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Jellio [2013-08-13 05:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god that couldn't have been done on paint e-e

Okay you want critics~ I'm not very good at it but... Your colouring and shadin is incredible, seriously, but I think you should have picked a slightly ... different colour for the bori. She doesn't stand out enough, if you look quickly you can't tell where the edge between the bori and the bg is.

But other than that. o-o Wow. Those skills.

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lui-ysia [2013-08-11 04:03:32 +0000 UTC]

ok so I'm pretty bad at critiques but here are some things:

the textures are amazing 0v0 the claws, fur, and tongue eyeball thing all look awesome and the background is really nice.

the background kind of blends into the fur on the left side, so maybe try and differentiate those somehow? idk

the light isn't really coming from a specific direction so the shadows are kind of vague

the background doesn't really have shadows or reflections from the subject, so it looks kind of disjointed. like the background and the neopet thing aren't really in the same picture, especially on the claws since they're so bright and the background there is dark purple-ish black.

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Blade-dA [2013-08-05 11:03:46 +0000 UTC]

looks awesome but its sorta hard to see the main subject since its pretty dark and on a dark background

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NoteSwift [2013-08-05 03:41:36 +0000 UTC]

The body between the front and the back on the underside looks a bit weird, like it can't decide as if it wants to slouch down from fat or stay skinny like one of those big dogs.

I know this may be part of the design but just tweaking it a little might be beneficial, just to make things defined, like the aliased style states with pride.

I can't say much else to this. I like the folds around him acting as skin/fur. Not really sure, but I don't really mind.

Also the hair for his tail looks a little gross. This guy is big and weird but still somewhat majestic to me. I would go on about adjusting design but I can just imagine that being hard to tell before posting it and seeing what the impression/feel of the watchers get. The saliva is acceptable, it feels dark and monstrous, not so much gross. It's like the lack of light shining off of it sort of helps keep it not gross but still monster-y and cool.

Also either the skull is a bit narrow or that's a heck ton of fur/fat on the little guy.

//critque .u.

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snapdragonanime101 [2013-08-05 00:00:16 +0000 UTC]

so good it huuUUUuuurts

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Tipo19 [2013-08-04 23:56:00 +0000 UTC]

What that was drawn on MS paint?

*bows*

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