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CamillaMalcus — Mako Shark v.2

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Description Watercolour, 23 * 23 cm.
2010

I decided to crop this painting, since I wasn't pleased with the background and composition in the original version. camillamalcus.deviantart.com/a…
Which one would you say is better?


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Comments: 50

Rebel--Heart [2013-08-13 19:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Your work has been featured here!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to Rebel--Heart [2013-10-21 16:05:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it!

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philippeL [2011-02-06 22:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful shark painting!!!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to philippeL [2011-02-06 22:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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philippeL In reply to CamillaMalcus [2011-02-06 23:46:48 +0000 UTC]

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Stealthero [2010-10-26 00:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Impressive . I've missed your quality artworks Cami . Has the artistic blockade finally over?

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CamillaMalcus In reply to Stealthero [2010-10-26 12:59:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Les!
You know, I think I'm finding some inspiration again. ^^ I was getting a bit worried myself there for a while..
The next painting will be cuteness itself. No killer machine there I'm afraid, haha, although you might (possibly) like it anyhow. (As would probably your friend's snake have done, hehe.)

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Stealthero In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-10-26 23:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear it

Haha, sounds like some baby animal or something, right?

Hmmm... sounds like a bunny

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CamillaMalcus In reply to Stealthero [2010-10-27 13:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Yep. A chubby, sleepy, fluffy, feet-in-the-air baby animal. Not my usual thing but I couldn't resist.
Bunny is kind of close..

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FabioAcuarela [2010-08-19 05:13:12 +0000 UTC]


Your work is amazing. I love your whole gallery

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CamillaMalcus In reply to FabioAcuarela [2010-08-20 18:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me.

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ZackLoup [2010-08-18 21:20:51 +0000 UTC]

This was featured here .

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CamillaMalcus In reply to ZackLoup [2010-08-19 20:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it!

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Sir-Pumpkinhead [2010-08-08 17:57:08 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! the shark looks hyper realistic I didn¿t see the non-cropped version, but this one is quite nice. Really admire your eye to catch colors

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CamillaMalcus In reply to Sir-Pumpkinhead [2010-08-08 18:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, I'm so glad to hear it!

I have the non-cropped version here: [link]

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Sir-Pumpkinhead In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-08-17 06:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Did see the non-cropped version, but, like you said, this one is better: it focuses the eyes more

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CamillaMalcus In reply to Sir-Pumpkinhead [2010-08-20 20:58:01 +0000 UTC]

It certainly does, thanks again!

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rekova [2010-08-07 22:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Hola! esta excelente tu pintura, a mi me gusta más la versión larga hace ver al tiburón en la profundidad del mar.

Saludos!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to rekova [2010-08-23 15:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Hola!
¡Muchas gracias! Me alegra que alguien prefiera la otra versión a pesar de su fondo poco común.

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rekova In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-08-24 23:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Que te puedo decir... soy tu fan

Saludos amiga!

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JustBelieveCosplay [2010-08-07 18:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Very neat looking, almost 3-d quality because he looks like he's about to swim out of the paper I like the crop version.

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CamillaMalcus In reply to JustBelieveCosplay [2010-08-09 14:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm so glad to hear it! It's great with a second opinion too; I think I'm doing the right thing by cropping the original when framing.

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lover-of-fire5990 [2010-08-03 22:12:00 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!!!!!!!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to lover-of-fire5990 [2010-08-03 22:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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killer-rabbit-05 [2010-08-03 01:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous mix of colors, and the watercolor work is so clean! I love it!!!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to killer-rabbit-05 [2010-08-09 14:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your kind comment!

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KerovinBlack [2010-08-02 23:37:16 +0000 UTC]

Amazing
it looks fantastic in the cropped version sis

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CamillaMalcus In reply to KerovinBlack [2010-08-02 23:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much hun! I like it better too.

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KerovinBlack In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-08-03 00:02:59 +0000 UTC]

are you gonna crop the painting too?

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CamillaMalcus In reply to KerovinBlack [2010-08-03 00:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Yep, both the receiver and I prefer this crop. I'll do that with a rather broad mat - maybe a double layered one - so I don't think I will have to cut the painting though. That way it's always possible to retrieve the other version with another kind of framing, should he feel like it. :)

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CarrotStalker [2010-08-02 19:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Hur ska man nudå kunna bestämma sig! Du har verkligen fångat hajen bra, brrr vilka ögon!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to CarrotStalker [2010-08-03 14:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Tack så mycket! Jag föredrar nog den beskurna versionen själv; bakgrunden blev inte riktigt som jag ville att den skulle bli, trots ett antal försök.. Det är väl nackdelen med akvarell och stora ytor vått-i-vått (och en bristande skill i den tekniken).

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CarrotStalker In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-08-03 20:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Jag tycker bäst om den här också Vadå bristande skill, pfff! Du skulle se hur det ser ut när jag försöker...

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CamillaMalcus In reply to CarrotStalker [2010-08-09 14:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Tack! Det blir att jag beskär originalet när jag ramar in målningen.
Haha, tss.. Jag har allt sett hur det ser ut när du försöker.
Har du någon ny målning på gång?

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CarrotStalker In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-08-09 16:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Pff! Jodå, men det brukar oftast sluta med att jag inser att jag inte är tillräckligt duktig ännu för att måla det som jag vill och skrotar alltihop Måste nog öva med lite enklare saker först så att jag inte känner mej helt misslyckad Lite bättre koll på penseln skulle nog vara bra...

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CamillaMalcus In reply to CarrotStalker [2010-08-09 18:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Du låter som jag, haha. Det är inte fel - övning ger färdighet (för att nämna det uppenbara).

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CarrotStalker In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-08-09 18:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Haha, så sant!

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milbisous [2010-08-02 18:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Your watercolors technique is flawless, no messy bleeding. The colors on the shark are so beautiful. Only the eye looks too black, more hi light would have been too perfect, in my opinion You're so good

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CamillaMalcus In reply to milbisous [2010-08-03 14:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for your kind comment! The eye in the reference was pitch black like an abyss, so I modified it with the help of another reference. I have to say that the original freaked me out a little bit; it looked all dead. Maybe that's desirable with a subject like this though..

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TomsGG [2010-08-02 16:18:39 +0000 UTC]

This one is better!
So even if it isn't a thing i would draw....you really did an outstandig job.
Well i'm a big fan of you....so you can be sure i like everything you draw/paint

again really great....and i absolutely love the blue color!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to TomsGG [2010-08-03 13:55:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I like it better too, the background never did turn out the way I wanted it to. This painting was a request of sorts, so to be honest I had never thought of painting this kind of subject either - but it was fun to do for that reason.

Thank you again! It's great to get a second opinion, I get a bit blinded by my own work after staring at it for too long.

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TomsGG In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-08-04 07:54:09 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome!

and i know what you mean about second opinion,
but let me reassure you, it looks awesome!

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Samarai [2010-08-02 16:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Definitely like this one better. Too much background in the other.

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CamillaMalcus In reply to Samarai [2010-08-02 16:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I absolutely agree!

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Samarai In reply to CamillaMalcus [2010-08-02 16:16:12 +0000 UTC]

Great thinks mind alike..?

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CamillaMalcus In reply to Samarai [2010-08-02 16:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Some such thing

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Crynyd [2010-08-02 15:45:00 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you've cropped this Cami, it adds real focus to the shark It was amazing before... now it's simply awesome!!!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to Crynyd [2010-08-02 15:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it! I prefer this version too, no doubt.
God, that background... x_x haha.

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candybonez [2010-08-02 15:34:16 +0000 UTC]

this is toppp! really nice work on the skin!

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CamillaMalcus In reply to candybonez [2010-08-02 15:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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