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This is the first page of my Suikoden doujinshi (yeah, more comic. Sorry, but I want and need to practice more on this).
Since Suikoden is not that well-known, I'll try to add extra info on it for those that don't know the series. In any case, I hope you enjoy the art, even if you can't follow the story.
I've tried to stick to official info as much as possible (not counting the manga as canon).
I wanted the pencil tolook softer, but in-screen was barely visible, so I had to darken it more (digitally). I also darkened the white, since it was kinda eye-killing...
Added some screentoning, but looks like plain grey with the resizing T_T
This page it's all BG, and you know I'm no good at that >_< Some perspectives are wrong and all (sorry).
This is the images Luc is having in his vision (wich are grey, lifeless landscapes. Hard to represent in a B/W comic XD )
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I don't know what Suikoden is, but your story was making me want to find out more!
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It's a Japanese RPG videogame series by KONAMI. The first 3 are simply masterpieces, thiugh they're very old and very hard to find this days T_T (unless you can read Japanese) The first one is up on the US Play Station Store though.
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pues si, si lo dejas asi a lapiz le da un toque mas suave, no se, queda bonito... tambien depende que tipo de trazo, si fuera el mio, con lineas super gruesas, quedaria feo xDDDDD pero el tuyo es agradable 
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pues aunque digas que no eres buena en los fondos...para mí lo eres XD. Y sobre la perspectiva pues ni lo noto toy muy mensa para eso
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Los interiores que hago aun son bastante pobres, pero bueno. Lo intento XDDD
Muchas gracias ^_^
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Thank you very much
And it's so much faster too!! XD
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Oo, what a creepy setting. Makes for a great opening. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
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Thank you very much ^_^
Yeah, this one is more on the depressive side XD
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If the narration isn't being said by a character who talks like that, then all the "nor"s should be "or" instead.
I've only played the Suikoden game with the duck. I do like this, so far, though. You set up the scene well.
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Really? O_o Looks too weird like this??
That's III XD So I think you'll get it(if you remember the story)
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I mean, with proper grammar, it'd be neither/nor, but if someone's narrating it, then s/he can talk any way they want to.
Thanks for telling!
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Guess Luc speaks normally, so I shall correct whenever I can O_O (Thank you for explaining ^^ )
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Another one! I'm sure it will be just as good if not better than the previous ones
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AHHH YOU STARTED IT I CANT WAIT FOR MORE THIS IS GONNA BE SO AWESOME.
English Suikoden Doujin are few and far between. Can't wait to see Luc I know you draw him mega sexy
AND YOUR BGS ARE AWESOME SHADDAP
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XD Thanks XDDD
I have a few Japanese ones (there's tons in JP) But in english, they're rare. The only place I know making Suikoden doujinshi scanlations favors V the most (and I don't like V T_T )
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yay <3<3 can't wait for more c: maybe it inspires or motivates me to do some pages xD
Great perspectives!
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