Comments: 26
girfreak15 [2011-08-08 08:18:15 +0000 UTC]
great story so far and everyones right the ending of twilight princess sucked because u could tell midna and link have somethin that each other dont know about and im now goin to continue ur story!
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theshexynator123 [2011-07-27 01:50:58 +0000 UTC]
i agree with you, i did not like the ending of twilight princess! im likingthe way you approach how you didnt like the ending! im gnna read this story!!
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NightWolfieGirl [2010-02-25 02:36:43 +0000 UTC]
super good and also, I hated the ending! couldn't midna at least say something?!? I love this so, yeah, thanks for bringing this awesomeness into the world.
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Fire-Link [2008-08-31 20:51:01 +0000 UTC]
I'm speechless I don't know what to say. Only that I like this story already. Keep on writing. I can't imagine what Link is going through. I hope he finds a way to see Midna again. I'll keep on reading.
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DarkMargravine [2008-02-19 19:57:09 +0000 UTC]
Love it! Finally link says..something! Will there be a second chapter? Please say there will be...
Keep up the good work!
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Cassina In reply to sylvidra [2008-02-04 21:59:57 +0000 UTC]
Merci beaucoup!
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Sapphire-Rogue [2008-01-28 15:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Very sad, but also very well written. I've noticed that you use 'gonna' instead of 'going' while writing about what people are doing. 'Gonna' is okay when someone is speaking, like; "I'm gonna go do this!" but in just plain old writing... It *does* have a tendancy to look a little strange.
There were a few spelling mistakes, and a little bit more puncutation is necessary - but overall, it was very well done. I can really sense the anguish and sorrow that Link is feeling after Midna's departure...
Well, I'm off to go read the second chapter. ^_^ And again, very well done.
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cstarry7 [2007-11-16 04:06:03 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting, are you going to write more? I would say, when using it out of speech - say "going to" instead of "gonna" seeing as that isn't really a word. Otherwise, very good. I'd like to read more!
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Cassina In reply to cstarry7 [2007-11-16 04:16:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Yes I'll write more. Part 2 is half done. I know the good way is "going to" it's just when I write I'm so used to use "gonna" because that's how I speak but yes
"going to" would be more appropriate for legend of Zelda.
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cstarry7 In reply to Cassina [2007-11-16 04:20:54 +0000 UTC]
Heheh. Ok - can't wait to read it! XD
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linkandzeldaforever [2007-11-13 04:17:10 +0000 UTC]
i dont know how it ended will you tell me?
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Cassina In reply to linkandzeldaforever [2007-11-13 04:57:39 +0000 UTC]
If you really wanna know ou can watch the end on youtube. Just type "Midna says goodbye to link & zelda" in the search area.
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Meeshell-Art [2007-11-12 10:18:02 +0000 UTC]
o wait
i think u already read it, well can u tell me what u think?????
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Meeshell-Art [2007-11-12 09:47:39 +0000 UTC]
ummmm also
i was wondering if u would check out a poem about them i made
and tell me what u think
if interested let me know and i'll give u a link ^^
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Meeshell-Art [2007-11-12 09:44:56 +0000 UTC]
thats bloody awesome
i love how u write and the story is so sad
awesome
i really like it
the only way u can improve is just fixing a few spelling errors but other than that it is great
really good
keep it up ^^
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