*

They hear that scream again and they all get tired again. 343 tries to use all his will power to get the damn door open. Ruby tries to get Ren, Jaune amd Qrow up bit couldn't because they where giving up faster and fast. With Ren being almost closest to the hole inbthe walk that the slimmer Sleeper Apathy go through en mass. 343 reloads his other low caliber handcanon he made himself and continue yo shot through the door sense the hinges where no were to be seen

Ruby*sees that a Apathy was getting close to Ren as she finished getting ger Uncle to the bottom of the stairs*: Ren!

Ren: its fine...its better this way *he said so passively as memories of Penny flashed into her mind. Her silver eyes glowed as she yelled killing half the pack and blinding others in shock*

343*looks at what had just happened and realized what he saw he crawls to Ruby as the Apathys scream again*: Ruby

Ruby: big bro?

343*this shocked him for a second before getting down to the chase*: Ruby think of your friends. Your happiest memories. Focus on them. Focus. Do you want your friends to die here?

Ruby*was ata loss for words as she teiwd ti think*: my...friends lives.....(memories flash back) *she then got her straight as her eyes glowed and them destroyed the remaining Apathy* what was that

343, Jaune, Ren, and Qrow quickly grab Ruby and bust the door open, they start throwing bottles of alchohol and set it ablaze and they get to the front. Once everyone was on the trailer 343 got in the mongoose and drove like he was escaping hell itself. As everyone but Nora reflected on what they say they turned to 343.

Jaune: what the hell where those things?

343: the Apathys. Twisted abominations by Salem who combined dead skin of a human and the grim pools and made three variants of that fucking thing. The fast agile Apathy Slashers which dobas named. The Sleeper Apathys which envoys a scream to make ypu loose your sense of self preservation to make ypu slep as they cut your throat a d devour your flesh...

Ren*thinking back to that one flying thing that attacked him*: and that inverted torsu looking thing?

343: thats......a breeder...they stab you to evoke brain trauma to its victim and inject grim fluids into the body to turn you into a Apathy of the three classes All of the are dangerous

Ruby: hay... 343?

343: yeah?

Ruby: how did you know what to say to me back there?

Qrow: how do you know so many of the Silver eyed warriors secret? *he asked still shocked*

343 stops the mongoose and looks about everywhere before looking back to his new companions.

343: isn't it obvious Qrow? *he takes off his mask as the others looked on horrified 343s disfigured face but they all noticed one thing about him other than his face was ugly. One silver eye waa in his right eye while the other eye was glowing but cold and blue like Ice* I am a silver eyed warrior.

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AdelAka [2019-04-28 12:30:53 +0000 UTC]

that transition from qrow human to a crow is damn neat!! OPo

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JPLegisn [2019-04-16 13:21:04 +0000 UTC]

Why is Jaune not affected by the Apathy's influence?


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caboosemcgrief In reply to JPLegisn [2019-04-16 17:36:57 +0000 UTC]

all in due time, my friend

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JPLegisn In reply to caboosemcgrief [2019-04-16 18:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Gaagh!  The suspense, you killin' me..  

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DyNo017RhInO [2019-04-15 22:07:52 +0000 UTC]

*Rolls eyes and sighs deeply*

Me: "Welp, since everyone except for me and Jaune are being complete idiots...FEET FIRST INTO HELL!

*Jumps into the well after Qrow to rescue his drunken ass*

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caboosemcgrief In reply to DyNo017RhInO [2019-04-16 17:35:05 +0000 UTC]

go get 'im!

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SugDolomar [2019-04-15 12:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Ruby is so depressed.....I like this new personality of Ruby now, she took the whole Gothic persona to a new level!

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caboosemcgrief In reply to SugDolomar [2019-04-15 16:24:38 +0000 UTC]

it is kinda fun to write for, tbh...who's to say they can't still have personalities, right? lol

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DarkCodexZ167 [2019-04-15 04:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Hey man love your work

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caboosemcgrief In reply to DarkCodexZ167 [2019-04-15 16:21:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you! i'm glad you're enjoying it

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