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Description Angela was an artist, but not in the conventional sense. She didn't use canvas and paint, and the idea of sculpting something made out of a material as mundane as clay made her want to vomit. She loathed the idea of creating art for art's sake; anything she made, she wanted there to be a practical use for it, something beyond decoration.

She labored on each piece she created for countless hours, making sure every detail was perfect. Sometimes it could take months for her to finish a single work. She'd always ask me to take a look at her pieces and demanded that I point out something she could improve upon. I was never an artist myself, but thanks to Angela I was able to spot the tiniest flaws in design.

Angela drew her inspiration from everywhere: nature, mythology, both ancient and modern culture. The list went on and on. Once, she sculpted Atlas, the Greek titan who supported the world, and fashioned him into a rather nice coffee table. She chose to reject the semi modern idea of him supporting a spherical Earth, and made him support the flat disk that the planet was believed to be at the time. Made out of a striking flame maple, my only comment was that the proportions in Atlas' body, specifically his arms, were a bit off, but I understood that it was necessary to provide proper support to the tabletop. Other than that one flaw, everything else about the piece was perfect.

I was entranced by the detail in every aspect of Atlas' body. His face showed excruciating pain from countless millennia of supporting the entire Earth, the veins in his neck bulged, and every muscle in his body was strained to the point of breaking. And that was just his body. The intricate detail of each continent and ocean was astounding. Mountains and waves were represented with unparalleled accuracy. The entirety of the top was covered by glass, to make the surface usable as a table. I was so taken by the piece that I bought it from Angela without thinking twice. Atlas now bears his load in my living room.

Today, Angela called me over to her home to critique her most recent work. She told me it was her best yet, and I believed her wholeheartedly because I had seen her visibly improve over the many years of our friendship. I had to admit I was excited to see her new piece myself. I knocked on her door and waited in silent anticipation.

"Elizabeth! I'm so glad you could make it on such short notice!" Angela exclaimed as she answered the door and threw her arms around me. It wasn't really short notice, though; she told me about the finished project a week ago. But for Angela, everything is short notice because she always seems rushed, for whatever reason.

"Never a problem, Angela," I replied, humoring her, "I was free anyway. So now tell me about this piece you've just finished! Ever since you mentioned it, I've been dying to get a peek at it!"

"Patience, my dear Elizabeth," she chided, taking me by the hand and leading me through her front door.

Although Angela didn't like creating art solely for decoration, she adored filling her home with such art, so every time I walked into her house, I always scanned the room for any additions to the quirky little assortment of decorations. Last time I visited her, Angela had bought a charming yet gaudy assortment of vintage wall clocks. My personal favorite was a clock that looked like it came directly from a cartoon. It had the shape of a cat, and the tail acted as the pendulum that kept ticking and tocking as each second passed. The eyes surveyed the room from left to right and back again, too.

This time, I noticed the absence of a few objects. Nothing that Angela herself was overly attached to, but enough was gone that I noticed. A few of her clocks, a handful of statuettes on her coffee table, and a single framed painting were gone. I thought that was odd because in all the years that I knew her, I had never seen Angela throw a decoration out.

"Angela, what happened to a few of your decorations?" I queried.

"Oh I just had to sell some of them to finance the project I'm about to show you," she replied, waving my question off as if it were nothing.

"It must certainly be something fantastic, then!"

"I'm sure you'll love it," she said smoothly, "I'm fairly sure that I've spent more time on this project than on any other one, even Atlas."

After she said that, I let my mind wander as I imagined the enormity of her latest work. The Atlas table was big and endlessly detailed. The piece I was about to see must be even more beautiful, and the potential physical size almost scared me, but I trusted that whatever Angela had created, it would be beautiful.

As she led me through the winding maze of hallways—avoiding any objects that happened to be lying on the floor—to her workshop, I was almost shaking in anticipation. I stopped her.

"Angela, you have to tell me what this new piece is. I can't take it."

"Don't worry yourself to death, Elizabeth. You'll see it soon enough," she teased.

It was then that I realized that she wasn't leading me to her workshop; we took a turn down an adjacent hallway that I had never been to before.

"Angela, where are we going?" I asked, "I don't think I've ever been down this hall."

"I'm taking you to my bedroom. I don't really plan on selling this piece, at least not to strangers. I'm either keeping it or selling it to a close friend, much like I did with Atlas."

I was curious as to why Angela would choose to keep her own work, especially one that she had spent so much time and money on. Her art was how she made her living, after all.

As we wound down the hallway, we finally reached a closed door at the very end, surprisingly bare.

"Alright, here we go," said Angela as she opened the door. Her statement seemed to alleviate my anxiety, for whatever reason.

Angela's room was bare. Not just compared to the rest of her house, but in comparison to anyone's house. The wallpaper on her walls was mostly white with thin, dark blue designs here and there. The desk against the opposite wall was white, although the top was covered in doodles that I figured were preliminary blueprints for Angela's creations. On the wall to the left wall there was her bed. If she were to lean on her headboard and look out the window, her view would be gorgeous. No wonder everything she created was beautiful. She always got to see beauty, so she wanted others to see it too.

"So Angela," I began skeptically, "where's your piece? All I see is your desk and your bed."

"Take a look above the bed."

Above her headboard was dream catcher, though it looked too simple to be crafted by Angela's expert hand. She gingerly removed it and brought it to me. Only then could I see its startling beauty.

"Angela, what materials did you use to make this?" I asked, not believing the astounding beauty displayed before me.

"Well, I suppose I'll start from the center and go outward from there," she began, "all the jewels are real, nothing is cubic zirconium. The one in the middle is a fine amethyst. The surrounding mesh is sterling silver because I just couldn't bring myself to use steel; I really wanted to go all out. The outer ring, the one semicircle inside, the two prongs, the two rings containing the emerald and sapphire, and of course the hanger are all bronze. The cogs are sterling silver as well; I can't tell you how long it took me to make each of them."

"Oh my goodness, Angela," I could barely get the words out, "It's…it's beautiful!"

"I'm not done explaining it yet," she shushed me, "those were just the materials I used. Now check this out."

She unhooked a latch at the top of the rings that held the emerald and sapphire and brought out a chain for each of them. She threaded each onto the chain and put one around her neck. Then she put the other around mine.

I was speechless. I could scarcely believe that Angela created this, and I couldn't even fathom how.

"Angela, I—"

"I made it for you, Elizabeth," she said as she cut me off, "You've looked at all the pieces I've ever made, and you've even bought one that you fell in love with. And I can tell by the look on your face that you've fallen in love with this one, too.

"I know I make my life this way, and each piece I sell counts, but I can survive without selling one piece, so take it. I call it 'Steam Catcher'."

I didn't say anything after that. We just wordlessly embraced, saying more in a hug than we ever could with words. I spent a few more hours at Angela's while we listened to music and sipped a few glasses of wine. And when I went home that night, I proudly hung up the dream catcher above my bed. I slept better that night than I ever had before.
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Comments: 46

namenotrequired [2012-09-16 21:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on your place in the contest! I featured this on #communityrelations in What's Going On??

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CDing93 In reply to namenotrequired [2012-09-16 22:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a ton!

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namenotrequired In reply to CDing93 [2012-09-16 22:54:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I hope you'll enjoy it

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InterstellarShadow [2012-09-16 15:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on getting second place on the steamcatcher contest!

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CDing93 In reply to InterstellarShadow [2012-09-16 17:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a ton! Thanks to that contest, I earned myself a DLD for this piece, too!

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InterstellarShadow In reply to CDing93 [2012-09-16 17:18:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I judged the contest, and I did really like your submission!

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CDing93 In reply to InterstellarShadow [2012-09-16 18:03:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it!

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doodlerTM [2012-08-13 23:39:47 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed this because of the way that you portrayed the friendship in the story and led up to/teased the reader to the climax at the end of the story. Bravo! The story made me happy, and it usually takes a lot for a piece on deviantART to evoke emotion on my end as a reader. Thank you for sharing it. I would love to hear more about these characters!

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CDing93 In reply to doodlerTM [2012-08-14 00:27:26 +0000 UTC]

About the characters, I'm not so sure yet. But more writing will definitely happen!

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JoeyLiverwurst [2012-08-13 08:07:40 +0000 UTC]

This was nice! I was afraid something horrible was going to happen at the end, and very happy it did not.

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CDing93 In reply to JoeyLiverwurst [2012-08-13 22:29:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I decided that since depressing endings are all too common, I'd lighten it up a bit!

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JoeyLiverwurst In reply to CDing93 [2012-08-13 22:56:22 +0000 UTC]

I think that's worth a watch.

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CDing93 In reply to JoeyLiverwurst [2012-08-13 23:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, thanks! You're always more than welcome to take a look at my other pieces, too

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xlntwtch [2012-08-07 02:29:12 +0000 UTC]

This piece is full of terrific description. From the loving details given readers about what Angela creates, in particular that Atlas coffee table, to a mention of dream catchers caught me up this story right away. I wished for yet more description of each dream catcher, though I know it can be difficult to balance a story with both description and action. It was well done here. We see both characters fairly well.We see the art very well.

I appreciated how Angela gave her previously unnamed friend (the narrator) a dream catcher, one of two also described, but only one in as much detail. I've seen all sorts of dream catchers in my fairly long life, and was very interested these. I still wish I knew why the one is called "Steam Catcher," the one given to Elizabeth. Is Elizabeth's anxiety addressed here? Is she 'into' steampunk reading/creating in some way? To end a story on a note that leaves readers wondering and wishing for more is also a good talent - well displayed here. Thank you.

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CDing93 In reply to xlntwtch [2012-08-07 02:47:26 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! Thank you for leaving such an in-depth comment! I secretly hope the Atlas table exists somewhere...and if I ever find it, I won't hesitate to buy it. Or I might commission it at some point in the distant future...who knows?

And the theme of the contest I entered it in was to include the dream catcher mentioned (actually made by the host of the contest) in some way. Whatever way is up to the author. I haven't gotten the results yet, but first prize is the actual dream catcher, so here's hoping I win!

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xlntwtch In reply to CDing93 [2012-08-07 02:53:10 +0000 UTC]

I'll wish with you in my way. And say "Good luck!"

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CDing93 In reply to xlntwtch [2012-08-07 02:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll need all I can get. The other entries are good, too. I'll be sure to let you know how it turns out!

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xlntwtch In reply to CDing93 [2012-08-07 03:11:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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xlntwtch [2012-08-06 09:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Please excuse the missing word below "...might make even me..." Oops.

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xlntwtch [2012-08-06 08:16:20 +0000 UTC]

... ... a great short story that might even me sleep better tonight...

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CDing93 In reply to xlntwtch [2012-08-06 21:30:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it
And I can forgive one little typo

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xlntwtch In reply to CDing93 [2012-08-07 02:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Good, I'm glad you can forgive an entire missing word!

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CDing93 In reply to xlntwtch [2012-08-07 02:05:34 +0000 UTC]

I've omitted words before, so it's always understandable

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xlntwtch In reply to CDing93 [2012-08-07 02:32:48 +0000 UTC]

..for me, anyway..

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XxCrazyAppleGirlxX [2012-08-06 08:07:25 +0000 UTC]

beautifully written. congratulations on the DLD. c:

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CDing93 In reply to XxCrazyAppleGirlxX [2012-08-06 21:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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XxCrazyAppleGirlxX In reply to CDing93 [2012-08-12 17:22:45 +0000 UTC]

you're very much welcome. c:

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DailyLitDeviations [2012-08-06 03:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.

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CDing93 In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2012-08-06 21:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness! Thank you so much!

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lm0038 [2012-07-09 21:45:34 +0000 UTC]

this was a beautifully written story. Fascinating charecters and great concept. also, you;re style of writting is so readable it makes me want to cry. unlike most things i read, this story didnt make me stumble or confuse me a single time. your word choice was clear and each sentence flowed into the next with ease. you should be very proud.

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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-09 21:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!
I take great pride in two things: My grammar and my word choice.
I'm so glad you liked it! And you even took the time to comment! I love people like you

And of course, thanks for the fave!

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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-09 22:12:28 +0000 UTC]

you should take pride in them. you're a remarkable writter. and of course!! i don't understand why peopl woulde see something they loveand not say anything. you are very welcome!

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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-09 22:24:01 +0000 UTC]

I like to think I'm decent for my age. Though it's incredibly difficult to get noticed as a writer, regardless of age.
And I dunno. People think a fave and pass is good enough, especially when it comes to literature. Personally I can't fave a literature piece without giving my own opinion on it, though when it comes to traditional art, I'm at a loss for words.

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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-09 22:44:47 +0000 UTC]

im not very good at commenting on traditional art, but i try my best unless i see that the person who made it has so many comments, they probably dont even read them. (or if they dont speak english)
but for the record, you are way more than decent!! how old are you?
and a fave and a pass is nice, but it much better to get some feedback!

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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-09 22:51:26 +0000 UTC]

I thriiiiive off of feedback! It lets me know what I can do better for next time. And I'm 19, never had any formal training in writing

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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-09 23:00:08 +0000 UTC]

well, you should consider writting a novel. i know for a fact that I'd buy it, and i think a lot of other people would too. seriously.

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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-10 00:10:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually working on one, as a matter of fact! I'm on chapter six!

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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-10 00:29:39 +0000 UTC]

omg yaay! you have to let me know the second you get it published!!!

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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-10 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]

I'll be sure to! Though it could take years lol

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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-10 01:01:05 +0000 UTC]

could i get a sneak peak? pretty please?

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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-10 01:03:04 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I dunnoooo. I mean I'm going to be writing a bunch of short stories soon for some contests I want to enter. Could you perhaps read those in the mean time? And there's always the rest of my gallery!

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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-10 01:08:46 +0000 UTC]

okay, good enough. hahaha. but you better keep working on your book!

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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-10 01:16:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh I will! No worries about that
Thank you so much for the compliments, by the way. They really mean a lot to me.

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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-10 01:17:41 +0000 UTC]

no problem! i meant every word.

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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-10 01:18:46 +0000 UTC]

You're too kind

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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-10 01:27:35 +0000 UTC]

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