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cadjee — Deserving
Published: 2005-12-29 15:01:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Some people deserve it

Some people deserve to suffer
To be crushed to the ground
To feel the true meaning of hopelessness
Some people deserve to lose


Some people deserve it

But you didn't  
You deserved happiness
To see your children grow up
To grow old with your loved one
You deserved to live

Instead, you lost.
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Comments: 8

iruel [2006-01-04 18:15:42 +0000 UTC]

I think I have written several poems with the same theme, but I can't say I've succeded as good as you..

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cadjee In reply to iruel [2006-01-05 11:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so you liked it? Thank you.. I think you're a great writer/poet, actually some of your poems have been an inspiration to me.

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iruel In reply to cadjee [2006-01-05 15:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear.. If I do something good for 1 person with my poems, it makes me feel good. You moved me with your poem.

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cadjee In reply to iruel [2006-01-05 15:33:12 +0000 UTC]

That's good to hear as well..

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Melvisa [2005-12-30 13:00:43 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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cadjee In reply to Melvisa [2005-12-30 14:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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xephyr-prophet [2005-12-29 21:09:21 +0000 UTC]



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cadjee In reply to xephyr-prophet [2005-12-29 21:48:09 +0000 UTC]

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