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YouInventedMe β€” frosted glass
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Published: 2020-02-20 18:16:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 707; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 0
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Description you need not
breathe or bloom
for anyone
but yourself

love you are
already
the brightest
thing in my life

light
waiting for light

but I know how the cold
settles in

brittling bones
and glaciating
skin

how it sometimes feels like
you'll never know warmth again

leaving you lost
in daze

opacifying gaze

with a scrim of
ice
across your
eyes
like frosted glass

love let me
stay close
until it's
passed Β 

and though I can not
sing you
any nearer
to daylight

nor hold back
the black

I will hold you
through the night

I will
sit with you
in the darkness

for as long
as it may
last
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bonzaralle [2020-07-23 05:50:22 +0000 UTC]

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ChristyMahon [2020-07-17 15:05:03 +0000 UTC]

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nicmas97 [2020-04-24 11:19:35 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to nicmas97 [2020-04-24 17:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. As I don't use punctuation in most of my poems,

the line breaks and spacing are definitely meant to map the sound

and flow of the piece.

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Eefera [2020-02-25 22:38:22 +0000 UTC]

Always beautiful work, my friend.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Eefera [2020-03-15 04:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. <3

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squibblyquill [2020-02-24 14:38:43 +0000 UTC]

very sweet

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YouInventedMe In reply to squibblyquill [2020-03-13 04:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Lionnfart [2020-02-24 02:24:58 +0000 UTC]

makes my chest warm, and makes me feel safe.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Lionnfart [2020-03-13 04:49:20 +0000 UTC]

This is such a wonderful comment and is exactly how I hoped the scribble would be received. Thank you.

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LiterarySerenity [2020-02-23 03:12:18 +0000 UTC]

So comforting. β™‘

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YouInventedMe In reply to LiterarySerenity [2020-03-13 04:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

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LAURA-777 [2020-02-22 09:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful & comfort love this!

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LAURA-777 In reply to LAURA-777 [2020-03-13 05:40:55 +0000 UTC]

At times I’m refered to as The Sister of Edgar Allan Poe, for my writing mostly dark, etc I know that when you write you are freeing yourself from your sadness or any emotion writing is an outlet as you write that it’s out of your system and that pain you once had is freed from your soul.. you feel better when you allow yourself to have writing as a outlet of your soul

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YouInventedMe In reply to LAURA-777 [2020-03-13 04:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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TheLunaLily [2020-02-22 00:33:42 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous, and hits really close to home.Β 

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YouInventedMe In reply to TheLunaLily [2020-03-15 04:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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TheLunaLily In reply to YouInventedMe [2020-04-18 17:58:56 +0000 UTC]

You’re welcome

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Xanphre [2020-02-21 17:15:19 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to Xanphre [2020-03-13 04:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot.

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Raahja [2020-02-21 17:02:31 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to Raahja [2020-03-13 04:50:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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mrcrozier [2020-02-21 12:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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YouInventedMe In reply to mrcrozier [2020-03-15 04:57:04 +0000 UTC]

<3

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aquablazegirl [2020-02-21 01:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written

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YouInventedMe In reply to aquablazegirl [2020-03-15 04:57:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much.

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Turihia [2020-02-20 18:52:10 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to Turihia [2020-03-15 04:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. <3

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