Comments: 6
Pirasenshi [2019-06-17 19:16:20 +0000 UTC]
First off, I'm Pirasenshi! I'm from the group ProjectComment ! This is for the Big Comment Contest. I'll just give my views and thoughts on this artwork.
I love the idea for this artwork! The composition is good. The robot is also drawn well. Astronomer 's design is just prefect. It is simple and nice to look at. It's not too clustered, which is a bonus. The symmetry is well proportioned. The planets' lineart is good because it has good shading ( there's the core shadow and the reflected highlight). I feel that you do know the types of a shadows, which is really helpful when shading!
Also the short story was good. Liked how you described the scene.
If there's something I have to point out, its the technique used to shade the background. The shading in the background isn't smooth. The objects like the planets and Astronomer were shaded smoothly but the background could do some work.
I hope you find this comment helpful!
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CarpathianLion In reply to Pirasenshi [2019-06-18 07:28:53 +0000 UTC]
First, thanks for commenting and the compliments! They motivate me to work more.
Also, I understand that I have to work more on my backgrounds, and I will.
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archonedd [2019-04-15 22:30:30 +0000 UTC]
I have never watched you, but I came from ProjectComment (I'm a member) so here is my opinion.
This reminds me of the experience with the Mars Curiosity Rover from many many years back. It is totally exhilarating and shows off that the artist (you) have great taste in astronomy. I do too, and I am looking forward to more space art like these.
Even though there is no colour or anything like that (colour is not a mandatory thing, it's more of a bonus really) the sketching and shading is absolutely top-notch. It even looks great as a wallpaper for any smartphone or tablet with an OLED or AMOLED display so, great job!
It does have an ounce of originality, and the vision it sets out aspires the toddlers and kids from this generation (no matter their differences; let's unite as one) to look up to not just you as an artist, but also historical space explorers like Neil Armstrong!
So, to summarise..
Vision = 5/5
Originality = 4.5/5
Technique = 5/5
Impact = 5/5
Colouring = [not applicable]
Shading = 5/5
Visual style = 5/5
On the ProjectComment grading scale it is... a 29.5 out of 30.
Great job!
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This is archonedd ,
commenting on this beautiful art piece for ProjectComment
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CarpathianLion In reply to archonedd [2019-04-16 04:33:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for your comment! It means a lot to me that you seem to like it that much.
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