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juliana-1 [2013-06-21 20:05:05 +0000 UTC]
So let me get this right(at least as far as the original picture and text go):these people are dead so their wisdom has no meaning because of it....or because others may have perverted their wisdom..Is that your story?
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El-Jorro [2012-02-16 05:58:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure I understand...
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CapitalSeed In reply to El-Jorro [2012-04-19 04:46:09 +0000 UTC]
What don't you understand?
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El-Jorro In reply to CapitalSeed [2012-04-19 23:25:37 +0000 UTC]
I am not sure what point you are trying to make here.
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CapitalSeed In reply to El-Jorro [2012-04-21 04:13:20 +0000 UTC]
The graves represent dead profits, the giant mechanical arm = the great reach of institutional religion ready to pick up another member (out of the group of free thinkers), as if they were play things, liked a stuffed animal you try to win from a coin machine if you put in enough money.
The dude standing off to the far right bears a Rage Against the Machine quote. He is aware of the game and will not be swayed.
I think those were mostly my thoughts back when I created this piece, but I'm not sure I was trying to make a direct point about any one thing in particular so much as to just get people thinking about those types of topics.
Hope that helped a bit?
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minion-for-hire [2006-11-05 21:41:44 +0000 UTC]
This piece is powerful in making its point. Enough so that it cracked my objectivity for a moment. However, I have promised myself to comment on the artwork, not the content of pieces like this one. So I'll keep it simple.
The clean lines of this piece are very good at capturing the essence of what you're trying to get accross. The grasping arm over the basic representations of people workd really well, and the style used in the headstones works quite well.
The long shadows cast by the headstones works as a strong image, and the excerpt from the Torah (or what is it?) in the background works to highlight the tone.
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nuemj88 [2006-11-01 15:05:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very cool. i really enjoyed reading the description on the picture which doesn't happen too often.
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Djayness [2006-11-01 02:30:57 +0000 UTC]
free thought, its an interesting piece and i like how the religious hand can just grab people up at will like a toy vending machine.
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midnightblut [2006-10-31 17:33:48 +0000 UTC]
just wow, there's a lot that this portrays and much of it I agree with. You've done extremely well I believe.
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Cargopax [2006-10-30 23:58:04 +0000 UTC]
very cool , sry i didnt read ur description =s i dont have much time. it really made my think great job!
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CapitalSeed In reply to Cargopax [2006-10-31 00:27:20 +0000 UTC]
np, its mostly just descrip of people who are on the graves and what they did, etc
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Elodea [2006-10-30 18:04:06 +0000 UTC]
I get the feeling that religion likes to target the great and the regular people.The only thing keeping everyone going is the fact that they believe they have 'free thought'.
I like the way the claw represents religion and its saying ''Who's next?''
Another good compositional choice was to place the living below the dead,as if to say the dead are better off.
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alejandroadam [2006-10-30 06:36:46 +0000 UTC]
well I like that it's basically black and white. the composition is decent. and the idea behind it is alright. I think the graves and peoples would look better if they were more 3D-like, or at least had some detail to them for instance you could add some of the nifty shadding you added to the claw to the peoples and the graves, or maybe make the greaves sort of muliti dimentional, it looks like you didin't put much time into it. also it takes awhile to process the floating island of graves as what it is I guess, whatever it is. but it takes awhile and the shadows on the graves are a bit much, it seems they'd be less balck than they are. but you bascially only have black and white here and nothing inbetween. also this is a non-digital, traditional collage? it looks digital, but I guess you chould have done it by hand. the Koran (it's the Koran right?) in the backround is more grey or yellowish brown, it feels like it should be balck and white as well, or you should incorporate shades of grey into the forground images.
as for the concept, it's a good idea. but the idea that religion preys upon the stupid and weak, is kinda false, people will give their free will to any institution, they don't need religion to be mindless, more people worship business and politics more than they worship any religion in partiular, lot's of people are Republican before their Christian. and I must point out that "profits" are moneys you make beyond your investments and costs ect. in a business where as "prophets" are people who claim to be prophetic or to recive prophoshy from some sort of religious figure beyond tangabilty. not that I spell anything correctly at all anyway. (kinda dyslexic). also it's confusing to me the words on the bottom on the peoples shirts it is supposed to read "free thought" or "thought free" if you put free under thought it would clearly read "thought free" but if you moved thought over a person or two and put free up with it, it would clearly read "free thought"
aside from all of that I think it's a good concept and that your eye for line and composition are dead on. the title is alright I guess. I guess "sing me to sleep" would be a better title if you wanted a suggestion. I think it would be greatly apporved if you made it clearer what you are opposing (the abuse of faith hope and charity, by any institution, I think) and included say Adam Smith, or John Kennedy in with the dead, or other pop/political/business martyrs.
it's cool thought. I like it for the most part.
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CapitalSeed In reply to alejandroadam [2006-10-30 16:29:11 +0000 UTC]
well, you talk specifically of America though, or Americanized... and basically selling out to money is another form of religion (the new age religion of a dogmatic beleif in uncontrolled capitalism) see in the past even more so religion/politics weren't so seperate.. its only recently we've tried seperation of church and state (even though its not even true yet, "in God we trust" on all our minted coins doesn't sound very seperated to me)
it is a digital collage... i just wanted to be in this category to diversify who might see this... I did try to add a little of the yellowish color (on elvis' grave- since he's the redneck profit i thought it appropriate that his grave is dirtied, also the yellow bleeds into the "I know my enemies" character- but I guess not really enough to notice.
Points noted about the graves and people- I tried to keep it simple on purpose (but maybe some more three dimensional graves could be cool, I might have to try that when I have some more time) as for the shadows I wanted them to be exaggerated (almost looks like a keyboard of somesort from thumb) I like making things seem a bit odd and surreal rather then what other people would do- just trying to be unique I guess
thank you very much for the thoughtful comments! very much appreciated, not enough people take the time to explain what they get from a piece, what works for them and what doesn't, etc.
about the last tid bit I have been thinking about a way to visual better convey what I'm against (corruption, the instituition, taking advantage of something which is supposed to be positive (spirituality), and the belief that we can somehow obtain knowledge of God(s) ) but I'm still sturggling with ideas... my next one coming up is going to be a samurai with a swasticka on his chest... might be a bit more appropriate- well see, been busy as of late so i haven't had a chance to refine my thoughts
thanks again
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alejandroadam In reply to CapitalSeed [2006-10-31 01:06:48 +0000 UTC]
the worship of business isn't particually American. and it's as old as the worship of any power. in a sense a God-King, is the same as a God-CEO, or God-Brand, like Coke (the only word that unites the entire world. it's a thing where Republican is more holy than Christian, you can feel it when you go into a bank. it's a temple, where money lives. everyone is quite, and peaceful. if they aren't it speaks volumes of social decay. I think it's a univeral thing. a universal worship of power and gain. the ecstacy of gold if you will. all those old saying apply well. power corrupts, and the want of money is the root for all evil.
I get what your saying thought. and I agree with it, I don't think your tring to be anti-anything, but rather get a particualr point across. I'm not sure the best way of doing it, but I think alot of your stuff would come across to a religious person as simply anti-religion, not particually thoughtfull, admitly becuase of tention and the whole american "I don't want to hear thoughts that arn't mine" ideology. but I'm sure you could get the idea across that there is something inheriently currupt about giving in to a particular ideal.
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alejandroadam In reply to CapitalSeed [2006-10-31 08:52:17 +0000 UTC]
I think your pretty close to getting it across perfectly, after seeing more of your gallery
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CapitalSeed In reply to alejandroadam [2006-10-31 15:22:08 +0000 UTC]
getting there I guess- thanks for your thoughts though, always good to make sure one's piece is saying what they want it to say (if its not an open work that is)
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CapitalSeed In reply to boo-urns [2006-10-30 16:29:31 +0000 UTC]
a thousand "thank you's"
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CapitalSeed In reply to MabusOWP [2006-10-29 02:58:51 +0000 UTC]
that could be an interesting line to play with visually, thanks for the insight man
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CapitalSeed In reply to UnUnPentium115 [2006-10-28 21:43:31 +0000 UTC]
yea I agree- the description is super excessive lol
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KemicalReaxion [2006-10-27 16:40:17 +0000 UTC]
Nice concept, and brilliantly executed. I just have one question: Elvis was a religious figure?
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minion-for-hire [2006-10-27 10:58:44 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good. I like the imagery of the gravestones and the robot arm picking the next target.
I would point out thast dying was part of the point with some of these people...
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alvonia [2006-10-26 17:50:09 +0000 UTC]
Awesome concept. You did a good job balancinig the composition as well.
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BEETAK [2006-10-26 12:11:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow... this is a really interesting and inspiring idea. I love the use of line and the fact that you have got a great constrast between what appears to be the fore and what is behind it - even though the work is two-dimensional. I think that the whole work is beautiful - even with the more chilling message behind it!
Hv a wonderful day!
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