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Atlantihero-Kyoxei [2013-08-12 18:04:55 +0000 UTC]
Ooh I'm sorry, I accidentally commented my review of the story on here instead of the story - oops!
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CarryPhoenix In reply to Atlantihero-Kyoxei [2013-08-13 09:12:34 +0000 UTC]
Annnd just one more question. Do you mind if I... ahem... write a sequel?
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Atlantihero-Kyoxei [2013-08-12 18:04:06 +0000 UTC]
Awww, I love it so much! The story's a really good idea, and I'm so glad you used the Reapers/Bats/Whatever they're called - I've always wanted them to come back.
You wrote Kaster so well! I've never written any dialogue for him before, so I wasn't sure, but how you've done it is probably exactly like I would have, if that makes sense.
I love how you described his eyes - I never thought of them as unusually big, but now I'm inspired to make them like that. And how he was randomly started reciting the Jabberwock!
Also Rhodie is so cool! I love the idea of the Tomboy girl influencing her, and how she sees the TARDIS as slightly human.
Alice is totally adorable too - the BrigadierΒ cat is such a cute idea :3
The pieces of cloth at the end just make it so... dramatic! I love it!
Also, "Β "And I'm Kaster", the boy interfered" is my favourite line, just because 'Interfered' makes him sound a bit rude and that's exactly how he is XD
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CarryPhoenix In reply to Atlantihero-Kyoxei [2013-08-12 18:34:00 +0000 UTC]
Never mind that you put the comment "in the wrong place" - I'm truly glad that you like the story! You can rarely guess about other people's OCs' features, so... I'm happy that I caught yours right!
As about "Jabberwocky" - this very moment (Three singing it while digging in the car engine) is one of my favourite ones, so... I couldn't resist.
"Brigadier" wasn't my idea - it belongs to cuz it's her character: Alice carries this plushie with her because she wants to have a pet cat, but she's slightly allergic to cat fur.Β
And... at first (before getting the info) I thought that Kaster was ginger. Rude and ginger... like a little version of Vislor Turlough. *winks*
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bloody-rose-girl [2013-08-07 21:30:19 +0000 UTC]
This is addorable. When you finish the story can you respond to this comment with the link it will be much appreciated.
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Atlantihero-Kyoxei [2013-08-07 20:44:01 +0000 UTC]
Awww haha, I love them all! I never imagined Kaster as a child, and it's so sweet to see him in the jacket :3
(Also the T-shirt design. YES XD)
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CarryPhoenix In reply to Atlantihero-Kyoxei [2013-08-08 07:00:27 +0000 UTC]
He turned out to be a mini-Handy... and the T-shirt prank entered there by itself. Oooh dears...But I'm too glad you like it!
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