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CelestialTeez — Six Bowling Strikes
Published: 2011-12-20 02:49:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1140; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 14
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She throws her arm behind her slightly, then brings her arm back forward and releases the ball.It rolls down the lane and hits the pins, knocking them all over.
“Yes!” she yells, waving her arms over her head in a “v”. “Heck yes! I am the master of bowling!”
An elderly man in another lane looks at us, confused, and the man who rented us our shoes shakes his head with an oh-you-kids smile.
Why do I make my characters meet in places like the mall and the bowling alley?? Why didn't I just stick them all in some giant white room?? Oh well
This is officially halfway through the story!! And we get a sort of plot, as you can see
Ch 6: [link] Huzzah, Wattpad!! I have defeated you!!!
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Comments: 37
ehehehehe giant white room... do i see a new story coming? ehehehehhehehehe and that is a damn sexy bowling ball heheheh and Zach stole Jillian's beanie
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I should seriously consider another Zach/Jillian story
I love them so much
LOLsexy bowling ball
and omg he did wow who's the psycho in a beanie now
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OH MY GOD PLEASE DO THAT WOULD BE AMAZING
and hey, that is a damn fine bowling ball. no judging!
ME! I am totally the psycho in a beanie. yes, lets make it happen
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She thinks Eli is cute *shrug* I bet you'd thinkso too
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOO ahhhhh. >-< I'm in love with this story but NOOOOOOOOOOO. Jilliannnnn D: Whyyyyy? I wish to smack that girl upside the head! You is blind to what is IN FRONT OF YOU, WOMAN!!!
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haha well Zach is equally blind!!! lol he was all scared that she would like him instead of Eli hah
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Very very true. They both need to just....fall in love. like...now. I command it. xD haha
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I still have to read five and this one cause my internet has officially gone bezerk.
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oh noes!!! I hope your internet is fixed soon!
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I know!!! I hope so too! I can read messages and stuff but outgoing links and such are having problems...
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thanks!!! Just wait it'll get even cuter- and cuter!!
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Okay, this was a cute scene but.....
JILLIAN WHYYYYY????
but zach and...eli....but....i....what....noooo.....really??...come on!!! 
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hahahah!! Oh goodness I love your guys' distress! Just wait i think todays chapter will cheer you up
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B-b-b-b-b-b-b-b
Y U NO FALL FOR ZACH, JILLIAN! *cries*
You two are meant to be! Like Rapuzel and Eugene!
SEE! It's destiny!
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lol that is the most random analogy ever, UmbreLink. Seriously, lol but it made me laugh AND reminded me i have to rewatch Tangled, so thanks
Also lol if she fell for Zach it would just be TOO easy XD
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Why thank you haha. I'm glad I could make you laugh
And I know. But it's still like 'Ohmahgah dun go back to Eli!'xD
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Everything you make is like sparkled with cuteness on top all over cuteness...
I CAN'T TAKE IT! O_O *cuteness overload*
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no...no...no...NO....NO....NONONONONONONO!!!! SHE IS SUPPOSED TO BE WITH ZACH!!!!!! GAH!!!!! man!! ugh!! ffffffffuuuuuu! GAAH! man! Gawd!! C'mon!!! i mean REALLY??!! REGAN GETS IT!!! C'MON!!! GAHHH!! i AM VENTING I AM SORRY!! but......come ON!!! Eli why!!??? BAHH!!! Dang it Jill! GAHHHH!! jeez gosh dang it!! *pants because out of breath* *keeps venting like there is no tomorrow*
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BAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
I love that my story got you so worked up!!! ^^
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yeah...be happy. I AM STILL....GAHH!! okokokok calm down mjt calm *taking deep breaths* i love your story
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How-how dare you?
At least Zach felt something.
ELI, Y U RUIN MY LOVE???
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HAHAHAHAHAHA oh, oh gosh this comment just makes me laugh so much
darn you Eli!! Stealing Jillian's love away from Zach!!
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I've become a total fan of this story ;u; I really love all the characters and your writing style! 
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oh thank you!! that means so much coming from the author of one of my favorite comics!
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he ISSS!!! ehem i mean oh really thank you ^^
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