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Cheno-san — Alice of Human Sacrifice
Published: 2011-06-08 03:09:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1017; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 3
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Description The first ALICE was a gallant warrior woman from spade,
Skipping off through Wonderland was always with her blade.
Her aggressive nature showed to those who stood her path,
Up until, the earth soaked crimson to show her bloody wrath.

The first ALICE was sent to walk into the wood,
Judged as a sinner, was sentenced there for good.
Just like the murderous and horrid wake that thrived,
No one knew much about her and how she had lived.

The second ALICE was a brave young man from diamond,
Singing distorted melodies to all of Wonderland.
His words twisted and became the song of disturbed,
The noise did echo of maddness which made people perturbed.

The second ALICE was a delicate rose, and flower
Marred by symphony he fell to suicidal power.
His final, dying gift he gave, was without a sound,
The rosebush did grow so well, and was known all around.

The third ALICE was a tiny dainty daughter from clover,
Her desired figure meant she, had many a proposer.
She seduced, the people with a promised fantasy,
Eventually, she ruled them all, what's there not to see?

The third ALICE rose to become the sovereign queen,
But she became marred by dark and morbid dream.
She sees rotting flesh and takes on a vanity,
Veiled as kind, she keeps the crown for all eternity.

Just follow, the bloody path we'll make it there soon,
Under the roses, we'll have a tea party at noon.
The invitation to the castle that was marred,
The letter is a small playing card.

The fourth ALICE were two curious children from the heart,
They have looked alike from birth and were never apart.
Rashly entering Wonderland, straying from the rest,
They made bogus doors to lands filled of sinful jest.

The older sister sickening, the brother adopted falsehood,
They strayed off from the path and now are lost for good.

They will never wake up from their dreams as the have planned,
Forever they will claw through the labryinth called Wonderland.
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Comments: 19

TotallyDeviantLisa [2015-12-14 22:52:43 +0000 UTC]

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domo-chu [2011-08-24 00:16:08 +0000 UTC]

I like your version alot! as with everyone else i am confused about the twins fate? but like the one version where len kills rin and walks off with her body, forever staying beyond the door's knob's reach.
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ahem anyway, i made some ocs for vocaloid and was wondering if you would like to hear their parts of the song, and well edit it and make it cool..

"also (just a request) could you make one for luka?

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TheLadyOfBlack [2011-08-12 11:39:54 +0000 UTC]

good job!

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Cheno-san In reply to TheLadyOfBlack [2011-08-12 22:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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TheLadyOfBlack In reply to Cheno-san [2011-08-13 12:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! ^_^

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StArBarD [2011-06-10 02:43:08 +0000 UTC]

good job! Really good for a first time!!

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Cheno-san In reply to StArBarD [2011-06-10 02:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thanks a lot!

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TokyoFlashback [2011-06-08 18:05:48 +0000 UTC]

I get the part about Meiko, Kaito, and Miku.
But I'm still wondering what happened to the twins.

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Cheno-san In reply to TokyoFlashback [2011-06-08 21:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, sorry about that

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TokyoFlashback In reply to Cheno-san [2011-06-09 16:53:22 +0000 UTC]

Its not ur fault.
I've listened to the song a load of times and I'm still questioning the twins fate

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Cheno-san In reply to TokyoFlashback [2011-06-09 21:13:01 +0000 UTC]

True, I'm usually confused about, that too. I think either they get lost or somehow they get killed. (or inbred chlildren?)

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TokyoFlashback In reply to Cheno-san [2011-06-09 21:33:52 +0000 UTC]

I think they were trapped because of this video [link] or they were killed by the criminally insane Meiko here [link]
or they were killed WHILE they were dreaming here [link]

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Cheno-san In reply to TokyoFlashback [2011-06-09 21:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Meh, I guess it's up to everyone to decide.

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TokyoFlashback In reply to Cheno-san [2011-06-10 18:52:03 +0000 UTC]

:iconY-Y-NOplz: VOCALOID WHY U VIDEOS SO CONFUSING?1?!?!?

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VielBlackheart22 [2011-06-08 10:23:43 +0000 UTC]

It's nice I like it

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Cheno-san In reply to VielBlackheart22 [2011-06-08 21:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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VielBlackheart22 In reply to Cheno-san [2011-06-09 00:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Np^^

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missBLfan-backup [2011-06-08 03:13:10 +0000 UTC]

I think it's great!!! i love this song by the vocaloids X3

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Cheno-san In reply to missBLfan-backup [2011-06-08 03:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Same, and I'm glad you like it!

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