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Charlene-Art [2018-06-22 15:13:35 +0000 UTC]
So true.
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DC-26 [2018-04-04 11:16:36 +0000 UTC]
I always enjoy your poems so much; love seeing this one get a dd.
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harrietsfriend [2018-03-14 05:31:03 +0000 UTC]
i call these tangents.
eugene
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RJBG [2018-03-14 02:22:32 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work! ( :
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cerealnovels In reply to RJBG [2018-03-14 22:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you πΒ
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RJBG In reply to cerealnovels [2018-03-18 20:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome ( :
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cerealnovels In reply to LindArtz [2018-03-14 00:40:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!π
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BrendaCarriere [2018-03-13 11:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I love how each line builds on and modifies what came before it. Also, how except for the second line, which has to stand in opposition, every line refers to movement or the lack of it. And then the second line and the title just finish it off. Lovely and melancholy.
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HaganeSora [2017-12-06 01:33:39 +0000 UTC]
I agree. Even when places are abandoned or demolished, the memories remain.Β Β Very well-written!
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cerealnovels In reply to Suvi-Iloa [2017-12-06 01:01:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your kind words. They mean a lot to me π
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