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Published: 2015-03-13 18:41:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 904; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 0
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Description When our trip to Wismar came to an end and we walked back to our car i noticed these cranes behind some houses and decided to run around the houses to have a last look ...maybe there is a last picture . This was what i saw there .

The picture is made from 3 RAW photos
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Comments: 20

Norski [2015-03-14 19:40:08 +0000 UTC]

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Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This reminds me, in a general way, of Edward Hopper's paingings: Lighthouse at Two Lights, and Gas, for example. I think it's the subject, and general focus on - forms?

Composition doesn't, quite, follow the 'rule of thirds,' which is more of a suggest than ironclad principle. My opinion.

I'd probably have boosted contrast, making the derricks into silhouettes: but that's the artist's choice.

Good range of tone, form white to (near?) black, variety of color too: with blue shades and tones above and below separated by a yellow and orange band. Nice. Again, my opinion.

On a strictly subjective level, I appreciate seeing an industrial setting presented as it is: with its own beauty.

About my rating: bear in mind that I'm a tough audience. Five stars has to be - - - absolutely top-rate. The sort of thing that folks could be discussing a century from now.

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chevyhax In reply to Norski [2015-03-14 21:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Brian for your critique It was the first one I got and i am really happy to get a feedback like this . For me it is always very interesting how others see my pictures and i need it to get better I am not an profesional educated photographer and try to show the world around me as i see it ... honestly i know the rule of thirds but i never mentioned it when i took photos ...maybe i should but on the other hand sometimes it is also interesting to break the rules However i am really happyΒ that you took your time to write what you think about my picture and i thank you very much for your kind words Β 

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Norski In reply to chevyhax [2015-03-15 02:57:03 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

About the rule of thirds - bear in mind that I'm a hobbyist, not a professional - I've got a 'thirds' grid I use when making my pictures. But the 'ready for posting' version isn't necessarily lined up with the grid. Like I said, I take it as a suggestion: not a 'must be obeyed' rule.

Like you said, 'breaking the rules' can be interesting - and occasionally rewarding.

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WendyMitchell [2015-03-25 08:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations! This work has been included in our latest Wonderful Wednesdays feature!

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chevyhax In reply to WendyMitchell [2015-03-25 18:07:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Wendy Β Β 

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BillyNikoll [2015-03-16 00:36:29 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

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chevyhax In reply to BillyNikoll [2015-03-16 19:27:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much !!! IΒ΄m glad you like it Β Β Β 

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miirex [2015-03-14 21:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Good work

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chevyhax In reply to miirex [2015-03-14 23:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Mirek !!

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miirex In reply to chevyhax [2015-03-15 15:33:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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untuox [2015-03-14 12:40:01 +0000 UTC]

Very good technically and aesthetically perfect and balanced shot.

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chevyhax In reply to untuox [2015-03-14 21:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much !! IΒ΄m not an expert in technikal amd asthetic aspects i just try to photograph what i like So your kind words mean a lot lot for me

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untuox In reply to chevyhax [2015-03-15 11:36:10 +0000 UTC]

You are in a good way...

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drshaggy [2015-03-14 07:59:52 +0000 UTC]

great shot

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chevyhax In reply to drshaggy [2015-03-14 09:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Martin

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Eliasome [2015-03-14 05:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Great shot with wonderful colors!Β  Quite a clear view of the cranes, I wonder why all the slips in the foreground are empty.

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chevyhax In reply to Eliasome [2015-03-14 07:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Keith !! It was the first warm day this year when i took this photo ...Β I guess in a few weeks it will be full f boats there

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ansdesign [2015-03-13 18:58:56 +0000 UTC]

It's a beauty, Oli!

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chevyhax In reply to ansdesign [2015-03-13 19:12:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Ans . I was happy that i took a last look at this place this evening

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ansdesign In reply to chevyhax [2015-03-13 19:46:06 +0000 UTC]

I can imagine you were!! It is a wonderful capture and you know...cranes have a certain elegance in their movements...I like them!

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