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Published: 2014-01-19 04:33:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1791; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 13
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The Big Lion seemed kinda Shy today, so i hoped this would Boost his confidence so wear can hear him Roar!Related content
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"The little lion is a little cat" xD
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So far, I guess he's at least confident enough to meow. X3 Cute. :3
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i see you like his belly
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*blushes* Aw, your just saying that. Do you really think it's hot?
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Hehe, well thanks little bro. E3
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Oh my, he's got a nice round tummy! 
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yeah, he is really nice to hug
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Don't let him land on you!
(Can i do a small remark about a misplaced line there?)
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what misplaced line?
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There is a line there that kinda looks bad IMO. It's betwin his belly and his left leg, from his perspective. It would look better if there was a gap there like the one in the belly line, right below his tongue.
I'm talking about the line that outlines his belly and connects to his leg (And it's kinda S shaped). I'm saying that line shouldn't connect to the leg and there should be a big gap there, separating them.
Sorry, it's hard to explain... It's just for aesthetics, it's nothing too serious. My opinion about it may not be the same as yours, i respect that. I just hope you find the line i am talking about.
The other leg is ok with that belly outline because of the perspective. Since he is in a sideways position, your can have the line separating belly and leg in the leg that is farther from your view, and in the leg that is close to your view, you simply dont draw the line.Β
Uff, english is hard...
Ah! Finally i found a good example! theportugueseplayer.deviantartβ¦
Look at Vlad in the 3rd and 4th frames. That is the belly outline gap i am talking about.
I don't know if you already do this this way, i'm just saying because i saw it now. It's nothing bad intentioned. Just tell me something about it later...
And sorry about my "small" remarks, they are not that small... Pretty scary isn't it? xD I just think if a comment has no information or feedback about the subject, it's just not worth commenting at all. I want my comments, and comments meant to me, to have information in them.
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i thank you, but i still can't find the line, Dang i was really proud of this one
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An artist is NEVER PROUD of his own work! This is the most important rule everyone should know! And you can bet your testicules i'm serious! (You better not...)
It's easier if i just show you.Β Link
It's still your image, but compare your original and this one to see what i mean. (And tell me something about it later!)
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i see now, thanks
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That drawing look really cute man !
Yes, sorry for being quiet most of the time, i just don't talk a lot.
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thats okay, but this just made me think of you
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yes sir, indeed he is
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oh please, he's harmless except when he's dangerous XP
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