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Published: 2019-10-26 08:35:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1201; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 0
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Description if i was made of
fire, would you burn yourself to
grab onto my soul?

if all the world was
water, how long would you hold
my gaze, lungs burning?

when all we've become
is ash in the wind, will your
dust remember mine?

and when we are but
trees, gnarled deep in mud, will our
roots still intertwine?
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Comments: 32

GuinevereToGwen [2020-03-31 14:05:35 +0000 UTC]

A belated congrats on the DD, dear. Beautiful!

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callerofcrows In reply to GuinevereToGwen [2020-04-24 16:23:44 +0000 UTC]

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Lionnfart [2020-02-20 03:01:51 +0000 UTC]

"will your dust remember mine?"

wonderful. congrats on the dd.

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callerofcrows In reply to Lionnfart [2020-03-27 22:11:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked that line--it's my favorite too! Β 

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BlackOliveCreates [2020-02-20 02:34:47 +0000 UTC]

I really love elemental stuff! That’s what got me here!

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callerofcrows In reply to BlackOliveCreates [2020-03-27 22:11:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that you liked it! Hopefully inspiration will strike me to write more. Β 

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BlackOliveCreates In reply to callerofcrows [2020-03-28 19:42:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!~

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LiterarySerenity [2020-02-20 00:31:34 +0000 UTC]

I love this elegant intertwining of these two lives. It's a perfect romance.Β 

Congrats on your well-deserved DD! ^0^

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callerofcrows In reply to LiterarySerenity [2020-03-27 22:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!! It was a nice surprise to see it was nominated for one when I logged back in after a considerable hiatus.

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LiterarySerenity In reply to callerofcrows [2020-03-28 03:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Hehe. And it was well-deserved.

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YouInventedMe [2020-02-19 17:42:29 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD. Happy to move this from my favorites to my Lit DD collection.

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callerofcrows In reply to YouInventedMe [2020-03-27 22:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Aaah, thank you so much! I appreciate it!

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WindySilver [2020-02-19 16:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful imagery! Congrats on the DD!

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callerofcrows In reply to WindySilver [2020-03-27 22:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you thank you!

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WindySilver In reply to callerofcrows [2020-03-28 10:07:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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ariya-sacca [2020-02-19 16:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem!

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callerofcrows In reply to ariya-sacca [2020-03-27 22:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks!

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LindArtz [2020-02-19 11:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully done! !!!

Congratulations on your much deserved, DD! !!!

Β 

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callerofcrows In reply to LindArtz [2020-03-27 22:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Eefera [2020-01-02 06:45:01 +0000 UTC]

You can always see the power of a love story by the way one writes to the other. The intensity of this is really beautiful.

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callerofcrows In reply to Eefera [2020-03-27 22:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. That makes my heart soar to hear, as I wrote it for/about my husband and myself. This is some of the highest praise this poem could receive.

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ZoeMyGeez [2019-11-05 14:09:11 +0000 UTC]

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callerofcrows In reply to ZoeMyGeez [2019-11-10 01:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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YouInventedMe [2019-11-05 00:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Lovely.

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callerofcrows In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-11-10 01:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Β 

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TeaPhotography [2019-11-03 00:36:43 +0000 UTC]

Really well-written!

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callerofcrows In reply to TeaPhotography [2019-11-10 01:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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PridesCrossing [2019-10-28 17:32:47 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful!

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callerofcrows In reply to PridesCrossing [2019-11-02 17:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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PridesCrossing In reply to callerofcrows [2019-11-02 18:39:59 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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DamagedHomewrecker [2019-10-27 21:21:41 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful and sweet <3

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callerofcrows In reply to DamagedHomewrecker [2019-11-02 17:32:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! My husband, its inspiration, is much the same. Β 

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