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ch3shir3cat — dear life,
Published: 2011-07-20 21:56:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 2
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Description It feels as if my heart is holding its breath
It's afraid of what would happen if it slowed down
If it stopped racing, pulsing, pushing the blood through

It needs to take some time for itself now
To stop carrying the weight of others
And just focus on healing its wounds

I can feel the pressure in me
You are making it build
I feel the pulse forcing its way through every vein in my body

This race is becoming too much for me
My body can't handle this rush for much longer
The pressure must subside before I close my eyes
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Comments: 12

willyoudieforme [2011-08-27 07:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Come to me and let your pain and anger on me I'll bear it all!


Great poem, a lot of feelings in it, hope you're heart heal fast

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ch3shir3cat In reply to willyoudieforme [2011-08-27 22:12:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks - it was literally just one of those days where there was no time to stop and have a break, i wrote it in my head as i power-walked to try and catch a bus!haha

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willyoudieforme In reply to ch3shir3cat [2011-08-28 16:19:29 +0000 UTC]

The story about the poem is great to

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ch3shir3cat In reply to willyoudieforme [2011-08-28 20:51:07 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks

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willyoudieforme In reply to ch3shir3cat [2011-08-29 09:06:16 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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killingursoulXx [2011-07-30 20:27:41 +0000 UTC]

I think I know how that feels.....i really like this

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poeticflow24 [2011-07-24 22:25:03 +0000 UTC]

i meant

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poeticflow24 [2011-07-24 22:24:46 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. I am speachless.

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ch3shir3cat In reply to poeticflow24 [2011-07-25 07:54:24 +0000 UTC]

oww thank you

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VielBlackheart22 [2011-07-20 23:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow

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ch3shir3cat [2011-07-20 22:07:44 +0000 UTC]

how much are you willing to bet?

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dildroid [2011-07-20 21:57:36 +0000 UTC]

I bet you think you're in real pain. I would wager you think you are the only one in the world who could feel the way you do.

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