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Description For my fire/smoke or ssteam competition coming up - any critique will be very welcome.

Should I horizontally flip this? I've tried but am not so sure it improves the image?
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Comments: 45

fiamen [2007-11-28 09:43:14 +0000 UTC]

I like it very much

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carterr In reply to fiamen [2007-11-28 10:45:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you - it just got Highly Commended in A Grade

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fiamen In reply to carterr [2007-11-28 11:17:01 +0000 UTC]

no wonder it's a very good picture

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carterr In reply to fiamen [2007-11-28 21:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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fiamen In reply to carterr [2007-11-28 22:01:01 +0000 UTC]

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AdamsWife [2007-11-03 00:07:35 +0000 UTC]

I think it is wonderful as it is. Very eye-catching

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carterr In reply to AdamsWife [2007-11-03 02:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ShutterMuse [2007-10-31 02:55:08 +0000 UTC]

I think it looks good as is.

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carterr In reply to ShutterMuse [2007-10-31 05:45:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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bee-nana [2007-10-29 09:15:24 +0000 UTC]

I think you should flip if vertical just for the hell of it!

Seriously, I think flipping it horizontally is just a matter of personal preference. There's a good bit of noise in the photo which isn't necessarily a bad thing, just something I noticed at full view. I think your composition is great and the smoke is wonderful the way it fills most of the space. I like the one red candle as well. Even though it's not the one in focus, it really jumps out at the viewer and I like that.

Now, go on, flip if vertical....I dare ya!!

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carterr In reply to bee-nana [2007-10-29 21:35:22 +0000 UTC]

I thought I had taken the noise out

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bee-nana In reply to carterr [2007-10-30 01:35:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't see any color noise, just some luminance noise in the smoke. Like I said, it's not a bad thing, just thought I'd mention it just in case. Good luck in the contest!! I really like this shot. I think it will do well.

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carterr In reply to bee-nana [2007-10-31 05:41:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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bee-nana In reply to carterr [2007-10-31 11:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Be sure to let us know how it goes!

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carterr In reply to bee-nana [2007-11-01 02:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Will do

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tamester [2007-10-29 08:50:09 +0000 UTC]

This shot makes me want to make a wish ... nicely done!

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carterr In reply to tamester [2007-10-29 21:35:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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JonGoldie [2007-10-28 09:48:50 +0000 UTC]

It's great as it is, if you flip it the title and your name would be backwards

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carterr In reply to JonGoldie [2007-10-28 21:22:28 +0000 UTC]

LOL - thats oay - I'd fix it LOL

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JonGoldie In reply to carterr [2007-10-28 22:35:02 +0000 UTC]

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DuckOfDeath [2007-10-27 17:08:23 +0000 UTC]

I think I might prefer it flipped, but that's not the same as saying it would be better. It's just a personal preference.

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DaisyMoon [2007-10-27 11:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Perfect as is I think. Nice shot.

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carterr In reply to DaisyMoon [2007-10-28 02:39:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Pecetta [2007-10-27 08:27:20 +0000 UTC]

Happy birthday....or somethin else!!

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carterr In reply to Pecetta [2007-10-27 09:16:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Pecetta In reply to carterr [2007-10-27 10:29:18 +0000 UTC]

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davincipoppalag [2007-10-27 01:10:41 +0000 UTC]

I think vertical works best for candles..if you flip it they kind of look like twisted cigarettes.. Excellent shot!

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carterr In reply to davincipoppalag [2007-10-27 01:27:05 +0000 UTC]

I meant flipped horizontally!

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davincipoppalag In reply to carterr [2007-10-27 01:30:43 +0000 UTC]

I know.. if it was horizontal they look like cigarettes ( I tilted my head to see how it would look) lol

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carterr In reply to davincipoppalag [2007-10-27 01:32:01 +0000 UTC]

no no - i meant fli i so the candles were on the left hand side, and the smoke driftting off to the right - insstead of the left

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davincipoppalag In reply to carterr [2007-10-27 01:35:27 +0000 UTC]

OOOOhh duh! lol ok that would work too! hahahhaah

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HeatherWaller-Rivet [2007-10-27 00:52:04 +0000 UTC]

i would leave it

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carterr In reply to HeatherWaller-Rivet [2007-10-27 09:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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HeatherWaller-Rivet In reply to carterr [2007-10-31 14:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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RichardMacDonald [2007-10-26 23:01:59 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't flip it. It looks better vertical. I might be tempted to tweek up the color saturation a bit to make the candles and smoke pop out a bit more.

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carterr In reply to RichardMacDonald [2007-10-26 23:07:20 +0000 UTC]

I menat horizonally - so the smoke goes to the right instea of the left

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RichardMacDonald In reply to carterr [2007-10-27 00:31:36 +0000 UTC]

OH! lol I'd leave it. I think this way your eyes are led L-R to the candles rather than away from them amd following the smoke to nothing.

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carterr In reply to RichardMacDonald [2007-10-27 09:14:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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icemother [2007-10-26 23:01:22 +0000 UTC]

I made a wish for you

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carterr In reply to icemother [2007-10-27 09:15:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - I hope it comes true

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icemother In reply to carterr [2007-10-27 13:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh I do for you too..

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eskimoblueboy [2007-10-26 22:58:00 +0000 UTC]

I don't think flipping is the way to go. How about less candle in view and more smoke?

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carterr In reply to eskimoblueboy [2007-10-27 09:15:40 +0000 UTC]

no more smoke

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SapphirexKitsune [2007-10-26 22:57:15 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...maybe give it a smoky border?

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carterr In reply to SapphirexKitsune [2007-10-27 09:16:23 +0000 UTC]

When I disply this in the copmetition -t her ewill be no borders

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