chibi-jackinthebox [2008-10-25 04:58:11 +0000 UTC]
Hi there ^_^ its a nice concept for a dress but there are a couple things I'd like to critique on...
The patterns clash, and it confuses the eye...so, too much pattern, it drowns out all the lovely details.
Also, not good quality lace. Lace shouldn't be scratchy and the stuff you get from places like wal-mart.
Better accessories, like a choker instead of a beaded necklace. Or a simple chain with some sort of a pendant.
Also the ribbon on the shoes stick out way too much, the focus should be on the dress. And if you want to add ribbons then make them subtle. The reds mash together in a blend of tackiness.
Also loli's don't show that much chest, so a nice blouse underneath would be very nice. And the gloves give it a bikerish feel...so maybe you could get some gloves that are lace? Or some that don't have the fingers cut off or some that go up your arms instead of stopping at the wrist.
Good luck in the future!
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