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Published: 2011-02-02 03:17:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 400; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 7
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Description Another piece with masking fluid. I like how this one came out but the scanner butchered it.
New OC but he needs a name. Ideas?
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Comments: 8

Melimaiel [2011-02-13 11:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Critique requested from :

Hi dear

First of all I would like to say that this is a really great concept and the composition is very well done too!Absolutely love the colors

To work with art masking fluid can be a real challenge, but you did a rather good job with it. There are still some unclean edges, but I am sure they will disappear with some more practise

Sadly your work looks somewhat blurry, mainly at the bottom. I assume it has something to do with the scanner Another thing that I would like to suggest is to redefine your lines after the coloring process. The lines look rather pale know. You could do it with a mechanical pencil or by inking the lines. Either way,I think it would add a nice contrast to the rest of your work This is just a suggestion, but I think the background would have been very nice with a grey and black wash techniques. Starting with grey at the bottom and ending with black in the top. I think that would have given your picture a rather dynamic feel. But well, as I said that is just my personal opinion!

Well, anyway nice work Really would like to see more from you! Keep it up

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cattyinlove In reply to Melimaiel [2011-02-13 18:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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The-Knowing-Oz [2011-02-03 22:11:14 +0000 UTC]

name him nelson! just kidding. you should do something unexpected that doesn't seem to fit him at all.good luck and good job.

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moonshard1997 [2011-02-02 23:03:53 +0000 UTC]

awesome. I love the contrast between the background and your oc. I also love the skulls

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cattyinlove In reply to moonshard1997 [2011-02-03 23:22:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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oOariiOo [2011-02-02 15:34:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm kinda awful with names...
And...
Since you suubmitted this to the critique group I thought I'd point this out: the neck is wayyy to thin ... and the arms don't show any joints or.... it could be the style but...
Anywayz the colored skull gives it a nice touch... maybe the figure could be a little darker to go well with the background but ANYWAY I really like the overall picture...
You can laugh at my sorry excuse for a critique now... I really hope I helped with something xDDD I suppose I didn't...
So...

Okay, sorry for the idiotic comment, have a now

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cattyinlove In reply to oOariiOo [2011-02-04 01:53:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks sooooo much for commenting a useful comment! The thin neck is part of the style but I'm mostly just lazy with the arms. xD I'm still learning a lot with watercolors, so my quality with them is still so-so.

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oOariiOo In reply to cattyinlove [2011-02-04 13:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh... hehe... sorry then xDDD Anyways, it's still a pretty drawing

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