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Published: 2009-06-03 18:59:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1240; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 2
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i made this one today. it's for the inside album cover.it's a work in progress, and i'm looking for feedback!
--update--
i've made a few changes including a border, some colour adjustments, and a background. let me know what you think of the changes or the picture as a whole, and if there's anything that you think should change.
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this is absolutely amazing, i love the texture on her. i love her lazy, staring eyes.
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your style is so unique and breath-taking.
i think the only critique i can give just a small pop of somewhere. maybe like a matte pink or dark,dark red on the lips.
but how it is right now, is absolutely wonderful.
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yes, i see what you mean. i'm currently finishing off some other work first, but i will come back to this picture (and some of the others) for sure, and i'll definitely keep your critique in mind
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Dang, that would look so cool if you did that shiny on matte effect with her hair and her dress. Of course it looks cool already, and that wouldn't really work through the computers, but still.
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that's an interesting point. a friend of mine wants a poster of it, so i might look into that
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Hey, once again an impressive use of texturesit feels like your gallery is turning a bit darker...
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you don't know the power of the dark side...
also: thanks!
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OH I LURVE IT! love it so much it required the use of caps 
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thanks, much appreciation for the caps
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I honestly don't know what to say man, beside that I love it. It's so charming....she's sexy indeed. Looks like art nouveau and gothic are mixing together, feels like distorted jazz.
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thanks a lot dude, glad to hear it!
i'm really happy with your impression/interpretation
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I don't usually like gothic-style pieces, but this is really great
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haha thanks! but i was going for more of a 'dark cabaret with a paint-textured fashion-shoot in the rain twist' rather than 'gothic'!
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haha, my apologies, good sir! 
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This is really truly gorgeous. I love her skin... I like the amount of black space.
I guess I might play around with the texture of the lips. They look a little...dead and liney?
And maybe you could try doing something more with the eyes.
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yes, i think i will try and play around with the eyes and lips some more. i agree, they need to be refined a bit. more contrast perhaps. or something
thanks!
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Maybe try adding a splash of colours... mostly because the lips look just a bit dead.
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colour eh? i'll keep that in mind when i'm editing it again.
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By far one of my favorite pieces from you. My only complaint would be that there may be to much black space.
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regarding the black space, i've looked at it on other monitors, and i think much of the intended background texture is sometimes lost, depending on the monitor. so i'll work on that a bit.
aside from that, it will also be cropped to a square, which would reduce the black space, but i'll definitely try to keep it in mind when i'm deciding on the crop.
thanks!
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I readjusted my monitor and saw the rest of the detail, I take what I said back. Damn LCD... I want my CRT back.
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this is hardly a critique, but whatever, here it is: i ADORE it.
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thank you, i'm glad you do
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