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innerpains [2018-12-14 13:22:25 +0000 UTC]

It looks very interesting at first, there's a lot of colors and effects The composition and anatomy looks good and I really like the white outline and shading on the legs. And with that, the fun begins and ends on the effects, I see how you wanted to mimic that skin's aesthetic - neon spray paint, but it feels cluttered in this case. I like the bottom half the most, the white floor/smoke effect as well as the white line turned out really nice, but to be fair i didn't even notice the letters "KDA" and when i did i read it as "VDA" because the lines in "K" aren't connected as strongly. I'd reccomend showcasing the letters more if you wanted to put them here, or just skip them. The first option would be better, then you could remove most of the splatters and lines that don't really fit and put letters in the center of attention (i also don't understand why every line would have a dangling lines under them, if it's to mimic how much spray was used and how it drips - it's good, but it's overdone as well. Less but more polished lines like that would do the trick). Overall it's pretty neat job, colors look fun and the piece drags attention to it. ^^

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Cheuryy [2018-12-12 04:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Awesome <3

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Kyle-Kish-ART [2018-12-09 17:19:33 +0000 UTC]

Hey, from project comment. First, I understand the college stress but it's awesome you're done exams now!

I enjoy the composition, the fact the figure has one leg straight gives the feeling of the image sitting more left center.

I like the play on saturated colours with an extremely dark background and the way you've played with a white outline really brings it together nicely.

If you play in this style more, I think shifting the line weight, making the figure more rounded, would help quite a bit with giving a more 3D feel to your figure while keeping the style you're going for. The texture effect you have on the hair and also the lighting on the legs is nice, however, with the foreground (fog?) it gets a little lost and muddy.

The last thing I want to mention is you have a lot of tangents. I am unsure if this is intentional but I simply want to mention just in case. The ones that do distract from the figure instead of pulling the viewer in are the one by the hair (the white line that crosses horizontally by the hair) and the white lines around the shoes.

The light blue curved line on the left of the torso and upper legs hugs the figure well and brings the viewers’ attention to the focal points.

I really enjoyed how different this was and that it almost feels like looking at someone who is going to a UV dance club.

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NeonLore [2018-12-09 01:26:20 +0000 UTC]

Heyyo!
I was browsing the Project Comment Gallery and came across this image.
I personally think you did a great job!
The colors work well together, the lighting is done well, and the anatomy is on point.
The shading on Akali is pretty great too.
However, I think you could improve here on Foreground, middleground, and background.
The whole image seems kind of flat and I can see where the grounds could be used.
I give this an 8.5/10! Great work!

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DavidEllisArtwork [2018-12-07 22:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I love this artwork! The vibrant colours against the darker tones really catch the eye and overall make this a visually stunning piece! I love the pose too, the over the shoulder glare is a great pose when utilised well, and you definitely have executed it well! 

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edwardjrenegaud [2018-12-07 13:04:44 +0000 UTC]

SO...MUCH...COL-*seizure mode activated*  

This looks cool.

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matcha-royaltea [2018-12-05 12:53:58 +0000 UTC]

YES YOU DID EXCEPTIONALLY WELL
AS USUAL
DESPITE YOUR WORRYING

what is this
why is it so bright and pretty 
I love this

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ProtoTEnterprise [2018-12-04 18:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I´m from   

A very intense drawing
A very striking character design, colors and colors too bright, virtually being Neon colors, a back anatomy very well achieved, a dress design quite striking and sublime with that all detailed dragon and those brands that look like tribal tattoos in Neon gives more intensity to the character in terms of brightness and more that kind of pink stick that has.

The fund is incredible. Explode the view with such details in Neon. It is undoubtedly a great game of neat and bright spots and lines
This is one of the brightest drawings I've seen on DeviantArt    

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Charlene-Art [2018-12-04 15:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Really neat! Overall I really like the neon light/ graffiti look here - it's very unique! The colour scheme reminds me of Suicide Squad. The design on her jacket is nice too. 

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ashelol42 [2018-12-04 14:29:42 +0000 UTC]

I love the lighting in this, it looks awesome! Though it feels like there's a little bit too much maybe. Not saying its bad or anything. Its definitely great, just seems that if you lessen little bit of the neon lines around her it would help it more, it also feels like its lacking some shadow work. Aside from that its a great work. I especially love the details on the jacket. Bravo  

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Multi-Dimension [2018-12-04 13:31:10 +0000 UTC]

holy hecc i love those style of artworks!! I think it's called neon? 
LOVE IT SO MUCH OMG!!! 

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Lyrexios [2018-12-04 13:02:16 +0000 UTC]

OOF soo cool I love this one!

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marijeberting [2018-12-02 13:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work

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Passin [2018-12-01 14:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Also, good luck with your exams

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Passin [2018-12-01 14:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Still, KDA is awesome. Nice work

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