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InterstellarShadow [2012-09-16 15:05:01 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on getting second place on the steamcatcher contest!
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CDing93 In reply to InterstellarShadow [2012-09-16 17:16:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a ton! Thanks to that contest, I earned myself a DLD for this piece, too!
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InterstellarShadow In reply to CDing93 [2012-09-16 17:18:08 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I judged the contest, and I did really like your submission!
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CDing93 In reply to doodlerTM [2012-08-14 00:27:26 +0000 UTC]
About the characters, I'm not so sure yet. But more writing will definitely happen!
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CDing93 In reply to JoeyLiverwurst [2012-08-13 22:29:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I decided that since depressing endings are all too common, I'd lighten it up a bit!
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CDing93 In reply to JoeyLiverwurst [2012-08-13 23:03:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, thanks! You're always more than welcome to take a look at my other pieces, too
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xlntwtch [2012-08-07 02:29:12 +0000 UTC]
This piece is full of terrific description. From the loving details given readers about what Angela creates, in particular that Atlas coffee table, to a mention of dream catchers caught me up this story right away. I wished for yet more description of each dream catcher, though I know it can be difficult to balance a story with both description and action. It was well done here. We see both characters fairly well.We see the art very well.
I appreciated how Angela gave her previously unnamed friend (the narrator) a dream catcher, one of two also described, but only one in as much detail. I've seen all sorts of dream catchers in my fairly long life, and was very interested these. I still wish I knew why the one is called "Steam Catcher," the one given to Elizabeth. Is Elizabeth's anxiety addressed here? Is she 'into' steampunk reading/creating in some way? To end a story on a note that leaves readers wondering and wishing for more is also a good talent - well displayed here. Thank you.
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CDing93 In reply to xlntwtch [2012-08-07 02:47:26 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! Thank you for leaving such an in-depth comment! I secretly hope the Atlas table exists somewhere...and if I ever find it, I won't hesitate to buy it. Or I might commission it at some point in the distant future...who knows?
And the theme of the contest I entered it in was to include the dream catcher mentioned (actually made by the host of the contest) in some way. Whatever way is up to the author. I haven't gotten the results yet, but first prize is the actual dream catcher, so here's hoping I win!
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xlntwtch In reply to CDing93 [2012-08-07 02:53:10 +0000 UTC]
I'll wish with you in my way. And say "Good luck!"
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CDing93 In reply to xlntwtch [2012-08-07 02:57:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'll need all I can get. The other entries are good, too. I'll be sure to let you know how it turns out!
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xlntwtch [2012-08-06 09:12:01 +0000 UTC]
Please excuse the missing word below "...might make even me..." Oops.
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XxCrazyAppleGirlxX [2012-08-06 08:07:25 +0000 UTC]
beautifully written. congratulations on the DLD. c:
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lm0038 [2012-07-09 21:45:34 +0000 UTC]
this was a beautifully written story. Fascinating charecters and great concept. also, you;re style of writting is so readable it makes me want to cry. unlike most things i read, this story didnt make me stumble or confuse me a single time. your word choice was clear and each sentence flowed into the next with ease. you should be very proud.
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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-09 22:24:01 +0000 UTC]
I like to think I'm decent for my age. Though it's incredibly difficult to get noticed as a writer, regardless of age.
And I dunno. People think a fave and pass is good enough, especially when it comes to literature. Personally I can't fave a literature piece without giving my own opinion on it, though when it comes to traditional art, I'm at a loss for words.
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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-09 22:51:26 +0000 UTC]
I thriiiiive off of feedback! It lets me know what I can do better for next time. And I'm 19, never had any formal training in writing
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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-09 23:00:08 +0000 UTC]
well, you should consider writting a novel. i know for a fact that I'd buy it, and i think a lot of other people would too. seriously.
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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-10 00:10:53 +0000 UTC]
I'm actually working on one, as a matter of fact! I'm on chapter six!
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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-10 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]
I'll be sure to! Though it could take years lol
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CDing93 In reply to lm0038 [2012-07-10 01:03:04 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...I dunnoooo. I mean I'm going to be writing a bunch of short stories soon for some contests I want to enter. Could you perhaps read those in the mean time? And there's always the rest of my gallery!
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lm0038 In reply to CDing93 [2012-07-10 01:08:46 +0000 UTC]
okay, good enough. hahaha. but you better keep working on your book!
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