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Published: 2017-03-30 03:14:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 32866; Favourites: 2457; Downloads: 331
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Description This is a piece based on personal experience. I would call this one of those "sketches that went too far". The pose was probably the most difficult part.

On another note, good luck to all other contest entrants! This contest gave me the perfect opportunity to express myself. Win or not, I'm proud of this piece. I'll post my progress once the contest is over.

Some one introduced me to this french poem after I shared this, and I can't help but post it. It's by a poet named Saint-Denys-Garneau. 
Cage d'oiseau

Je suis une cage d'oiseau
Une cage d'os
Avec un oiseau

L'oiseau dans sa cage d'os
C'est la mort qui fait son nid

Lorsque rien n'arrive
On entend froisser ses ailes

Et quand on a ri beaucoup
Si l'on cesse tout à coup
On l'entend qui roucoule
Au fond
Comme un grelot

C'est un oiseau tenu captif
La mort dans ma cage d'os

Voudrait-il pas s'envoler 
Est-ce vous qui le retiendrez
Est-ce moi
Qu'est-ce que c'est

Il ne pourra s'en aller
Qu'après avoir tout mangé
Mon cœur
La source de sang
Avec la vie dedans

Il aura mon âme au bec. 

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Edit: My dad and I worked together to translate the poem to English. We had some disagreements but eventually came to this

Bird Cage

I am a bird cage
A bone cage
with a bird

The bird in its cage of bones
Death, making its nest

When it's quiet
We can hear it, rustling its feathers

And when we laugh a lot
If all suddenly ceases
We can hear it coo
In the background
Like a chime

It's a bird held captive
Death, in my cage of bones

If it wanted to fly away
Would you hold it back?
Would I?
What would?

It will only leave
After it's eaten it all
My heart
The blood source
Where life resides

With my soul in its beak



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 www.artstation.com/lansay


Prints:

www.inprnt.com/gallery/lansay/



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Comments: 63

umamuza37 [2023-02-09 09:21:46 +0000 UTC]

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Vianna006 [2021-05-05 20:09:57 +0000 UTC]

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icedragonsheart [2017-03-30 03:27:36 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


i think this piece is visually stunning! the color choices are magnificent. the sea green bird is a great contrast the the black boned cage he is in.the details within the skeleton are amazing. i didn't even notice the green liquid bleeding from his eyes until i looked harder. i love it when art doe that. the birds panicked and frantic expression along with the scattered feathers are a nice touch. it almost looks like its glowing and has a glassy texture which i think is beautiful. the back round color was a nice choice because it doesn't draw focus from the subject matter and it makes the black and green pop. over all, this is amazing and very creative. i guess if i had any constructive criticism, it would be that the back round could use some more work. this piece is great, its praise worthy. would also make a cool tattoo (sorry to go off on a a tangent haha).

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JackieVanDynamite [2018-06-16 04:31:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is really dark especially with the right poem that goes with it but the dark theme makes it beautiful

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Lapzidorus [2018-04-13 07:01:15 +0000 UTC]

I love the sense of movement in this piece, and the emerald color of the bird and the ooze really does work; in fact, the bird at first looked to me like some sort of energy "burst" for how the color and movement came together.
Aaand I just noticed the skeleton has a thin halo, ha!

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Charongess In reply to Lapzidorus [2018-04-13 14:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks! I find this to be the best piece I've ever made and I feel I've yet to complete something better. 

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hannxm [2017-04-29 18:19:41 +0000 UTC]

This is incredible. I wish I could draw like this. 

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Netoey [2017-04-24 10:16:52 +0000 UTC]

wow, these colours are beautiful, the dark aged black of the skeleton contrasted with the emerald raven makes it look stunning! 

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Charongess In reply to Netoey [2017-04-24 18:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Rhyn-Art [2017-04-10 12:43:43 +0000 UTC]

this is breathtaking, this is my fave. Good luck

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Charongess In reply to Rhyn-Art [2017-04-10 17:59:32 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks, that means a ton to me. I'm so nervous. I just want the winners to be announced already XD

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7MiLK [2017-04-10 04:21:25 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!
I hope M. Night Shyamalan sees your work! 

Good Luck!

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Charongess In reply to 7MiLK [2017-04-10 04:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Your work is amazing too. Good luck as well!

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7MiLK In reply to Charongess [2017-04-10 05:18:08 +0000 UTC]

aaa you're so nice thanks

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VactuART [2017-04-10 03:27:49 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!

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Charongess In reply to VactuART [2017-04-10 03:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^-^

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VactuART In reply to Charongess [2017-04-10 06:15:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Enayol [2017-04-09 23:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely wonderful  

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Charongess In reply to Enayol [2017-04-09 23:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Your entry is lovely as well

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Charafoot [2017-04-09 15:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow Amazing 

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descaiger [2017-04-07 17:15:13 +0000 UTC]

great

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DyedSugar [2017-04-07 03:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Love it

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SKETCHCARDMUSEUM [2017-04-07 02:13:13 +0000 UTC]

So far very few are understanding the rules  it seems...Where is the struggle?..whom is struggling and why?...story!!!!

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Milarcha [2017-04-05 13:50:28 +0000 UTC]

This is an interesting work. Brings to my mind an old Finnic myth: when a person dies their soul will fly away as a bird. 

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Charongess In reply to Milarcha [2017-04-06 21:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. Seems like a theme that can be found somewhere in a lot of cultures.

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Milarcha In reply to Charongess [2017-04-11 23:13:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, for sure. Birds seem to make people feel, umm, kinda spiritual. : D

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kittengorexx [2017-04-05 09:53:05 +0000 UTC]

Stunning~

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AngelaRizza [2017-04-04 21:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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Charongess In reply to AngelaRizza [2017-04-05 00:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Your art is amazing as well  

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Mr-Ripley [2017-04-04 03:53:07 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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delcattylover469 [2017-04-04 03:11:28 +0000 UTC]

This looks amazing!

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Charongess In reply to delcattylover469 [2017-04-04 03:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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delcattylover469 In reply to Charongess [2017-04-04 04:11:56 +0000 UTC]

np! ^-^

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DarkStorm-7 [2017-04-01 00:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Très belle pièce, très évocatrice. Le poème apporte une profondeur supplémentaire à l'oeuvre

Le tout est magnifique

   

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Charongess In reply to DarkStorm-7 [2017-04-01 01:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Merci. C'est ironique que je ne savait pas de tout que ce poème existait avant que j'ai fait cette pièce. Aussi, pardon, je ne sais pas comment ajouter les accents avec un clavier americain XD

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kitkatdreams [2017-03-31 23:26:40 +0000 UTC]

This is quite amazing. The shading is correct, The colors don't make your eyes bleed, its not blurry, and the art is VEARY good!
^u^

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Aliensvoid In reply to kitkatdreams [2017-04-08 06:44:20 +0000 UTC]

You've seen too many Mary sues. This is art, of course it won't be like that

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kitkatdreams In reply to Aliensvoid [2017-04-14 01:56:03 +0000 UTC]

VEARY true

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Charongess In reply to kitkatdreams [2017-04-01 00:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. That means a lot to me

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kitkatdreams In reply to Charongess [2017-04-14 01:56:10 +0000 UTC]

Np

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RavenTheLost [2017-03-31 15:50:58 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm french

And you're art is nice

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Charongess In reply to RavenTheLost [2017-03-31 21:43:14 +0000 UTC]

Merci

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Vitobrine [2017-03-31 14:43:27 +0000 UTC]

"Archimedes?"

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maikeru-mia [2017-03-31 14:24:44 +0000 UTC]

This is too deep

I fucking love it

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Blazer2017 [2017-03-31 13:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Bird is on the bonebody,
attempting to escape
but soul never taken
away from the same

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Earth-Dreamers [2017-03-31 12:39:38 +0000 UTC]

I love the concept and the perfect details. It's a really intriguing picture too

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Charongess In reply to Earth-Dreamers [2017-03-31 21:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Epic-Soldier [2017-03-30 21:55:29 +0000 UTC]

I love the shades of green used here ^^

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Charongess In reply to Epic-Soldier [2017-03-31 00:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Cyansky95 [2017-03-30 20:18:34 +0000 UTC]

I love this color combination, really nice job on the bones and feathers!

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